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The Old Man and His Sons

"A test of wisdom, love, and legacy."

By Maaz AliPublished 9 months ago 2 min read

One journey, three destinies.

Once in a quiet village, there lived an old man named Rahim. He was a humble farmer, known for his wisdom and honesty. Rahim had three sons—Ayan, Bilal, and Daniyal—each different in nature. Ayan was strong and bold, Bilal was clever and curious, while Daniyal was kind and thoughtful.

As Rahim grew older and his health began to fade, he called his sons to his bedside. “My time is near,” he said gently. “But before I go, I want each of you to take a different path to find your own way in life. Only then will you understand the meaning of family, struggle, and purpose.”

The next morning, Rahim gave each son a simple gift—a small bag of seeds. “Plant these wherever your journey takes you,” he said. “Nurture them, and they will teach you more than I ever could.”

Ayan's Path

Ayan journeyed to a nearby town and used his strength to build a farm. He planted the seeds with determination, working day and night. In time, he became successful and respected, but also proud and distant. He forgot the lessons of patience and humility.

Bilal's Path

Bilal went to the city, where he sold the seeds to buy books and start a business. His cleverness brought him wealth quickly. But his success made him distrustful and greedy. He ignored his father’s lesson about nurturing and giving back.

Daniyal's Path

Daniyal, the quiet one, wandered to a small village where the people struggled with poor soil. Instead of keeping the seeds for himself, he shared them with the villagers. Together, they planted, watered, and waited. Slowly, the land flourished. Daniyal stayed with them, becoming a teacher, friend, and leader.

The Return

Years later, the three sons returned to their childhood home after hearing of their father’s passing. In the center of the farm, they found a tall, beautiful tree growing—one from the same seeds Rahim had given them. Beneath it was a note:

“To grow something truly meaningful, you must give, not just take. Life is not about the path you choose, but how you walk it, and who you help along the way.”

The three brothers looked at each other—silent, but changed. Each had taken a different journey, but now they understood: their destinies were never separate. They were always part of one story—a father's love, and the seeds of wisdom he had sown.

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About the Creator

Maaz Ali

Telling stories that inspire, entertain, and spark thought. From fables to real-life reflections—every word with purpose. Writer | Dreamer | Storyteller.

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