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The Observer

He became what he found.

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 2 months ago • Updated 2 months ago • 2 min read

What we find may cost much more than we know.

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It was another evening of no social calls or friends for Albert Monterio — the introverted historian genuinely preferred archiving subjects for historical research.

Everyone had gone home to their families for the evening — all but him.

The archives were empty -- and profoundly silent.

Too silent.

He combed the stoically silent shelves.

In the strange quiet there was a stack of photographs from the 1946 bombardment of Haiphong.

One photograph stood out.

A photo that disobeyed its own era.

An anomaly hiding among sepia images.

And a strange rustling that he shouldn't have felt.

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Albert grabbed a magnifying glass and focused on the odd,

out-of-place mark.

Everything was in ruins.

Pieces of zinc roofing were scattered on the pavements.

Smoke billowed from surrounding debris.

Two soldiers lifted a seriously wounded comrade who was attempting to walk.

Amid it all stood a child, grasping an object that was out of place for its time -- a modern smartphone.

Albert shook his head.

Probably some debris the kid picked up, he thought.

But the anomaly only sharpened --

on Logic's defying path.

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A second envelope fell from the archive bookshelf.

A similar photograph.

With him, fully present, in the frame.

The child's device showed a timestamp -- the present day's date.

The photo shimmered, and tiny sketches appeared at the corners.

A temple he was familiar with -- bombed.

A street, newly built, shattering in pieces.

Smoke billowing from the debris.

The young boy showed disaster.

Showed change.

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And true to that, the photograph --

Changed.

The child's gaze had shifted --

Through the screen.

Ever so slightly, staring Albert in the face.

And then --

His outline materialising where it should not have been.

Standing, motionless, beside the child's.

With tomorrow's date flashing on the screen's right.

Albert hadn't been merely observing history -- he had become it.

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The child's device showed a timestamp -- today's date.

The time -- a minute into the future.

Albert lying slumped in his chair in the archive.

A smile etched on his face.

He had found what he had to.

And become what he had found.

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Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.

In honour of the Battle of Haiphong which happened this day in 1946.

For Mikeydred's November Challenge

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    😮😮😮😮 great job!!

  • Oh wow, that was so intriguing. Loved your story!

  • Lana V Lynx2 months ago

    Wow, what a cautionary tale, Michelle! I know that one day smartphones and AI will kill us all.

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