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The Night the Stars Refused to Shine

A metaphorical fable or fantasy story with high emotional stakes.

By ZIA ULLAH KHANPublished 7 months ago 4 min read

The Night the Stars Refused to Shine

by ZIA ULLAH KHAN

No one knows exactly why the stars stopped shining that night.

At first, people thought it was clouds—thick, gray smudges smeared across the sky by a careless god. But the air was dry, the sky was clear, and the moon hung silently, alone. The stars, all of them, had simply… vanished.

Not fallen. Not dimmed. Gone.

Some said it was an omen. Others whispered of war, or the end of time, or the gods turning their backs on humankind. But the elders of the village of Tirenne told a different story, one older than language, passed down through wind and bone.

They said the stars could feel sorrow.

And that when grief in the world grew too heavy, too sharp, the stars turned their faces away, unable to bear the weight of our mourning.

That night, in the cottage beneath the twisted elm, a girl named Kaia sat alone with her lantern flickering low. Her brother, Ren, had died three days before. He had been thirteen, full of mischief and music, and one careless river swallowed him whole.

Now Kaia sat with silence thick around her, chewing her grief slowly, like bread too dry to swallow. Her mother had stopped speaking. Her father had broken the lute Ren loved. The villagers sent offerings and dishes Kaia could not taste.

And the stars—the stars, who had always been her secret companions, her midnight confidants—were gone.

Kaia could not sleep. So she did what Ren would have done: she climbed out her window, wrapped in a cloak far too big, and wandered into the woods.

She walked until the air felt different—cooler, listening. In the center of the woods stood the Mirror Tree, ancient and hollow. Its bark shimmered faintly like silver and obsidian, and in its hollow trunk, legends said, you could ask the world a question. If the world thought you worthy, it would answer.

Kaia stood before it. “Why did the stars leave?” she asked aloud.

The tree said nothing.

She pressed her hands against the bark. “What if I bring them back?”

The bark was cool and smooth. And then it rippled.

Kaia gasped as a hole opened just wide enough for her to step through.

Inside was not the hollow of a tree, but a skyless void filled with memory-light. Colors pulsed without source. A low hum, like the breath of mountains, filled her ears.

And at the center stood a woman of shadow and stars.

Her eyes held galaxies, but they wept rivers of light.

"You are grieving," the woman said, her voice like the hush of snowfall.

Kaia nodded. “Everyone is. That’s why you left, isn’t it? Why the stars left?”

The woman stepped forward, her dress flickering with long-forgotten constellations. "The stars do not leave. They close their eyes. Like anyone who cannot bear to watch the pain of those they love."

Kaia clenched her fists. “Then open them. Please. People are scared. I—I can’t remember my brother’s face without the stars. He loved them. He said they made the world feel big enough to hold all his dreams.”

The woman looked down. “And what about his sorrow?”

Kaia flinched. “He didn’t show that.”

“Then he gave it to the sky.”

The void trembled. Images flared—Kaia and Ren building boats from bark, racing shadows through fields, whispering secrets into jars to bury like treasure.

And then, quieter things. Ren crying when he thought no one saw. Ren standing alone at the edge of the river. Ren writing something in the dirt and wiping it away.

“Why are you showing me this?” Kaia whispered.

“Because the stars see all things,” the woman said. “And they weep, just as you do. Just as your brother did.”

Kaia dropped to her knees. Her heart was too loud, her sorrow too full.

“I miss him,” she said simply.

The woman knelt with her. “Then carry him.”

“I don’t know how.”

“Then I will teach you.”

The woman touched Kaia’s forehead, and warmth flooded her chest—a heat like music, like memory. In that moment, Kaia saw her brother not as he had died, but as he had lived: laughing, dreaming, hurting, hoping. Not perfect. Not a ghost. Just real.

“Grief is not something to silence,” the woman said. “It is a song to be learned. One note at a time.”

Kaia stood slowly. “If I carry him... will the stars open their eyes?”

“If you carry him, you will not need them to.”

Kaia blinked, confused. But the woman only smiled.

And then, the void unraveled.

Kaia awoke beneath the elm tree, dew on her cloak, a pulse of warmth still in her chest. The village still slept. The sky was still dark.

But above her—one by one—the stars began to blink awake.

They did not blaze. They glowed gently, as if stretching after long sleep. They did not return to banish grief, but to share it. To witness it. To remind the world: you are not alone in your sorrow.

Kaia smiled softly.

That night, the stars returned.

But more importantly—Kaia did, too.

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About the Creator

ZIA ULLAH KHAN

A lifelong storyteller with a love for science fiction and mythology. Sci-fi and fantasy enthusiast crafting otherworldly tales and quirky characters. Powered by caffeine and curiosity.

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  • Huzaifa Dzine6 months ago

    nice

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