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The Mystery of the Water Painting

The mystery of the water painting

By MD. RAFIQUL ISLAM MURAD Published about a year ago 3 min read
The Water Painting

Nestled between rows of abandoned houses in Kalighat's old town was an old art shop. Mr. Sinha, the owner, was well-known for collecting uncommon and enigmatic paintings. One of these treasures caught everyone's attention: the water painting.

It was a canvas that showed a placid lake encircled by tall trees with a gentle mist hovering over it. However, there was something unnerving about the painting. The air felt frigid, and the water appeared to be rippled, almost alive.

Neha was a curious young artist who had heard a lot of things about the artwork. Some claimed that the lake in the photo was a portal rather than merely a photograph. Others murmured of odd things that happened to persons who stared at the image for an extended period of time.

Until one day, when she made the decision to see it for herself, she had always written these stories off as local folklore.

The shop was as dim and dusty as Neha had imagined. Old bookshelves lined the walls, and the faint smell of parchment filled the air. Mr. Sinha, a frail old man with sharp eyes, greeted her warmly but seemed to know why she was there. Without a word, he led her to the back of the shop, where the water painting hung.

For a moment, Neha stood frozen. The painting was even more mesmerizing in person. The lake shimmered under an unseen light, the mist swirling gently above it.

The trees appeared so real that Neha almost felt like she could reach out and touch the bark. But it was the water—it moved. Not in the way a painting’s brushstrokes create an illusion, but as though the water itself was alive, rippling gently under a phantom breeze.

“How... how does it do that?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.

Mr. Sinha chuckled softly, though there was no warmth in it. “Many have asked that question,” he replied, “but few have dared to find out the answer.”

Neha felt a chill crawl up her spine. The air seemed to grow colder the longer she looked. She turned to Mr. Sinha, her curiosity battling with a growing sense of dread. “What’s the story behind this painting?”

He paused for a moment, eyes fixed on the canvas. “They say it was painted by a man who disappeared shortly after its completion. Legend has it, he captured more than just an image of the lake. He captured... its essence.”

Neha frowned. “Essence? What do you mean?”

“The lake,” he continued, “was rumored to hold a secret—something dark, hidden beneath its calm waters. The painter, in his obsession, managed to trap that darkness in this very painting. Now, anyone who looks too long, anyone who gets too close...” His voice trailed off, leaving an ominous silence in its wake.

Neha’s heart raced. She felt an inexplicable pull toward the painting, her eyes drawn back to the rippling water. The mist seemed thicker now, swirling faster, and for a split second, she thought she saw something beneath the surface—a shadow.

“Is that...?” she gasped, stepping closer.

Mr. Sinha grabbed her arm, his grip surprisingly strong for an old man. “Do not get too close,” he warned, his voice stern. “The painting is cursed.”

But it was too late. Neha had already felt the connection, the lure of the water. The more she stared, the more the world around her seemed to fade. The shop, Mr. Sinha, everything began to blur. All that remained was the painting—and the shadow beneath the lake’s surface, which was now moving, rising toward her.

Suddenly, the ripple in the water turned into violent waves, crashing against invisible shores. The trees in the painting bent and swayed as if caught in a storm. Neha couldn’t look away.

Her breath caught in her throat as the shadow grew larger, taking shape—taking form. It was no longer just a painting. It was real. The lake was real.

A sharp laugh echoed in the room, though it was not from Mr. Sinha. Neha turned, her body trembling, but saw nothing. The sound was coming from inside the painting. And then, without warning, the water in the painting surged forward, spilling out of the frame.

“No!” Mr. Sinha shouted, trying to pull Neha back, but it was too late.

The water enveloped her, cold and suffocating, dragging her into the painting’s depths. The last thing she heard was the eerie laughter, and then... silence.

The painting, now still once more, hung on the wall, its water calm, its mist peaceful. But if one looked closely, deep within the water, they might see a new shadow—a figure, trapped beneath the surface, waiting for the next curious soul to gaze too long into the mystery of the water painting.

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