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The Moon and the Fisherman’s Promise

He promised to meet her where the sea and sky touch. He just never knew she was waiting in the reflection.

By HabibullahPublished 3 months ago 4 min read

Old Man Kael was a fixture of the coastal village, as permanent as the cliffs and as solitary as the lighthouse. For fifty years, he had done the same thing on the night of the full moon. While others slept, he would push his small, wooden skiff into the black water and row. He wouldn't cast his nets. He would simply row to the same spot, far from shore, where the world was reduced to water and sky.

He called it "Keeping his promise."

When he was a young man, he had loved a woman named Elara. Her eyes were the colour of the sea under a summer sky, and her laughter was the only sound that could calm a storm in his heart. On the last night they were together, before she left for the city, promising to return, they stood on this very shore.

“Where will you be when you miss me?” she had asked, her voice soft.

“Here,” he’d said, looking at the full moon’s reflection shattered on the waves. “I’ll be right here, where the water holds the sky.”

“Then I’ll find you there,” she’d whispered. “I promise.”

Elara never returned. A storm, a sickness, a change of heart—the news was vague and the wound was deep. The village assumed Kael grieved and moved on. They didn't see the ritual. They didn't know about the promise.

For fifty full moons, he kept his word. He would row out, sit in his boat, and watch the path of moonlight on the water. He spoke to Elara in his mind, telling her about the village, the fishing, the slow passage of a life lived alone. He wasn't waiting for a ship to bring her back. He was simply keeping their appointed meeting, a silent vigil for a ghost.

The Moon, a silent witness to all of Earth's dramas, watched him. She saw his youthful hope slowly harden into a faithful, aching routine. She saw his hair turn from jet black to silver, mirroring her own light. She admired his stubborn, beautiful loyalty. It was a quality she understood, bound as she was to her own eternal, solitary path.

On the fiftieth anniversary, Kael was tired. His bones ached with the damp, and his heart felt heavy as a waterlogged net. He rowed to the spot, the silver path on the water seeming fainter than ever. For the first time, a thought crossed his mind: This is the last time. I cannot do this anymore.

He spoke aloud into the vast, quiet night, his voice a dry rasp. “I’m sorry, Elara. I can’t find you anymore.”

As the words left his lips, a strange thing happened. The water around his boat, usually choppy and dark, grew perfectly still. It became a pane of black glass. The reflection of the Moon on its surface didn’t just brighten; it solidified, becoming a tangible, shimmering road of liquid silver leading from the horizon directly to his boat.

Hesitantly, Kael dipped an oar into the luminous path. The oar didn't break the surface; it was accepted, and a warm, peaceful feeling traveled up the wood and into his weary hands.

He looked up at the Moon itself. It seemed… closer. Kinder.

Then, he saw her.

Walking down the silvery path, as if it were solid ground, was a woman made of moonlight and memory. It was Elara, not as the old woman she would have been, but as the young woman he remembered, her form woven from starlight and sea spray. She was a reflection, a beautiful echo held in the Moon’s keeping.

She reached his boat and smiled, her eyes holding the same summer-sea blue.

“You kept your promise,” she said, her voice the sound of gentle waves on a shore.

Tears streamed down Kael’s weathered face. “You… you came.”

“I never left,” she whispered. “You just had to know where to look. You were always looking at the water, my love. But I was in the light.”

She held out her hand. It was not a hand of flesh, but it was real. He took it. It felt like warmth and peace and the end of a long, long journey.

He didn't step onto the path. He simply sat, holding her luminous hand, as the full moon shone down upon them. They talked. He told her everything he had stored up for fifty years. She listened, her presence a balm for a lifetime of loneliness.

When the first hint of dawn tinged the eastern sky, Elara’s form began to soften, blending back into the fading moonlight.

“It’s time for you to go home, Kael,” she said gently.

“Will you be here?” he asked, his voice full of a hope he hadn't felt in decades.

“As long as the moon draws the tide,” she replied. “And you know where to find me.”

She faded, leaving only the scent of salt and night-blooming jasmine.

Kael rowed back to shore as the sun rose. The villagers saw him and remarked that he looked different. Lighter. The deep sorrow that had lived in his eyes for so long was gone, replaced by a quiet, profound peace.

He never took his boat out on the full moon again. The vigil was over. The promise had been kept.

But sometimes, on clear nights, he would walk to the end of the old pier, look out at the moonlit sea, and smile. He wasn't waiting anymore. He was visiting. For he had finally learned that some promises are not about reunion in the world of the living, but about a love so steadfast it can build a bridge of light across the chasm of time itself, with the Moon as its eternal, faithful architect.

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Habibullah

Storyteller of worlds seen & unseen ✨ From real-life moments to pure imagination, I share tales that spark thought, wonder, and smiles daily

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