Fiction logo

The Mirror That Spoke

It started as a whisper in the reflection—then it called my name.

By Malaika PioletPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

When I moved into the old house on Willow Street, I wasn’t looking for a mystery. I just wanted peace — somewhere quiet enough to forget the city, the noise, and my ex-fiancé’s shadow that still lingered in my apartment walls.

The house came fully furnished, but one item caught my eye the moment I stepped in: an antique mirror hanging in the hallway. Tall, oval, framed in tarnished silver. It looked like something that had seen too much.

I asked the landlord about it.

He said, “It’s been here longer than the house itself.”

I laughed, thinking he was joking.

He wasn’t.

The first time it happened, I was brushing my hair before bed. The lights flickered, just for a second, and when I looked back up — my reflection smiled before I did.

My brush slipped from my hand.

I blinked, heart racing. The mirror showed nothing unusual. Just me, pale and tired.

“Get a grip,” I whispered. It had been a long move-in day. I blamed exhaustion.

But the next night, it whispered back.

It was soft, almost like a breath against my ear.

“You can’t run from what you buried.”

I froze. The house was silent, every window shut tight. I stared at my reflection — and this time, she wasn’t still. Her lips moved.

I screamed and ran to the bedroom, slamming the door.

When I gathered the courage to look the next morning, the mirror was fogged over — as if someone had exhaled against it.

Three words were written there, faint but visible:

“Find the box.”

I tried to ignore it. But curiosity is a dangerous kind of hunger.

I searched every corner of that hallway. Behind the mirror, beneath the floorboards, inside the walls.

Finally, I found it — a small wooden box hidden inside the back of the mirror’s frame. Old, locked, wrapped in a faded ribbon.

The key? I didn’t have one. But the lock broke easily.

Inside was a folded letter, yellowed with age.

“To whoever finds this, know that this mirror keeps what we cannot face. Once you see what it shows, it becomes part of you. I tried to destroy it. I failed.”

At the bottom was a name:

Eleanor Hart. 1893.

That night, I dreamed of her — a woman with hollow eyes, her reflection standing behind her, whispering secrets she didn’t want to hear.

I woke up gasping, drenched in sweat. The mirror glowed faintly in the darkness, its silver frame pulsing like a heartbeat.

And then I heard my name.

“Lila.”

It wasn’t a voice from outside.

It came from inside the glass.

The reflection wasn’t me anymore.

It was Eleanor — older, broken, crying. “Help me,” she mouthed, palms pressed against the glass.

I reached out instinctively, my hand trembling — and the surface rippled, like water disturbed by wind.

A cold hand grabbed mine.

I screamed and yanked away, falling backward. The mirror cracked, a single line slicing through the glass like lightning.

For two days, I refused to go near it.

But then strange things began to happen — shadows moving when I wasn’t, whispers echoing from the walls. My reflection in other mirrors started lagging a second behind.

It was as if the mirror had followed me.

Desperate, I called a historian I found online who specialized in “spiritual artifacts.” I sent her a picture of the cracked mirror.

She called me that night, terrified.

“Lila, that mirror belonged to the Hart family. Eleanor wasn’t real. She was the reflection — created after her twin died. The family said the mirror learned her voice.”

I stared at the mirror, breathless.

“So what do I do?”

Her voice dropped.

“Don’t look at it again. Ever.”

But it was too late.

The next morning, the crack was gone. My reflection looked normal again.

Until it blinked — and I didn’t.

She smiled.

“You opened the box, Lila. Now it’s your turn.”

The mirror’s surface shimmered, pulling like gravity. I tried to step back — but my feet wouldn’t move. The world around me began to fade into silver.

The last thing I saw before everything went dark was my reflection — stepping out of the mirror.

And she whispered with my own voice,

“I told you, you can’t run from what you buried.”

I don’t know where I am now.

Everything here looks familiar — but not quite right. The air hums, and every surface reflects light even when there’s no source.

Sometimes, I hear footsteps in the hallway — mine, but not mine.

And somewhere, far away, in another world, someone wearing my face is brushing her hair in the hallway mirror of a house on Willow Street.

💭 Ending Thought :

Sometimes reflections aren’t what they show — they’re what they hide.

Fan FictionFantasyHorrorMysterythriller

About the Creator

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.