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The Man Who Turned Back Time

A Journey to the Past, But Not Without a Price

By ChxsePublished 10 months ago 4 min read
The Man Who Turned Back Time
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Elliot had always felt like he was running in place. He was the kind of man who, at the end of each day, sat on his worn-out couch and stared at the clock on the wall, watching the hands move forward. Every tick felt like a reminder that his life was slipping through his fingers—slowly, steadily, but irretrievably. It wasn’t that his life was horrible. It was just… ordinary. Routine. He had a job he didn’t love, a small apartment he barely decorated, and a series of missed opportunities that haunted his thoughts at night.

One evening, after yet another lackluster day of filing papers in a dimly-lit office, Elliot found himself walking home through an unfamiliar part of town. He wasn’t lost—he had simply decided to take a different route, a slight deviation from his usual path. Maybe, he thought, a little variety could shake him out of this dullness.

As he turned the corner, he saw an old, run-down pawn shop with a dusty neon sign that flickered above the door. The shop didn’t look like it belonged in the modern world; it looked more like a relic from another time. Curious, Elliot stepped inside.

The air smelled faintly of old books and something he couldn’t quite place—perhaps regret, or memories. The shop was packed with dusty trinkets, faded paintings, and forgotten things that had once belonged to someone, somewhere, at some point.

At the counter stood a man with an ageless face, his skin weathered but eyes sharp. He gave Elliot a small nod.

"Looking for anything in particular?" the man asked in a voice that was both soft and heavy, like it had carried years of secrets.

Elliot shrugged. "I don’t know... just browsing, I guess."

The man smiled knowingly and motioned toward a shelf in the back of the store. "That one’s for the lost," he said, pointing to a small, unremarkable pocket watch.

Elliot felt an odd pull toward the object, as if the watch had been calling to him, silently begging him to take it. He walked over, picked it up, and immediately felt something shift in the air. The watch was old, its gold-plated edges worn from use, but the face was pristine, like it had never seen a day of age. The second hand moved smoothly—too smoothly—and for a moment, Elliot was lost in the rhythmic tick-tock.

“What is this?” he asked.

The shopkeeper’s voice grew softer. “That, my friend, is a special watch. It doesn’t just tell time... it can turn it back.”

Elliot let out a short, disbelieving laugh. “Turn back time? Right. Like a time machine.”

The man didn’t laugh. His eyes were steady. "Not a machine. A moment. You can turn back time for a brief second, an hour, a day, even a year. It’s up to you. But understand this—time is a river. You can dive in, but the currents will pull you somewhere unexpected. You may get what you want, but it will come with a price."

Elliot had no idea why, but he believed him. Maybe it was the desperation in his own heart, maybe it was the aching feeling that time was slipping away from him faster than he could grasp it. Without thinking, he handed over the money and walked out with the pocket watch in his hand.

That night, he sat on his couch, staring at the watch. The quiet ticking seemed louder than it should have been. Without even thinking, Elliot twisted the crown and closed his eyes.

Suddenly, everything around him blurred. The world around him spun like he was caught in a vortex, and when the dizziness stopped, he was no longer on his couch. He stood in front of the coffee shop he used to visit five years ago, the one where he had met Rachel for the first time. She had smiled at him, and they had spent hours talking about everything and nothing.

He had let her slip away—out of his life, out of his heart—and now, here he was, a man standing in front of his past, with the power to change it.

Elliot could hear his younger self laughing with Rachel in the distance. His heart pounded in his chest. What if he could tell her how he felt? What if he didn’t let her go?

But then, just as quickly, he felt that pull again. The weight of the shopkeeper’s words, the warning of consequences, settled on him. Could he really change things? Would it make a difference?

With a deep breath, he twisted the watch again and found himself back on his couch, the world stabilizing around him. The clock on the wall ticked forward, but this time, Elliot was different.

The memory of Rachel, of that moment where he could’ve stayed and fought for her, hung heavily in his mind. He could still feel the warmth of that coffee shop, the promise of something more. But it was gone, a distant echo.

Days passed, and Elliot tried again and again. Each time, he turned back the clock—once for a job he regretted not taking, once for a conversation with an old friend he never reached out to. Each time, he was given a moment to relive, to undo something that haunted him. But with each change, something else shifted. People acted differently. The world was off-balance, like trying to fix a puzzle with pieces that didn’t quite fit anymore.

Finally, after a week of trying and failing, Elliot sat at the same spot, the pocket watch resting in his hand. He stared at it, and for the first time, he understood.

Time wasn’t meant to be reversed. It wasn’t about fixing regrets. It was about moving forward, learning from what came before, and making the most of what you had left. The power to turn back time was both a gift and a curse—a constant reminder that nothing could stay the same forever.

Elliot put the watch down, his fingers lingering for just a moment on its cold surface. He wasn’t sure what would happen to it now, but he knew one thing for certain: he couldn’t keep trying to go backward. It was time to move on.

And as the world ticked on, Elliot finally learned how to stop running in place.

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About the Creator

Chxse

Constantly learning & sharing insights. I’m here to inspire, challenge, and bring a bit of humor to your feed.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    I want a Time Machine and a cookie! Great work! Amazing story!

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