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The Line Before Silence

A Late-Night Call That Served as a Quiet Goodbye

By lin yanPublished 29 days ago 2 min read

At 11:47 p.m., the phone rang as I was pouring the last mouthful of cold tea into the sink. The ring was brief and restrained, like two light knocks at the door, followed by a careful step back.

I glanced at the caller ID. It was a name that hadn’t lit up my screen in a long time.

We hadn’t spoken for three years. The last time was after a hurried farewell. The signal had been poor; her voice kept breaking up, like scraps of paper scattered by the wind. So many things went unsaid before a simple “Let’s leave it here” brought the call to an end.

I answered.

“Is now a good time?” she asked.

It was quiet on her end—too quiet for a city night. No traffic, no elevator chime, not even the sound of wind. In that moment, I realized our lives had drifted into places neither of us could fully imagine anymore.

“It is,” I said.

She didn’t continue right away. Her breath paused for a second, as if she were making sure the line still held. Then she began talking about small things: a new bakery downstairs, its display window glowing warmly around an oversized croissant; the neighbor’s cat that stepped onto her windowsill every night around dawn; how she had been waking up early lately, with no real idea what to do with the extra hours.

There was no order to these details, no clear purpose. She wasn’t waiting for my responses—just speaking. The call became a river, carrying away the fragments of her day that no one else had caught.

From time to time, I murmured a reply, or added a harmless comment. Mostly, I listened to the silence on my side of the line. It wasn’t empty. It was filled with old scenes: streets we had walked together, laughter shared where the signal was weakest, and nights we once believed would go on forever.

“What about you?” she finally asked.

I thought for a moment and realized I had almost nothing to say. Work, weather, daily routines—words worn thin from repetition, stripped of weight. So I simply said, “Still here.”

She laughed softly. It was a low, brief sound, and it made me understand that the meaning of this call had never been about exchanging information.

“I might be changing my number,” she said. “So I thought I’d… call once.”

She didn’t emphasize it, but the sentence landed like a small nail driven into time. Suddenly, the call had a limit.

Neither of us asked why. Adults are skilled at choosing not to see too clearly where it matters most. She went on with a few more inconsequential remarks. I kept listening, replying now and then, as if keeping the rhythm for a melody about to end.

When she said, “I won’t keep you any longer,” I knew this time it was truly goodbye.

“Okay,” I said.

“Take care.”

“You too.”

The moment the call ended, the room returned to its usual stillness. There was no sharp sense of loss, no relief—only a clear understanding: some relationships don’t survive on reunion, but on a proper farewell, carefully completed.

I placed the phone face down on the table. The screen went dark, like a door closing. The call was over, but the line that once connected us had fulfilled its final purpose.

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lin yan

Jotting down thoughts, capturing life, and occasionally writing some fiction.

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