The Letters to Eleanor
The Sister Who Lived in Stories

Every evening, as the sun set, Anna sat by the window with a stack of worn letters resting in her lap. The paper was yellowed, edges softened by time, the ink faded like memories drifting through her hands. Each letter bore a name in looping script. Eleanor, the name of someone who had shaped Anna’s days without ever truly existing.
The first letter began simply:
Dear Eleanor,
Today, I walked along the old path we imagined together. The trees stood tall, their branches sharing secrets the wind carried away. I wonder if you saw it too.
Anna never expected an answer. The letters were a ritual, a conversation with an absence that filled the room as tangibly as a visitor. Eleanor was a sister never born, a presence created by Anna’s father in his stories, a companion during long winter nights when the family had fallen silent after their mother left.
Her father would sit by the fire, voice low and warm, describing Eleanor’s laughter, her stubborn kindness, the way she saved wildflowers and pressed them into books, leaving petals that smelled of spring. Eleanor was a creation, a dream he shared to hold hope alive, and Anna grew to believe she existed somewhere perhaps in another time or place.
Years later, after her father’s death, Anna kept the tradition alive. Each letter carried her longing, her questions, and the fragile link to her story that anchored memory and imagination alike.
One evening, Anna wrote:
Dear Eleanor,
The garden has taken on a wild beauty this year. The roses curl toward the sun. I imagine you wandering through, your fingers gently touching petals, like you’re tracing the stories each one holds.
After sealing the envelope, she pressed it to her chest, as if feeling the pulse of the unseen. The room felt fuller, alive with a presence belonging everywhere and nowhere all at once.
Anna swore she could hear laughter mixed into the breeze that would come in through the window. A faint sound of a woman, a feeling, a tender echo of a sister’s affection time had yet to erase.
The letters continued. Seasons passed, and the stories deepened. Anna wrote of small discoveries: a bird’s song at dawn, the way shadows stretched along garden walls late in the afternoon, patterns frost traced on windowpanes during cold mornings. Each detail became woven into the tapestry of their shared, imagined world.
Sometimes she imagined Eleanor’s replies with a smile she might have sent, words she could have spoken, the way her presence might have shaped the light in a room or the turn of a conversation. Anna felt these moments with the same clarity as memories, as though the boundary between real and dreamed had grown thin.
One chilly autumn day, Anna found an old photograph tucked between the pages of her father’s journal. It showed a young girl with bright eyes and a mischievous grin. A note beneath read, Eleanor, 1932.
The girl in the picture was Eleanor, a memory blended with truth, Anna’s grandmother as a child. Her father’s stories had blurred history and imagination, weaving family memory into fantasy. Eleanor was part truth, part longing, a figure who kept the past alive.
Anna felt happy with the connection spanning generations. Through Eleanor, her family’s joy and sorrow, hope and grief had found a vessel. The absence was filled with love, and in that love, something lasting was born.
That night, Anna wrote one last letter:
Dear Eleanor,
I think I have found you in the spaces between us all. You are the story my father told to keep light burning when dark crept close. You are the laughter in a photograph, the scent of flowers in a wild garden.
You were never meant to live, and yet you live still, in every corner of my heart.
She folded the letter carefully and held it to her chest. Outside, there was a feeling of a presence belonging to no one and everyone.
And so, Eleanor remained, a quiet, unseen companion whose absence shaped the whole story. Anna found a fullness beyond words, a connection that moved through time, memory, and imagination.
Even in the stillness of late night, when all else seemed paused, Eleanor’s presence lingered like a soft glow, reminding Anna that some absences carry their own kind of life, a life that fills the empty spaces with meaning and warmth.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.




Comments (2)
This is such a great story, especially suited for the challenge! Well done, and good luck.
This felt so heartwarming. Anna's father used his mother as a symbol of hope for Anna. Loved your story!