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The Last Window – A Story of a Patient

"A Blind Man Who Helped Another See Hope"

By ShakoorPublished 6 months ago 4 min read

In a quiet ward of a city hospital, two men lay in a shared room. The walls were pale, the scent of antiseptic hung constantly in the air, and the only source of light was a large window on the far side of the room. One of the two beds was placed directly under the window. The other faced the opposite wall, far from any view of the outside world.

In the bed by the window lay a man named Ameen — a former school teacher who had once inspired hundreds of students with his gentle voice and patient smile. Though he was now ill and confined to a hospital bed, he hadn’t lost his spirit. Next to him, in the bed farthest from the window, was Rafiq, a man who had lived a hardworking life as a tailor. A recent stroke had left him partially paralyzed, and he could not sit up or even turn easily on his own.

Rafiq had grown bitter. Days in bed had turned into weeks, and with nothing but a white ceiling to look at, time crawled. He rarely spoke, and when he did, his voice was laced with frustration and sadness.

Ameen, despite his own illness, had a spark of warmth in him. Each morning, the nurses would come in and help him sit up for an hour or so. During this time, he would gaze out the window and quietly watch the world go by.

One morning, sensing Rafiq’s silence and sorrow, Ameen decided to speak.

"Would you like to know what's outside the window today?" he asked gently.

Rafiq didn’t respond immediately, but after a pause, he whispered,

"Sure… why not."

Ameen smiled.

"Well, today the sky is crystal clear — not a cloud in sight. There’s a little park down below. Children are flying colorful kites, and a man is selling sweet corn near the gate. There’s a woman in a yellow dress teaching her toddler how to walk on the grass."

Rafiq closed his eyes. The images painted in Ameen’s words began to form vividly in his mind. He could almost hear the children laugh, feel the warmth of the sun, smell the roasted corn in the air.

From that day forward, every morning, Ameen described the world beyond the window. Sometimes it was a light drizzle, sometimes a wedding procession passing by, other times a dog chasing butterflies. Every scene was detailed, gentle, and full of life.

Rafiq slowly began to change. He smiled more. He asked questions about what Ameen saw.

"Are the roses blooming today?"

"Did that old man with the flute come again?"

Ameen always had an answer. And each day, Rafiq’s mind would travel far beyond the walls of his hospital bed.

Over time, Rafiq found his own strength returning. Though his body still ached, his heart was lighter. The bitterness that had gripped him began to fade. For the first time since arriving at the hospital, he felt connected to the world again — all because of a window he couldn’t even see.

Then one night, something changed.

The nurses rushed in quietly. Machines beeped. Rafiq watched silently from his bed. In the early morning, the news was delivered gently:

Ameen had passed away in his sleep.

Rafiq turned his face toward the wall and wept — not just for the man who had become his only friend, but for the silence that now filled the room. The mornings would never be the same.

After Ameen's funeral, Rafiq asked the nurse,

"Can I be moved to the bed by the window?"

The nurse smiled and nodded. The next morning, with great effort, Rafiq was shifted into Ameen’s place. The light from the window warmed his face. He turned slowly to look outside.

And what he saw made his breath catch.

There was no park, no children, no rose garden — nothing but a blank brick wall a few feet away. The hospital window faced another building.

Rafiq stared in disbelief. His mind reeled.

He called the nurse, trembling.

"Why did Ameen lie to me? Why did he make up those stories?"

The nurse sat beside him, held his hand, and softly said,

"Mr. Ameen was blind."

"What…?" Rafiq gasped.

"He couldn’t see anything outside that window. He lost his vision years ago. But every day, he sat up and described scenes he had imagined — just for you. He knew you had no view. He wanted to give you one. He knew you had no hope. So he gave you hope."

Tears ran down Rafiq’s cheeks.

He looked again at the blank wall. But now he didn’t see bricks. He saw the little girl in the yellow dress. He heard the sound of kites fluttering, smelled the sweet corn, and felt the soft breeze on his face.

Ameen may have been blind, but his heart had vision. He had seen what no one else could — the loneliness in another human being. And he had filled that void with light, with kindness, and with imagination.

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