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The Last Whisper

Old Village

By Mohammad HussaibPublished about a year ago 2 min read
The last whisper


The Wind carried a soft, haunting whisper through the old village, as though a voice long forgotten had returned for its final words. That evening, as the mist thickened around the cliffs, young Marlowe found an envelope wedged between the bricks of his grandfather's cottage—one with his name, but written decades before he was even born.


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Marlowe Hughes had always loved the hidden corners of the seaside village his family called home. Cragmore, with its weathered stone cottages, ghostly mists, and old lighthouse, held a quiet allure, a feeling that something in its ancient streets had never truly left. But after his grandfather passed, Marlowe returned to the village only to settle the estate, packing away fragments of a man who rarely spoke of his past.

On his last night, after hours of sorting through dust-covered trinkets, Marlowe stepped outside for air. That’s when he noticed a faint glimmer near the ivy-covered corner of the house—a thin envelope wedged tightly between the stones. When he pried it free, Marlowe froze; it was addressed to him.

Yet something was wrong: the handwriting was his grandfather’s, but the ink was faded, and the paper was brittle, as though written decades ago.


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Inside the envelope lay a single note, cryptic yet urgent:

"Follow the lighthouse beam when the clock strikes midnight. The truth lies within the shadows it casts."

The words sent chills down Marlowe’s spine, stirring memories of his grandfather’s distant gaze each time the lighthouse beam swept over the village at night. No one ever seemed to know what he was looking for—or hiding from.

Marlowe glanced at his watch. Just five minutes to midnight.


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He made his way to the cliffside, the lighthouse standing tall against the inky sky. Its light pulsed in rhythm, washing over him, illuminating a jagged path carved into the rock—a path he had never seen before.

As he followed it, shadows played tricks with his mind, but he pressed on until he reached the base of the lighthouse. There, in the glow of the beam, he saw an inscription carved into the stone:

"Some secrets never die, Marlowe. And some echoes are never silenced."

Just then, he heard the softest sound—a whisper, as if from behind him. Marlowe spun around, but the darkness was silent. Yet, when he looked back at the stone, a new line had appeared beneath the inscription. His heart raced as he read the words:

"She knows you're here."


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From that night forward, Marlowe would always wonder if he had met the truth—or if it had met him.

ClassicalFan FictionHorrorMysteryShort Story

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Mohammad Hussaib

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