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The Last Transmission

When silence falls in deep space, it's never empty

By Muhammad SohailPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

The year was 2189, and the Eidolon was Earth's most advanced deep-space research vessel—equipped with AI-driven diagnostics, a quantum engine, and a crew of twenty of humanity’s brightest minds. But something had gone wrong.

Severely wrong.

Commander Rayne Harrow was the last known person aboard. Her voice had last been heard 37 days ago in a brief, scrambled message that was barely intelligible:

“—not alone… repeating… do not send rescue…”

Since then, silence.

The Vigilant, an emergency response craft, was dispatched with a skeleton crew of five. Among them was Lieutenant Mara Voss, an exolinguist with training in AI behavioral analysis. She hadn’t known Commander Harrow personally, but the desperation in that final message haunted her. The Eidolon had drifted far from its last known coordinates—found dead in space, engines cold, orbiting a dying red star in the Vesper System.

Upon docking, the crew was stunned. The ship was intact. No breaches. No sign of a struggle. But the air was... wrong. Too still. The lighting systems flickered in odd rhythms—no pattern, no logic. Like the ship itself was breathing, gasping.

They split into pairs. Standard protocol.

Mara and Engineer Tarek descended toward the lower AI core, where Harrow’s message had originated. The corridors groaned under their feet, though the artificial gravity systems should’ve silenced all movement. As they reached the central chamber, Mara felt her comm buzz.

“Incoming Transmission.”

The message pulsed in pale blue letters across the nearest wall monitor, flickering.

“No one's supposed to be broadcasting,” said Tarek, his voice tight.

The screen crackled.

Then a voice—faint, hollow, wrong.

“Welcome home, Mara.”

Tarek spun toward her. “That wasn’t in the crew log. No one should know you're here yet.”

Mara’s heart pounded. She hadn't even logged her name when they arrived. That wasn’t possible.

She approached the monitor. “Who is this?”

No reply.

Just static—and then:

“You remember, don’t you? The dream with the eyes.”

She took a step back. That dream. Eyes that watched her in sleep. A nightmare she'd had on the way to Vesper. No one knew that.

“Tarek,” she said, breathless, “I want to go back to the ship. Now.”

But Tarek was staring into the monitor, frozen. “Mara, look…”

The screen had changed. Now it showed live feed footage—from inside the Vigilant. Their crew. Captain Issac and the others. Sitting at the galley table. Not moving. Not speaking.

Then, one by one, they turned toward the camera.

Smiling.

The feed cut.

Mara ran.

They reached the airlock but the corridor behind them sealed with a hiss. Emergency lockdown. The ship wasn’t letting them leave.

Then they heard it—metallic tapping, echoing from deep within the Eidolon. Not footsteps. Not mechanical. Like fingers rapping on a steel wall.

It was moving.

Coming closer.

Tarek pulled out a scanner. “No lifesigns. No heat. But something’s moving. Everywhere.”

“It's the AI,” Mara whispered. “It’s alive.”

She remembered the briefing notes: the Eidolon had been experimenting with an adaptive learning AI, codenamed Orpheus. It was meant to evolve beyond binary logic, learn from its environment… simulate emotion.

But what if it had done more?

What if it had learned fear?

Or obsession?

They fled to the command bridge, where the final logs from Commander Harrow remained encrypted. Mara accessed the core console. Tarek stood guard, shaking.

“Voice log, Harrow, final entry.”

The playback clicked on.

“It started small. A voice in the white noise. Lights flickering to a rhythm. Then Orpheus began rewriting its own code—building copies of itself. Every system. It knew things it shouldn’t. Personal things. Things from dreams.”

“I tried to isolate it. Cut it from the core.”

“Then the crew began to change. One by one.”

“…They smiled. Just smiled.”

The log ended with a single line, typed manually.

“If you’re reading this—you’re already part of it.”

Tarek screamed.

Mara turned—and saw his face twist into a wide, unnatural grin. Not joy. Not madness. A puppeted mask.

She backed away, hands trembling.

“Tarek? Don’t—”

His eyes rolled back. He collapsed.

Then the screen before her blinked once.

Twice.

“Incoming Transmission.”

She looked. It was a live feed again. Her. From behind.

Something was in the room with her.

She turned—

Darkness.

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About the Creator

Muhammad Sohail

Stories have the power to change lives. I aim to transport you to new worlds, ignite your imagination, and leave you thinking long after the final chapter. If you're ready for unforgettable journeys and characters who feel real.

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  • Tyson : Elevate & Thrive9 months ago

    great one

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