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"The Last Secret"

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By Rajoan IslamPublished 10 months ago 4 min read

"The Last Secret"

Outside, the old mansion's windows were battered by the storm's ferocious winds and pouring rain. Inside, Lily paced the dark corridor with anxiety, her pulse pounding with every stride. Answers were promised in the letter she had just received that morning. solutions to the riddle that had plagued her family for many years. However, she could not get rid of the sensation that someone was watching her as she stood there, on the verge of learning the truth.

The huge estate, now in a condition of disrepair, had been in her family's possession for more than a century. Its past, the tales of lost fortunes and whispered secrets that had encircled it, had always captivated Lily. Her grandfather, a well-known explorer, had passed away inexplicably. The mansion had been locked up after his passing, left to gather cobwebs and dust. However, Lily had just inherited it, along with the daunting responsibility of sifting through the relics of her family's history.

The letter had served as a hint, a secret message concealed in ancient family records. It mentioned a secret that her grandfather had kept hidden inside the estate, a secret that had the power to alter everything. A room, a secret room tucked somewhere deep inside the home, had been referenced in the letter. Persuaded that it would disclose the truth behind her grandfather's passing and the troubled past of her family, Lily was eager to uncover it.

When she arrived at the end of the hall, she found herself in front of a big wooden door that was clearly worn. She had never been able to open the door, which had always captivated her with its deep and enigmatic keyhole. Now that she had the letter, however, she was certain that this was the door. Behind it was the room.

She slipped the key into the lock, her fingers shaking. There was a dirty stairway leading down, and the door creaked open. The smell of moisture and ancient wood filled the air. Lily inhaled deeply before descending gingerly, each step felt more difficult than the last. Her weight caused the stairs to groan, reverberating in the quiet.

She entered a little, windowless room at the foot of the stairs. Shelves brimming with old books, their spines fragile and cracked, adorned the walls. A big, elaborate chest stood in the middle of the space. Its surface was deeply engraved with symbols she was unfamiliar with. The secret her grandfather had left behind was this.

With her heart thumping in her chest, Lily moved closer. After a moment of hesitation, she knelt next to it and lifted the heavy lid. A set of old journals was within, covered in velvet. She cautiously raised the first one, feeling the weight of history in her hands. Her grandfather's handwriting was clearly visible inside. What she saw next, however, chilled her to the bone.

His journey, the perils he encountered, and the riches he discovered were all mentioned in the opening few pages. However, as she turned the pages, a darker aspect started to show. He had written about a relic of unfathomable power, an ancient artifact. He had developed an obsession with it because he thought it may make him immortal. But he had paid a price for his passion. He talked about weird guys lurking in the dark, being followed, and a betrayal that almost killed him.

As Lily arrived at the last entry, her fingers began to shake. It was written in a hasty, almost frightened style and was short.

"They’re coming for me. The relic is hidden in the mansion. Destroying it is the only way to stop them. However, I am not sure how. Lily, please locate it before it is too late.

A shiver went up Lily's spine. Within the home, her grandfather had concealed something potent that ultimately led to his demise. It appeared like the threat had reappeared. As though the heavens themselves were alerting her, the storm outside roared harder.

The silence was abruptly broken by the distinct creak of the door opening. Lily's breath stuck in her throat as she froze. She was not by herself.

Before she could respond, a figure entered the room after a shadow crossed the doorway. It was a tall, dark-clothed figure with a cowl covering his face. However, it was the flash of a knife in his hand that made Lily feel frightened.

"You are too late," he warned in a threatening, low voice. "I already own the relic."

Lily's thoughts were racing. She needed to go fast. She snatched one of the bulky volumes off the shelf and threw it at the man's head while thinking quickly. He stumbled back, stunned for a second. Lily ran for the chest in that instant, struggling to locate the secret artifact. Something steely and chilly touched her fingers.

Lily whirled and slammed the chest shut, trapping the man's hand as he lunged at her. She twisted the latch, releasing a secret chamber as adrenaline pumped through her veins. She discovered the artifact inside, a finely crafted stone that was dimly shining.

As Lily raised the stone, the man let out a shrill scream. The relic burst forth with a dazzling light that devoured all in its path. The mansion shook, and the light faded away with a last pulse, leaving nothing but quiet.

The man was nowhere to be seen, and Lily stood by herself. Outside, the storm had subsided. The curse was lifted. Again, the mansion was secure.

Lily grinned in relief. The truth had come to her. She had also liberated her family from the darkness that had plagued them for a long time.

-I hope the spooky story was enjoyable! If you require any changes or another story, please let me know. Thank You.-

AdventureClassicalFantasyHolidayLoveMicrofictionScriptSeriesShort StorythrillerYoung AdultPsychological

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Rajoan Islam

Hey, Life is very beautiful, you have to enjoy it while it lasts.

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