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The Last Breath of Winter

Whispers of Love, Echoes of Vengeance

By Afia SikderPublished 10 months ago 4 min read

The Last Breath of Winter

The Snow's Whispers in the First Chapter That evening, the cold was relentless. The scent of burning wood and something else—something far more sinister—were carried by the howling wind, which sounded like a tortured soul. Asha pulled her scarf tighter around her face as she trudged through the snow-covered path leading to the abandoned cottage at the edge of the village. This one was different from her usual fascination with mysteries. The young man Aidan Blackwood, who had vanished ten years earlier on a winter night, was the subject of rumors that circulated throughout the town. Some said he had been murdered by his own fiancée, others believed he had simply wandered into the snowstorm and never returned. Asha, however, was determined to uncover the truth.

The forest fell into a strange silence as soon as she stepped onto the icy porch. The snow beneath her boots crunched like brittle bones. Before she could even touch the rusted doorknob, something, an unseen force, forced the door open. She hesitated. Chapter Two: The Frozen Love

While the fireplace blazed with warmth, the air inside was thick with decay and dust. An old portrait of a young man with green eyes and piercing features was crookedly displayed on the mantel. Asha gasped. It was Aidan.

Even though the room was empty, a whisper brushed against her ear. “Why have you come?”

She turned around, her heart pounding. The shadows twisted, and from them emerged a figure cloaked in mist. She saw Aidan Blackwood standing in front of him with a sad expression on his once-sexy face. She mumbled, "I... I wanted to know what happened to you." Aidan's gaze entered her own. “Then listen closely, for my time is short.”

On a frozen lake, his voice was like ice breaking apart. He told her of his love for Evelyn, the woman he had planned to marry. But their love had been forbidden by Evelyn’s cruel father, Lord Whitmore, who feared Aidan’s humble status would ruin their family name. On the night of their elopement, Whitmore had locked Evelyn away and lured Aidan into the storm with a letter written in her hand. Betrayed and heartbroken, Aidan had wandered into the blizzard, his breath stolen by the unforgiving winter.

The third chapter is Love and Horror. Asha felt a shiver run down her spine. “But… if you’re here, does that mean Evelyn is still alive?”

Aidan’s eyes darkened. "She existed. But not anymore. The guilt consumed her, and she took her last breath in this very house, calling my name.”

Asha tightened her hands. “Then why are you still here?”

Aidan’s form flickered. "Because I can't find peace for my soul. Lord Whitmore didn't pay for what he did. My love was stolen, my life taken. I cannot leave until justice is served.”

Asha had always believed in the rule of law, but what could she do about a man who probably passed away a long time ago? She looked up at Aidan, and for the first time, she saw not a ghost, but a man still yearning for love and redemption.

“I’ll find a way,” she whispered. "I'll tell the world about your story." Chapter Four: The Last Breath of Winter

Days turned into weeks, and Asha dedicated herself to uncovering the truth. She questioned the elders who still remembered the Blackwood tragedy as she perused the town's archives. The deeper she dug, the darker the secrets became.

She discovered that Lord Whitmore had indeed lived a long life, but it was filled with torment. He had been haunted by visions of Aidan and Evelyn, hearing their whispers in the wind, seeing their faces in the frost-covered windows. Before he died, his guilt had driven him insane. Aidan's soul, on the other hand, remained imprisoned after Whitmore's passing. Asha went back to the cottage that first night of snowfall. When she entered, the fireplace erupted into life. Aidan stared at the moonlit snow from the window. “I found the truth,” she said softly. The town is aware now. They are conscious of you and Evelyn. Your love wasn’t forgotten.”

Aidan smiled for the first time as he turned to face her. It was a peaceful, if sad, smile. "Then my mission here is accomplished." Asha’s breath caught as Aidan’s form began to dissolve, his body turning to snowflakes that swirled around her in a gentle embrace. The air was filled with the lingering whisper of his voice. “Thank you, Asha… for giving me my last breath of winter.”

Asha stood in the empty cottage with a single tear forming on her cheek as the last drop of his spirit vanished into the wind. She had feared ghosts, but now she knew—the true horror was a love unfulfilled, a life unjustly taken. And the true redemption was in remembering.

Outside, the snow fell in a silent, peaceful dance, as if the winter itself had finally exhaled its last, sorrowful breath.

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Afia Sikder

"Hi, I’m Afia Sikder! I love crafting captivating stories, insightful articles, and inspiring Islamic narratives. Follow me for engaging reads that spark thought and emotion!"

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  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    Wow! Winter is so cold! The last breath is amazing

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