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The Hidden Reflection

Description: Helena always felt that something in her life was incomplete, as if a part of her was lost in some unknown place. When she decides to enter an old abandoned mansion, she finds a mirror that does not reflect her image, but a different version of herself, which invites her to cross into another world. There, he discovers that his existence is divided between two realities and he needs to make a choice: stay and become complete or return to his ordinary life, but forever carrying the feeling that he is missing something.

By A.short storiesPublished 11 months ago 4 min read
The Hidden Reflection

In the village of Eldoria, where mist wound its way through cobblestone streets and the wind whispered forgotten secrets, there stood a house that everyone avoided.

It was an ancient building with tall windows and tightly drawn curtains, as if determined to hide something from the outside world. Yet for Helena, this house did not evoke fear but rather a beckoning call.

Since childhood, she had felt an inexplicable connection to that place, as if her soul recognized something beyond its dusty walls.

One autumn afternoon, driven by a sudden surge of courage, Helena decided to cross the rusted iron gate and enter the house.

The silence was absolute, broken only by the creaking of floorboards beneath her feet. In the center of the grand hall, draped in white sheets, an imposing mirror caught her attention.

Its frame was intricately carved with golden arabesques and weathered by time, yet what truly took her breath away was the reflection—it was not her own.

The mirror revealed an image of herself that was different: her hair was longer, her eyes more intense, and her expression carried a wisdom she did not possess.

Startled, she stepped back, but the figure in the mirror did not follow her; instead, it smiled. “You have finally come,” the voice echoed in her mind. Helena tried to flee, but her feet remained rooted to the spot.

The mirror began to glow, and an invisible force pulled her in, leaving her breathless as if she were being drawn into another world.

When she regained her senses, Helena found herself no longer in the abandoned house but in a world both familiar and strange.

The streets of Eldoria now burst with vibrant colors, and the sky was a deep, almost unreal blue, while the air hummed with an indescribable energy. People passed by, yet they seemed not to notice her; rather, it was as if they looked right through her.

A gentle voice spoke, “You do not yet belong to this side.” Turning around, Helena saw the same woman from the mirror standing before her, real and tangible.

“Who are you?” Helena asked, striving to maintain her composure. “I am you, or rather, the part of you that was left behind when you were born.

You always felt that something was missing, did you not? Now you are complete again,” the woman replied softly.

Helena could not fully comprehend the meaning, yet a profound sense of belonging began to swell within her. All her life, she had felt out of place, as if she belonged somewhere else.

Now, facing her other self, everything suddenly made sense. The other Helena extended her hand and said, “Come, there is something you must see.”

They walked together through narrow alleys that seemed to pulse with memories, as if every stone had a story to tell. They stopped before a large wooden portal, intricately carved with ancient symbols.

The other Helena touched its surface, and the door opened effortlessly, revealing a room illuminated by floating chandeliers.

At the center of the room lay a massive open book whose pages turned on their own as if guided by an unseen hand. A shiver ran down Helena’s spine when she recognized her name written in golden letters.

“This book contains everything you could have been and all that you may yet become,” explained the other Helena. “But for that to happen, you must make a choice.”

Helena looked at the pages and saw images of herself at various moments—some she recognized and others she had never lived. Every choice she had made, every path she might have taken, was laid bare before her.

“What happens if I stay?” Helena asked softly. “You will become whole,” the other Helena replied, “and your world will never be the same.

You will gain the knowledge and power you have always sensed was beyond your reach.” “And if I return?” she pressed. The other Helena sighed gently, “You will continue your life as before, but forever with the feeling that something is missing. The choice is yours.”

Helena hesitated. The desire to remain was strong, yet something deep within told her it was not yet her time.

She needed to return to her old life, to live knowing that perhaps one day she might come back to complete her destiny.

“I choose to return,” she declared, her voice steady. The other Helena smiled, not with disappointment but with understanding. “Then we shall meet again.”

Before Helena could react further, the world began to spin around her. She was pulled back, experiencing the same dizzying rush as before.

When she opened her eyes, she was once again in the mansion, standing before the mirror that now reflected only her image. Yet something within her had changed forever.

A gust of wind blew through the broken windows, and Helena felt a profound difference. She was no longer merely the young woman who had entered that house; now, she carried within her the knowledge that there was more beyond what the eyes could see. And one day, she knew, she would be ready to cross that portal again.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    Great reflection! Great work!

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