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The hidden door in the old mansion

The hidden door in the old mansion

By Badhan SenPublished 12 months ago 3 min read
The hidden door in the old mansion
Photo by Samuel McGarrigle on Unsplash

The rain poured down in thick sheets, drumming against the roof of the old Ashford Mansion. Thunder rumbled in the distance as Eleanor stepped cautiously across the dusty wooden floorboards, her candle flickering with each hesitant step. She had spent countless summers here as a child, but now, standing in the dimly lit hallway, she felt like a stranger in her own family’s history.

Eleanor had inherited the estate after her great-uncle’s passing. The house had been in the family for generations, but no one had lived in it for decades. The townsfolk whispered about strange occurrences—the sound of footsteps when no one was around, flickering lights, and objects moving on their own. But Eleanor had never been one to believe in ghost stories. She came to sell the house, not chase shadows.

Yet, something about the place called to her. While sorting through her great-uncle’s belongings, she found a weathered journal, its leather cover brittle with age. The entries spoke of a hidden door within the house, a passage that led to secrets long buried. A map had been drawn on the final page, marking a spot in the grand study. Intrigued, Eleanor set out to uncover the truth.

Now, standing in the study, she traced her fingers along the intricate wooden panels of the bookshelf, just as the journal instructed. The scent of aged paper and oak filled the room as she pressed against the carved rose emblem in the center. At first, nothing happened. Then, with a soft click, the panel shifted slightly. Eleanor’s breath caught in her throat.

With a gentle push, the hidden door swung inward, revealing a narrow passageway lined with stone. A shiver ran down her spine. This was real. Gathering her courage, she stepped inside, her candlelight casting eerie shadows along the walls.

The passage led her deeper into the mansion, the air growing cooler with each step. Cobwebs clung to the ceiling, and the floor was covered in a fine layer of dust, undisturbed for years. At the end of the corridor, she found another door, this one made of iron. Eleanor hesitated, her heart hammering in her chest. Taking a deep breath, she grasped the handle and pulled.

The room beyond was unlike anything she had expected. A small chamber, its walls lined with shelves filled with books, trinkets, and old relics. In the center sat a wooden desk, atop which lay a single letter sealed with a wax crest—the Ashford family insignia.

Eleanor picked it up, her fingers trembling as she broke the seal.

“My dearest Eleanor,

If you are reading this, then you have found what has been hidden for so long. This house is more than just wood and stone; it is a keeper of secrets, of memories long forgotten. There are things in this world that cannot be explained, forces that linger beyond time. I sought to protect you from them, but now, it is your burden to bear.

Guard the knowledge well, for not all who seek it have good intentions.

—Great-Uncle Henry”

A chill ran down her spine. Had her great-uncle known she would find this? What had he been protecting? She glanced around the room again, her mind racing. This was no ordinary study—this was a sanctuary, a place where hidden truths had been kept safe.

Suddenly, a soft creak echoed through the passage behind her. Eleanor’s pulse quickened. She wasn’t alone.

Turning swiftly, she held her candle up, its light barely penetrating the darkness beyond the doorway. A gust of air blew past her, snuffing out the flame. She gasped, plunging into complete darkness.

Footsteps. Slow, deliberate.

Eleanor backed away, her breath shallow. The darkness pressed in around her, and for the first time, she understood why no one had lived in Ashford Mansion for decades.

Something had been waiting. And now, it was awake.

Mystery

About the Creator

Badhan Sen

Myself Badhan, I am a professional writer.I like to share some stories with my friends.

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  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    What a great mystery thriller you have here. Good job.

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