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The Heist

Part 1

By Archery OwlPublished 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
The Heist
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The icy wind whipped around Jasper as he stood on the bluff, the dark gray river below mirroring the cold dread settling in his gut. He was a ghost of his former life, the reliable father and husband who once navigated suburban streets in a mid-size SUV was gone. Now, the label "fugitive" clung to him, a brand seared by his own shocking actions.

Wanted in all fifty states for robbing the local Wells Fargo’s Bank. The news was met with disbelief by those who knew him best. The words felt absurd: "Jasper, the bank robber. Wanted by the FBI, armed and dangerous." He was the last person anyone would suspect – soft-spoken and polite, a man who avoided conflict and followed the rules. But beneath the veneer of a rule-follower lay a keen intellect and a simmering need for validation. Years of playing the nice guy, of fading into the background, had fueled a quiet resentment. He yearned to shatter their perceptions, to prove he was capable of more, of something extraordinary, even reckless.

He craved to prove them wrong, to execute a daring feat that would finally command attention, reveal his true potential. The plan was "simple" – a quick in-and-out. The robbery wasn’t about money or greed; it was designed as a testament to his superior intellect. Alone now it felt like a cruel joke as he clutched the heavy bag of stolen money. He'd envisioned a flawless execution, a clean getaway. He'd believed in his intelligence, in his ability to create the perfect disguise and alibi, to carry out the robbery cleanly. But the intricate dance of a bank robbery had proven far more unpredictable, its steps leading him to this desolate precipice.

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Archery Owl

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  • Colleen Walters9 months ago

    What metaphorical genius, adroitly executed. The material theft as a distraction to the grand theft of soul. Perfectly played.

  • Rachel Deeming9 months ago

    I wonder what precipice he is at the edge of...

  • Rowan Finley 9 months ago

    Oh what interesting introduction to the character of Jasper. What will he do next?

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