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The Girl Who Wrote Her Name on the Moon

Some promises are too big for the world—so she sent hers into the sky.

By Mudasir Hakeemi Published 6 months ago 1 min read

The night her brother died, Aisha made a promise.

She stood barefoot in the backyard, her palms covered in dirt, the air sharp with silence. Her mother was inside, a ghost made of tears. Her father hadn’t spoken in hours.

Aisha looked up.

The moon hung low and full, glowing like it knew secrets no one else did.

“I’ll make you proud,” she whispered, voice trembling. “Even if I have to write my name on the moon.”

She didn’t cry that night. Not because it didn’t hurt. But because the promise felt louder than the pain.

At 14, Aisha read her first book about space.

At 16, she started building tiny rockets out of spare parts.

At 18, she got rejected from her first science competition.

“Girls like you don’t go to space,” they told her.

“People like you should be realistic.”

But Aisha had a moon to reach.

She worked at night. Studied during the day. Sold old books to pay for materials. Failed more times than she could count. Lost sleep. Lost friends. Lost count of how many times people told her to give up.

But every time she wanted to quit, she’d whisper,

“I promised him. And I don’t break promises.”

Years later, the world watched on livestream as a small, self-funded spacecraft launched from a desert pad in Pakistan. It didn’t carry astronauts. It didn’t carry flags.

It carried a tiny capsule.

Inside: a silver plate. Etched in soft, swirling Pashto.

“ستا خور”

Your sister.

Aisha’s name. Her brother’s name. And the words she never got to say.

The capsule entered lunar orbit. It would never land—but it didn’t have to. It would circle the moon for 1,000 years.

And every time Aisha looked up, she knew…

Her name was up there.

Right next to the promise.

That’s all

Short Story

About the Creator

Mudasir Hakeemi

I am poor boy

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