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The Girl Who Fell in Love with Silence

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By Shakespeare JrPublished 6 months ago 4 min read

The world knew Elena Grey’s voice. It was velvet and fire, filling stadiums, breaking hearts, topping charts. Her songs were love letters to millions. Until one day, her voice vanished. A rare condition stole it—silence swallowed her whole. No farewell tour. No final note. Just gone.

The tabloids screamed. Her manager pleaded. Doctors promised risky fixes. But Elena didn’t want their noise. She wanted escape. So she fled the city, driving until skyscrapers turned to pine trees. She found Ishara, a forgotten mountain village where phones didn’t work and time felt still. She rented a crumbling cottage by an orchard, craving silence to drown her grief.

Her first night, she screamed into her pillow—no sound came. The second night, she stood under a sky heavy with stars, mouth open, begging for a whisper. Nothing. By the third night, she was sketching by the river, charcoal smudging her fingers, when he appeared.

Barefoot, holding a chipped mug and a worn notebook, he had dark hair falling into sharp, kind eyes. He pointed at her sketch—a jagged river under moonlight—and smiled. Then his hands moved, quick and graceful. Sign language.

Elena froze. “I don’t know sign,” she mouthed, embarrassed.

He knelt beside her, unbothered, and wrote in his notebook: “I’m Luca. Your sketch is alive.”

She blushed. “Elena,” she mouthed back.

His smile grew, and he scribbled: “A name as beautiful as the river.”

It was the first time in months someone saw her—not the lost star, not the broken voice, just her.

Every afternoon, Elena returned to the river. Luca was always there, like he belonged to the water and the trees. They didn’t talk—they wrote, drew, laughed. He taught her signs: sky, wind, friend. She showed him how to shade a portrait’s eyes. Their silences weren’t empty; they were full of something warm, something alive.

One day, Luca pressed her hand to his chest. His heartbeat was steady, strong. He signed: “Silence isn’t nothing. It’s everything you miss when you’re too loud.”

Elena’s throat tightened. She hadn’t felt this seen since… Daniel. Her fiancé. The one she lost two years ago to a failing heart. She pushed the thought away, but it lingered like a shadow.

Weeks passed. Elena’s music notebook, once locked away, came out. She showed Luca her old lyrics, words written when her voice could still sing. He read them like they were poetry, pressing the pages to his chest. His eyes met hers, and he signed: “You don’t need a voice to make music. You are music.”

Her heart raced. Their hands brushed when they passed notes. He tucked a wildflower into her braid, casual but electric. They walked barefoot through orchards, danced under stars to a song only they could hear. One night, as the sky burned pink, Luca took her hand and pressed it to his chest again. His heartbeat thundered.

He signed: “Can you feel it?”

She nodded, breathless.

Then he traced a word on her palm: “Yours.”

Under the moonlight, they kissed. His lips were soft, urgent, tasting of river mist and pine. Her fingers grazed his jaw, his arms pulling her close. Their hearts beat as one—fast, then slow, like a melody finding its rhythm. For the first time since her voice died, Elena wasn’t afraid.

The next morning, Luca left a note with a poem:

You spoke without sound, and I heard with my skin.

In the quiet of your heart, my world begins.

Elena smiled, tracing the words. She was falling for him—hard. The village librarian, Mirna, noticed. Teaching Elena sign language, she’d smirk whenever Elena said “my friend Luca.” Mirna knew better.

But then came the rain. And the truth.

Elena was in Luca’s cottage, flipping through his books for a sketchpad, when a yellowed envelope fell out. It was addressed to Luca’s mother, stamped with Grey Foundation Cardiac Center. Her heart stopped. That was where Daniel died.

She tore it open, hands shaking. The words hit like a storm: “Successful transplant. Heart received from Daniel Price…”

Daniel. Her Daniel. The man she’d loved, gone two years ago. His heart—his heart—was beating inside Luca.

She ran into the rain, barefoot, sobbing. The forest spun. Was it Luca she loved? Or Daniel’s echo? Her chest ached, her mind screaming: Was this love real, or just a ghost?

She didn’t go to the river the next day. Or the day after. Her cottage became a cage of doubt. Luca came to her porch, his eyes heavy with worry. He signed: “You found out.”

She nodded, tears spilling. “Did you know?” she mouthed.

He shook his head, frantic, and wrote: “I learned last month. Your name was in Daniel’s file. I felt it—the dreams, the way your presence pulled me. But my love? It’s mine. Not his. I loved you before I knew.”

Elena stared at him, at the heart that once belonged to her past. It was beating for her now, in a man who saw her soul. She stepped forward, trembling, and placed his hand on her chest.

“Then we start new,” she mouthed. “Your heart. My heart. Us.”

They stood in the rain, hands clasped, hearts racing. The silence wasn’t empty anymore—it was theirs. Luca pulled her close, and they kissed again, fierce and sure, like they could rewrite the stars.

Weeks later, they left a note in the orchard, a poem written together:

From silence, we carved a song no one else could sing.

Two hearts, one rhythm, bound by everything.

Elena didn’t need her voice. She’d found something louder—love, born in the quiet.

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About the Creator

Shakespeare Jr

Welcome to My Realm of Love, Romance, and Enchantment!

Greetings, dear reader! I am Shakespeare Jr—a storyteller with a heart full of passion and a pen dipped in dreams.

Yours in ink and imagination,

Shakespeare Jr

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