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The Girl Behind the Door

Some doors are locked from the inside—not for safety, but for sorrow.

By Muhammad AbdullahPublished 7 months ago 6 min read

1. The Whispering House

In the overlooked town of Elmbrook—where the wind murmured like a overlooked bedtime song and the crows roosted like prophets—stood an ancient, exhausted house. It had no title, but everybody called it The Wilt House. Children strolled quicker close it; older folks whispered supplications; and those who had once challenged to trespass carried their hush like a mystery curse.

Inside that house, behind a fixed wooden entryway on the moment floor, lived a girl.

Or or maybe, they said she lived there.

They never saw her. As it were a pale shadow underneath the entryway at dusk. A squeak, a murmur, a cry carried through the keyhole as if the entryway itself had a soul that mourned.

“She never aged,” said Ancient Miss Calhoun, who ran the blossom shop.

“She was twelve when I was twelve. She’s still twelve. Or fifteen. Or a ghost.”

Was she lively? A soul? A legend?

No one knew. No one challenged ask.

Until Jonah came back.

2. The Boy Who Knew Her Name

Jonah Lennox returned to Elmbrook after seventeen a long time of nonattendance. Presently a calm man of twenty-nine with dim, intelligent eyes, he was a essayist. A searcher of overlooked truths.

He came not for peace but for memory.

For her.

He hadn’t told anyone—not indeed himself out loud—but his heart had never cleared out that house. Nor had it cleared out the young lady behind that door.

“I utilized to listen her voice,” he whispered into the dusty hush of his childhood room. “She would sing.”

He had lived another entryway. Back when his mother was lively and trust still had a confront. He was twelve. And each night, around the hour when stars drained into see, he’d press his ear to the split backdrop and listen her:

“Little sheep, why dost thou cry?

In a field where shadows lie…”

A cradlesong. A voice like glass rain.

He had called out once. Inquired her name.

She had as it were answered, “I keep in mind you. But I’m not permitted to come out.”

And at that point, hush. Forever.

3. The Return to Wilt House

The house was still locked.

Its paint peeled like ancient scabs. The yard listed. But the second-story window—her window—remained unbroken. Window ornaments, unaltered. A single porcelain doll roosted in the outline like a overlooked guardian.

Jonah broke the bolt and entered with a whisper of apology.

Dust sprouted in clouds. Floorboards moaned beneath time. He rose the stairs, his hands shaking—not from fear, but something more old: grief.

The entryway was there.

The same.

Faded white. Gold handle. Little, brass keyhole like an eye.

He squeezed his ear to it again.

Silence.

Then—a breath.

And a voice, so swoon it appeared portion of the house:

“Is it... you?”

Jonah nearly wept.

“Yes,” he said. “It’s me. Jonah.”

4. The Voice Behind the Door

She didn’t open it.

Of course she didn’t.

But she talked. And Jonah sat exterior the entryway for hours as if time had collapsed in on itself. As if the past was not the past, but a room you may re-enter.

“What’s your name?” he inquired again.

“Clara,” she whispered. “I utilized to be Clara.”

“Used to?”

“I don’t know what I am now.”

She told him stories.

About a man with ruddy eyes who came as it were at night and encouraged on people’s fears. Around a mother who bolted her in to secure her from the world—or the world from her. Around a reflect that never appeared her reflection, and a journal that composed itself.

Jonah inquired to see her. She declined.

“I don’t need to harmed you,” she said. “Or maybe… I don’t need you to see what I’ve become.”

5. The Diary

On the third day, Jonah found her journal beneath a free floorboard next to the entryway. It was bound in calfskin that beat faintly with warmth. Pages yellowed, names smudged.

But the ink interior was fresh.

He examined aloud:

"March 5th: The entryway will not open, not since it's bolted, but since I'm anxious of light. I think I am getting to be shadow."

"March 11th: He visits in dreams presently. Ruddy eyes. Smoke breath. He whispers, 'Stay behind the entryway, Clara. The world does not need you.'”

"March 20th: Jonah talked to me. He recollected. So did I. I nearly touched the handle. But my hand turned to ash."

Jonah held the book near to his heart. “Clara… what did they do to you?”

She didn’t reply that day.

But that night, he envisioned of her.

6. The Dream Door

In his rest, Jonah stood in a cultivate of dead roses.

At its center stood the Wilt House. But instep of rot, it sparkled with bizarre life. Ivy crept in invert. Windows beat like breathing eyes. The entryway glowed.

He opened it.

Inside, she stood.

Clara.

Pale, not from passing, but from nonappearance of light. Her hair coasted as if submerged. Her eyes were silver, bottomless.

“Do you see me now?” she inquired, grinning a pitiful, little smile.

“Yes,” Jonah said, and his dream-self come to for her.

She ventured back. “No. You must not open it in the waking world. Not yet.”

“Why not?”

“Because the house is bolstering on me. And it’s hungry. If you break the seal, it will take you too.”

7. The Truth Underneath the Floorboards

Jonah woke and started looking the house for answers.

He tore through the cellar. Behind a divider of ancient racks, he found a rusted chest. Interior: photos, a doll with no eyes, and letters composed by Clara’s mother.

“Clara is diverse. The specialist said her intellect may ‘fracture beneath pressure.’ But I’ve seen her move objects, indeed open entryways without touching them.”

“The cleric said she’s checked. A ‘thin place’ exists around her. Spirits assemble like moths.”

“She talked to Jonah Lennox through the divider once more. I cautioned her. If she bonds, the spirits will take after. She must remain isolated.”

And at that point, one last letter, unsigned:

“The entryway must never open. Clara is a entryway herself.”

8. The Last Night

Jonah returned to the upstairs lobby. The house trembled as if standing up to his presence.

He touched the door.

“Clara,” he said, “I know presently. You’re not reviled. You’re a medium. You’re the entry between this world and the next.”

“I’m not fair a door,” she answered, wailing. “I’m the keyhole as well. Everything passes through me. The dreams, the obscurity, the grief.”

“You are not alone anymore.”

“Then why does it still hurt?”

“Because no one ever stood with you. Until now.”

He put his palm level against the wood.

“Let me in.”

A long quiet. A sigh.

The handle turned.

9. The Entryway Opens

Light. Blinding.

Jonah faltered in.

But there was no Clara. As it were a room purge of time. A reflect. A little bunk. And a child’s drawing on the divider of a boy and young lady holding hands, labeled “Clara + Jonah.”

The reflect sparkled. In its reflection, he saw her.

She stood behind him.

And behind her… shadows. Handfuls. Pale, spooky figures chained together by sorrow.

“They taken after me,” she said. “Because I listened.”

“You tuned in to their pain.”

“And presently I carry it.”

Jonah come to out. Not to touch—but to share the weight.

“Then let me carry it too.”

10. Opportunity and Flame

The spirits howled.

The house cracked.

The entryway, once a edge, presently got to be a wound healing.

Clara took Jonah’s hand. Light spread from them like a fire of benevolence. The house shivered, dividers dying recollections. The shadows started to vanish—one by one—released from her.

And when the final one blurred, Clara breathed out like somebody who had never breathed before.

“I’m here,” she whispered. “Really here.”

He smiled.

“You were never behind the door,” he said. “You were the door… and the way out.”

Epilogue: After the Door

They tore down the Wilt House a year later.

Jonah and Clara moved into a calm cabin on the edge of Elmbrook. She painted presently. He wrote.

Sometimes, she would stand by the window and murmur ancient lullabies.

Not to mourn.

But to remind herself—she was genuine. She was light.

And she was free.

Author’s Note:

This story is around injury, separation, and the recuperating control of human association. The young lady behind the entryway is a allegory for all the overlooked souls bolted interior themselves by despondency, fear, or disgrace. To reach them, one doesn’t kick down the door—but tunes in, holds up, cherishes.

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Muhammad Abdullah

Crafting stories that ignite minds, stir souls, and challenge the ordinary. From timeless morals to chilling horror—every word has a purpose. Follow for tales that stay with you long after the last line.

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