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The Gentle Ones

In the far north, something waits to be finished

By Fatal SerendipityPublished 3 months ago 13 min read
The Gentle Ones
Photo by David M. Chambers on Unsplash

Iouri woke before dawn, the stove cold. He rubbed his hands until the ache eased and set water to boil. The air held the sour trace of clay and smoke, a scent he welcomed for its proof that work still lived here, that he did too.

He shaped the face he’d begun the night before, though the clay no longer felt willing. A woman again. The eyes refused alignment, the jaw gave beneath his thumb. He eased the pressure as if apology might change her. The surface sagged, tired of him.

He sat back, watching her tilt under her own weight. His fingers remembered butter, how it bent to warmth, how each parade morning began with praise and ended in ruin. The ministry had called it sin, had spoken of restraint, as if art could be pure while men starved for it. They’d sent him north, and he hadn’t argued.

The island took him in. Clay replaced butter. Clay waited longer before it fell apart.

A knock sounded through the cabin. Three short taps broke the quiet.

He froze. No one came this far without warning. The ferry ran on Fridays. It was Tuesday.

Another knock followed.

He wiped his palms and went to the door.

Two men waited, one older, one young, both in clean coats.

The older spoke first. “Good morning. I’m Elder Tomas. This is Brother Simon.”

Iouri nodded.

Tomas smiled. “We wanted to check on you. To share a word of comfort.”

“I didn’t ask for comfort.”

“We don’t wait to be asked.”

Simon held out a pamphlet. His hand shook slightly, though his eyes didn’t.

Iouri took it. “How’d you get here?”

“We walk,” Tomas said.

“There’s no road.”

“Not one you see.”

Iouri felt anger rise but didn’t know where to place it. They were missionaries, men who thought words could change something. He told himself they’d leave soon.

Tomas looked past him. “You’re an artist.”

“I work,” Iouri said.

Simon’s gaze lingered on the sculpture. “She waits for a name.”

The clay woman slumped. Iouri wanted to cover her. “You came a long way to tell me that?”

“To tell you we care.”

“I don’t need care.”

Tomas stepped forward. His boots didn’t mark the snow. “Everyone does.”

Iouri kept the threshold. “You can stand by the stove. I’ll keep the door.”

They stayed outside. Tomas set a tin on the rail and a pamphlet on the table inside. “We bring comfort. We leave quickly.”

“Then speak.”

“We offer a visit from scripture and a cup of heat.”

Simon looked toward the sculpture. “She looks lonely.”

“She waits for balance.”

Tomas nodded. “Your care shows.”

“You came far for kindness.”

“The heart walks farther than the body.”

Their calm unsettled him. He waited until they turned toward the ridge, their boots leaving a faint gloss on the snow. Then he latched the door and stood still until the kettle hissed.

He poured water over old leaves and watched the steam rise. When the cup stilled, he opened the pamphlet. A single line waited inside. The eyes see what the heart demands.

He left the paper by the fire and turned to the table. The room was still. He pulled the cloth free and steadied the figure. The mouth lifted beneath his tool, shaping itself into something that almost smiled.

He turned from the sculpture and felt the air shift. When he looked down again, a new line waited beneath the first.

We see you.

He watched the door. The latch held. The window showed only his reflection. He told himself the world stayed ordinary, that heat softened clay, that paper curled, that memory filled what it must.

He bent to his work. A knock brushed the glass so lightly he thought he’d imagined it. He crossed the room, found only snow against the ridge, and turned back.

The pamphlet lay folded, the tin set neatly on top. The kettle clicked as though a hand had reached for it. He touched the figure to steady her and felt the clay draw against his palm. The mouth had opened wider. The lip caught the light, and when he pressed it back, it resisted him.

He set the tool down. “I’m working,” he said.

From the step came a sound, a pause that waited for his reply. He didn’t give one. Lifting the tin, he felt its warmth still fresh. He set it by the door and turned the lock.

At the window, his reflection stared back. When he faced the table again, the figure’s gaze had shifted toward the door.

The next knock came before sunrise.

Iouri had worked through the night, the floor powdered with clay. On the table, the figure leaned forward as though listening. He had shaped her shoulders to hold weight, yet she seemed to wait for words.

He cleaned his tools until another knock came, lighter than before.

He opened the door. Elder Tomas and Brother Simon stood there in the same coats, the same calm. Snow clung to their shoulders without melting.

“You came early,” Iouri said.

Tomas smiled. “The path stayed open.”

Simon’s eyes moved through the studio. “You didn’t sleep.”

“I work.”

“That’s faith,” Tomas said. “To labor until meaning answers.”

They entered without a word, the door closing behind them. Simon set a new pamphlet on the table, dry and perfect. At the top, the same line waited. The eyes see what the heart demands.

Iouri brushed a finger along the page. “You left one already.”

“That one carried the seed,” Tomas said. “This one carries the proof.”

Simon moved closer to the sculpture, his hand stopping short of her face. “She breathes,” he whispered.

“Clay keeps heat. Nothing more.”

Tomas watched him. “You gave her life when you refused despair.”

“I don’t refuse anything.”

“You refuse yourself,” Tomas said. “We offer rest.”

“Take your tea and go.”

Simon’s voice softened. “We feel your grief.”

“Let us hold it.”

“No.”

The word cut through the room. Tomas almost smiled. “Resistance means faith still lives in you.”

Iouri stepped forward. “Leave.”

They went without a word, their steps too quiet for snow. At the rail, Tomas brushed it clean though nothing had fallen. “We’ll come again when silence grows heavy,” he said.

Iouri closed the door. The air hummed. The pamphlet waited on the table. Faith watches the worker until the worker joins the work.

He burned it. The fire hissed and went still. When he turned, the clay woman’s eyes had cleared, the pupils fixed on the door.

“They won’t return,” he said. A thin crack traced her cheek.

Morning came white and cold. Pamphlets lurked everywhere. Under his coat. Below his cup. By the stove. All pristine. The words changed. Faith endures through witness. He buried them beneath a stone. Another appeared on the table. He tore it. Kept working. The clay figure grew. Her arms reached out. Pleading. A sound at the door. He waited. The latch lifted. Elder Tomas entered first. Simon followed. Their open coats carried frost at the edges.

“You locked it,” Iouri said.

“Locks can’t close what the heart invites.”

Simon’s eyes stayed on him. “You haven’t slept.”

“I work.”

Tomas looked at the figure. “You’ve reached confession.”

“I reached form.”

Simon ran a hand along the table’s edge. “She looks like the woman from your parade. The one that melted.”

Iouri stilled. “You couldn’t know that.”

“We know you,” Tomas said. “We listen.”

Iouri moved toward the stove. “You stand in a house that isn’t yours.”

“We share every house built from solitude.”

Simon began to weep, the tears clean and unbroken. “We feel everything you shape.”

“Leave.”

They didn’t. Tomas stepped closer, voice low. “You sculpt from pain. We offer mercy. Let us hold it.”

“I hold my own.”

“Not for long,” Tomas said.

Iouri raised the chisel. Simon's sobbing ceased. Tomas nodded toward the door. "We'll wait by the ridge." They left. Wind scattered pamphlets like snow. Iouri fed them to the flames. Through smoke, the clay woman's face seemed to soften.

“They can’t come back,” he said.

From inside the wall came a single knock.

The ferry never came that week. The shed stayed locked. The radio hissed but gave no voice. Iouri worked until his breath came rough. The island offered only wind and the scrape of his tools.

He woke one night to the door shifting open, the latch rising on its own. Cold spread across the floor. He stood with the chisel and waited.

No one entered. The fire died. He shut the door and found the figure facing him, arms raised. No sign of the visitors remained but the scent of tea. Outside, frost silvered the path toward the glacier. The temple stood blue against the ridge, candles burning where none should. He trudged through knee-deep snow until the cabin vanished behind him. Under milk-white moonlight, he stopped. Tomas and Simon waited at the temple doors.

“You shouldn’t be here,” Iouri said.

Tomas turned, his eyes calm. “You called us.”

“I called no one.”

Simon moved closer. “Every act of creation calls witness.”

“You mistake work for prayer.”

“The two never stand apart,” Tomas said.

They walked toward the temple. He followed, though his body begged for stillness. The doors opened without a sound, warm air spilling out like breath.

Inside, the ice glowed faint blue. Figures filled the chamber, every one his own. Faces from the parades, faces the state had destroyed. The air carried the scent of butter and ash.

He moved among them. At the center stood the clay woman, perfect now, her eyes alive with light.

Tomas waited beside her. “You see what waits for you,” he said.

Simon nodded. “She asked to be finished.”

“I finished her days ago.”

“She finishes you now.”

The floor trembled. Cracks opened in the ice. The door behind him had closed.

The figures turned slightly, all watching him. The island seemed to breathe.

He steadied himself. The light inside the chamber grew stronger. The sculptures stood in rows, their faces patient and known. The one nearest him had his own eyes.

Tomas lifted a candle from the dark. The flame burned without wind. “You’ve reached the center,” he said. “Everything you’ve shaped gathers here.”

“I made art. Nothing more.”

“You gave your memories form. You built a record of mercy.”

Simon ran his hand along a frozen basin, leaving prints in the frost. “Each piece holds a sorrow you couldn’t keep.”

“They’re clay.”

“They’re alive because you needed them to listen,” Tomas said.

Iouri approached the sculpture. The woman’s shoulders bent toward him, her face untroubled. When he brushed her cheek, warmth met his skin. A drop of water slid from her eye.

“You should sleep,” he murmured.

Tomas stepped nearer. “Peace requires completion. You began with faith and ended in fear. Faith must close the circle.”

“I don’t pray.”

“Your hands have prayed for years,” Tomas said.

The air thickened. The flame brightened. Simon lifted his candle, voice shaking. “Release her.”

“How?”

“Light them,” Tomas said. “Free them from the weight of your heart.”

The walls glimmered. Faces turned toward him. His sorrow stared back from every one. His hands moved before he could think. He took the candle and touched its flame to the nearest form. Wax seared his palm. He didn’t draw away.

The fire spread along the row. Heat split the ice above them. Light filled the temple. Meltwater streamed around his boots. The sculptures brightened, then softened, dissolving into mist.

Simon wept. “They return to the source.”

Tomas’s voice held steady. “You’ve given them rest.”

When the glow faded, the chamber stilled. One figure remained. It stood where he’d begun the first woman. It bore his face. The light inside it beat slow as a heart. Its eyes followed him.

He stepped closer. Steam rose around his boots. The scent of clay and smoke clung to the air. He placed his hand against its chest and felt the warmth pulse beneath.

Tomas stood beside him. Simon to the other side. Their flames leaned toward him.

“You see the truth,” Tomas said. “You’ve shaped your own deliverance.”

Simon’s voice broke. “You’ve given mercy form.”

“I ended the work,” Iouri said.

“You finished the prayer,” Tomas replied. “You stand at its altar.”

The figure smiled with his mouth, the curve soft, peaceful. His pulse thundered in his ears.

Tomas set a hand on his shoulder. “You don’t have to carry it anymore.”

Simon whispered, “Let it rest here.”

Heat spread through Iouri’s chest, loosening him. He leaned until his forehead touched the figure’s, the surface warm beneath his skin. His breath slowed, his pulse quieted, the world narrowing to light.

Tomas’s voice drifted through the glow. “You’re home.”

The brightness filled him. Then nothing did.

When the ferry came a month later, the island was still. The cabin door stood open, snow untouched around it. The stove held one last ember, faint as breath.

Inside the glacier temple, three figures waited. Two held candles. One knelt between them, eyes calm, hand open. The flames didn’t move.

A name was carved into the plinth beneath the kneeling figure. Convert Iouri. Beside it stood two more. Elder Tomas and Brother Simon. The letters glimmered, as though the light remembered them.

The candles burned on. Wax gathered and froze to glass. Warmth lingered where no flame reached. Silence filled the space, chosen and complete.

The woman stood near them, whole and unbroken. Her hands rested in her lap. The curve of her mouth hinted at speech. Light moved across her face in a slow rhythm that felt like breath.

Outside, snow covered the ridge. The ferry horn sounded once and vanished into mist. The island remained still. The sea turned, slow and forgetful.

Inside, the ice walls shone blue beneath the candlelight. Meltwater traced the floor and sealed again with frost. The figures leaned together, their shadows joined.

Wind circled the doorway but stopped at the threshold. The flames rose and brushed the ice above, leaving a faint gold trace that caught the dark.

Morning light crept into the temple and spilled across the chamber, deepening as it touched the ice. The air shivered once, then fell quiet.

By the time the ferry left, the island held its stillness. Frost brightened the cabin roof while the path to the glacier vanished beneath new snow.

Inside, the three figures endured. Their faces seemed caught between thought and faith, and the woman watched them as though remembering a prayer.

Silence took root in the chamber. It drifted through the light, through the ice, through every breath that lingered there, patient as the world itself.

Days blurred. The ferry vanished; the ridge stood white beneath an unchanging sky. Iouri's cabin remained empty, door ajar, stove cold. When the next crew arrived, they reported light above the glacier, movement beneath ice. Some claimed candles burned where none should, and wind spoke as it crossed the ridge, answering itself in stone.

Inside the temple, the figures stood frozen. Candles burned steadily. Water pooled then froze at the clay woman's feet. Her gaze remained fixed on the abandoned world.

In the cabin, his tools slept beneath a dusting of clay. A single pamphlet rested by the kettle, its words unchanged. Faith endures through witness.

The page waited in the stillness, certain of its place.

A faint wind stirred the edge. The stove gave a low sigh and fell silent. Outside, the island stood awake and listening.

At the glacier, the light thickened until it seemed to live. The three stood as one, their faces stirring faintly while the woman’s figure shone between them. Warmth spread through the chamber like a pulse returning after long silence.

Later, some swore the glow reached the sea, that the water brightened as if dawn had risen beneath it.

After that, his name was spoken only by the harbor clerk who kept the ledger. The island remembered the rest.

The glacier stayed. The light inside it moved softly, as if the world had begun to pray in quiet.

He took a step. “It’s me.”

“It’s you made whole,” said Tomas.

Simon’s voice trembled. “The heart wanted this.”

The words sank into him. He thought of the pamphlets and the line that had followed him through every silence. He thought of the nights spent speaking to clay, asking for an answer he had never heard, until now.

Light rippled through the walls. Shapes moved inside the ice. Water whispered beneath the floor, and heat gathered close.

Tomas reached for him. “Let it go,” he said. “We’ll keep it for you.”

Simon's hand found his. The touch burned yet steadied him. Warmth flooded his body. His knees buckled. The clay figure caught him, its surface yielding, alive. His breath left him like the first moment of sleep.

When the ferry came again, the island lay still beneath new snow. The cabin door stood open.

Inside the glacier temple, three figures waited. One held a candle. One knelt in prayer. Between them stood a third, calm-faced and newly formed, its eyes open to the light.

A name was carved into the stone beneath the figure, the letters clear beneath the ice. Convert Iouri. Beside it, faint beneath the frost, two more glimmered, Elder Tomas and Brother Simon.

The candles still burned. Their flames rose and water slipped across the floor, freezing again before it reached the walls. Light gathered above them, filling the chamber until the ice itself began to shine.

Warmth lingered in the air as if creation had never stopped. Silence pressed close, full and alive.

Beyond the glacier, the sea lay flat and bright. The ferry drifted across without sound. The island stood beneath its veil of frost, watching.

Inside, the light stayed. It glowed like memory refusing to fade, steady and whole, the last mercy of the gentle ones.

Psychological

About the Creator

Fatal Serendipity

Fatal Serendipity writes flash, micro, speculative and literary fiction, and poetry. Their work explores memory, impermanence, and the quiet fractures between grief, silence, connection and change. They linger in liminal spaces and moments.

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