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The Filament Within

It Glows--That's All We Need to Know.

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 3 months ago β€’ Updated 3 months ago β€’ 2 min read
The Filament Within
Photo by Shreyansh Mishra on Unsplash

Yesterday, 21st October was National Light Bulb Day...the day Edison introduced the first light bulb with a filament.

In honour of the day, here's a little story about sparks, love, and--

Presence.

Sometimes, a little flicker of light--and presence--is all that's needed.

πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘

William Long was put out. The disgruntled electrician lacked a social life--the thirty-something-year-old spent most of his days in a garage, fiddling with light bulbs that flickered at will and lamps that emitted buzzing noises that grated on the ears.

Still, he kept the lights on--literally. Not for profit--

But for love.

Of his eleven-year-old daughter, whose giggles had once turned the atmosphere in the garage from mere electric static into sparkling fireworks.

He was a craftsman consumed by glow.

And memory.

Each flicker spoke of her.

The divorce.

No interaction in years.

So he couldn't keep the garage silent--the quietness hummed, flooding his mind with tears he couldn't shed.

At least not openly.

πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘

One evening, the cats and dogs came down in humongous litters.The buzz of half-reparied bulbs flooded the garage. William scrambled from his desk to answer a frantic knock on the door.

He opened it to a teen girl, soaked to the skin. Her parka and umbrella offered no protection.

Something in her eyes stirred something in William.

In her slender young hands was a battered desk lamp.

Dark. Obviously not functioning.

The girl held it up with a sheepish grin.

"Sir, could you get this working again? I'm sorry that I can't pay you. All I ask is that it works again."

William noticed how gently she held the lamp.

He took it from her, albeit unwillingly.

As he tinkered with it, he observed her eyes on him.

Watchful and meticulous, as though offering guidance.

With a knowing gentleness.

The lamp flickered as William continued his work, but the girl was a picture of calm.

Finally, a faint hum.

"I know this lamp isn't the best, " It was as though she was reading his mind. " I only want it to shine."

At that moment, William knew what the lamp was for--not its steadiness or quality, but its presence.

πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘

Some tweaking from the electrician, and steady light.

Though it wasn't the brightest.

William hissed under his breath, ready to admit defeat. But the teen stepped closer.

She patted him on the shoulder. A familiar touch.

"It's glowing. That's all you needed to do for me. All it needed to do. All I needed."

She left the garage with the lamp, turning back with a nod and a smile that he knew--

But couldn't place.

Then, on a shelf behind his workbench, a photograph.

Of the girl.

He still didn't know her. But felt her.

Tugging at his heart in ways too knowing.

Weeks later, the teen girl returned.

The same knowing presence.

She showed him how she placed the lamp on her desk so she could study.

She left again, not telling him who she was.

Or about the photograph she had left on the shelf.

He smiled, somehow content---

With acceptance--and a little mystery.

πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘βš‘πŸ”§πŸ› οΈβœ¨πŸ’‘πŸ’‘

Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.

If you were William, how would you have reacted to the girl? Do share in the comments below.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • KA Stefana 3 months ago

    Oh the mystery of it all! What a way to leave us hanging! William is perhaps patient and will wait for the mystery to unfold.

  • Rasma Raisters3 months ago

    Well done, enjoyed your story,

  • Sean A.3 months ago

    It seems very sweet and ghostly. Am I right that she’s the ghost of his daughter?

  • Dana Crandell3 months ago

    A well-told story with a bit of intrigue at the end. Nicely done!

  • I wonder who that girl is. I too would have helped her, like William did. But I would have kept asking who she is. Loved your story!

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