The Fabric Of America
A Social Commentary
She saw it briefly when they took her away; that beautiful Statue of Liberty, torch held high lighting the way for her kind. What had she done wrong? Exist? Why invite the huddled masses yearning to breathe free to the golden door if they don’t want to let them in? What a cruel joke.
Juanita rubbed the bump on the otherwise smooth metal chain link fence. The stitch in her finger itched, stroking it on the metal offered relief. She shivered, remembering how it got caught under the sewing needle of the factory machine. It could've been worse. She was lucky, except she was here with most of the other factory workers. Always the adventurer, she was ready for new experiences, but five days in a holding pen wasn’t what she had in mind.
Click, click, click, the sound of boots announced the guard's arrival. Her blue angular uniform and dark Hispanic hair pulled into a severe top knot exuded authority and control. In fluid Spanish, she yelled, “Everyone is returning to Mexico. I’ll escort you one at a time to get your things and get on a bus.”
Despair fell as tears from Juanita's eyes.
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The processing completed, the guard handed over Juanita’s personal items. There on the guard’s cuff, Juanita noticed a small error in the stitching, like the seam that caught her finger at the factory. “Is your uniform new?”
“Yes. How did you know?”
“Just a guess.”
“Come on, let’s get you to the bus.”
About the Creator
S.J. Frederick
I've been writing for a few years in my spare time. I'm trying to find my voice, though I'm not sure if I'll know when it's here. For now, I'm just enjoying the journey.
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Comments (6)
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Really efficient and emotional storytelling, with a great sting in the tail. Congrats on Top Story 🙏 😄
Great storytelling! I love how it came back to the stitching at the end; the social commentary is very effective too!
What an impactful and emotional read. Congratulations on the Top Story - it's well-deserved.
Wow a very well written piece of work that leaves you with a lot to think about. Love it!
She made the deporting guard’s uniform? 😱great short story, you packed a lot of visuals into it!