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The Eyes That Remember

Some Glances Stay Long After They’re Gone

By The voice of the heartPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

Everyone said she had strange eyes.

They weren’t blue or green or hazel.

They were dark—so dark they seemed black at first glance. But in the sunlight, they shimmered like molten bronze, full of something ancient, something searching.

Her name was Meher, and in her eyes, people saw both a question and an answer they couldn’t quite name.

She didn’t speak much. She didn’t need to.

Because when Meher looked at you, it felt like she was reading your past, not just your face.

When I met her, it was at a train station.

It was raining lightly, and I was carrying far too many bags and a heart still aching from a recent goodbye I hadn’t wanted. I’d missed my train. I was frustrated, damp, and more tired than I realized.

And then I saw her.

She was sitting on a bench, staring at nothing, yet noticing everything. She wasn’t wearing makeup. Her hair was wet from the drizzle. Her eyes locked with mine—just for a second—but in that second, something in me stopped aching.

Not because she was beautiful (though she was), and not because I believed in fate (I didn’t). But because for the first time in weeks, someone looked at me and truly saw me.

We didn’t speak that day.

She boarded her train. I boarded mine later.

But I couldn’t forget her eyes.

Weeks passed.

And then one afternoon, I saw her again—this time in a second-hand bookstore near my university. She was flipping through an old poetry book, her fingers trailing over the words as if she were tasting them.

I walked up to her and said, “You were at the station that day.”

She looked up, not startled—just calm.

“I remember your eyes,” I added, awkwardly.

She smiled faintly. “They tend to remember people before I do.”

Her name was Meher.

She loved old books, soft music, and thunderstorms.

She believed that eyes were the most honest liars in the world—capable of hiding pain while showing love, or revealing secrets we didn’t even know we carried.

She said, “You can learn more from the silence in someone’s eyes than from the words they say.”

And I believed her.

Because over the next few months, her eyes told me stories long before her mouth ever did.

They told me she’d lost someone.

They told me she still waited for a goodbye that never came.

They told me she was scared of being loved too much or too little.

They told me she was trying to unlearn fear.

We became close—closer than I expected.

Not through grand gestures or passionate confessions.

But through quiet evenings, shared books, and eyes that said everything we didn’t.

And yet, every time I looked into her eyes, I felt like I was falling—not into love, but into understanding.

It was terrifying. And beautiful.

Then one day, she stopped showing up.

No messages. No calls. No visits to the bookstore.

She vanished like a whispered promise—soft, sudden, incomplete.

I tried to find her. I asked around.

One old shopkeeper said, “She used to come here often, that girl with the stormy eyes. But I haven’t seen her in a while.”

Months passed.

I moved cities. Life changed.

But I never forgot her eyes.

Sometimes, I’d see a stranger on the subway and think it was her.

Sometimes, I’d hear a song and remember the way she looked out the window when it played.

Sometimes, I’d dream of her—not of her voice, or her touch, but of her gaze, steady and fragile all at once.

Years later, at an art gallery in a quiet part of town, I found a painting that stopped me in my tracks.

It wasn’t of Meher.

It was just a pair of eyes, painted in brilliant, haunting detail—shimmering with bronze and sorrow and secrets.

The title of the painting?

“The Eyes That Remember.”

Below it, the artist’s name was written in small letters: M. Azaan.

I smiled. Of course she wouldn’t use her real name.

But I knew.

I stood there for a long time, just staring at the canvas, like maybe—just maybe—she was staring back.

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