The Epic Odyssey Part 1
Two Kids go on the adventure of a lifetime
One day two friends named Max and Aaron were sitting on Max's porch and Aaron said what to do today max. Hmm we could go to the arcade, max no said Aaron , the super mart no ! Then what should we do today ? Well let ‘s go to the palace of sweet and when the two friends were at their favorite hang out there was an unexpected surprise . Max we have all summer to do something and we don’t know how to use it . I’m going to get another choco mountain . So Aaron went to the counter then suddenly music started and balloons were falling. Then the cashier said it’s your lucky day kid you get to bring one of your friends on the adventure of a lifetime . You get to go to the mega world and you'll also be the first ones to ride the new sonic jet . I guess this is the thing that we ‘ll remember for the rest of our lives, said Max .
On the day of the trip Aaron and max were at mega world riding on tons of rides with 500 tickets and dollars they got from the ticket stand max won prizes like a telescope, and a sack full of fresh food . While Aaron won big prizes like a glider the both of them rides like the spinner bowl and the zero gravity ride but the one ride they both wanted to go on was the sonic jet !! They were also the first ones to ride it where the journey begins . Once they were on the ride it started going really fast. Max said this is awesome ! Then the ride was going faster Aaron said I don’t feel so good . Me neither said max I was going to tell them to stop Hey can you stop please but nobody heard them . Then the owner of mega world told the worker to stop the ride because he thought it was going to fast so the worker pulled the lever but it wouldn’t stop and the worker pulled it harder until pop !
The lever broke then all of a sudden the sonic jet made a crunching sound and it happened the jet got loose and it flew ! Once they were airborne into the sky Max couldn’t believe what was happening. The greatest day of his and Aaron’s life just turned into a horrible nightmare . Then the sonic jet started slowing down, that's when the two realized they were gonna crash . Boom ! They landed in a forest. I don't like the looks of this place. that’s just great we go on the new ride in the mega world and where does it land us in a forest said Aaron . Well we should try to find a way back, said Max . While they were hiking in the treacherous forest they came across a great river. Now what are we supposed to do max shouted hey look I think it’s a raft when they approached it Aaron said it looks old yeah but if we cover all the the cracks it could hold both of us . So once they had the idea Aaron got some twigs to fill in the thin spots , max got thick flat wood and when it put it together they had a raft once they were on the river the water was ruff they finally reached the end max and Aaron started to find there way back home . After a few hours Max said I’m starving and there’s nothing here to eat except poisonous berries . After 3 hours of hiking Max shouted I can’t take it anymore !! We are lost . Then an Indian boy came out and completely shocked the two .
The boy pointed a spear in the duo’s face and said stop you savages I may be young but I a strong enough warrior to stop you scum . Who are you calling savages you're the one holding the spear said Aaron yeah we’re just lost when the roller coaster we were riding flew from the railing and landed here. Then the boy started laughing at the top of his lungs and jokingly he said if there’s one thing I know is that Kaleesh don’t make jokes and that was hilarious . My name is Kwami and my village is just up East .
It’s nice to meet you Kwami. I'm Max and this is Aaron. You said something about savages to us. Who are they? They are Kaleesh, people who time travel to turn all of planet Earth’s greatest monuments from ever being built thus altering events that happen in the timeline, said Kwami . That’s some wicked stuff, said Aaron but who’s behind all of this. The person that caused this crisis is Simon Prodius, the villain of time . When the trio finally made it to Kwami’s village both Aaron and Max were amazed by how high –tech the village was.
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Kylecovey Smith
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