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The Echo of a Goodbye

A tale of love,loss and the courage to let go.

By tutor herryPublished about a year ago 2 min read
Silence speaks louder than words

It was not the slam of the door,

nor the hurried footsteps fading into the night,

but the silence that followed,

a silence that spoke louder than any farewell.

Her silhouette lingered in the doorway,

outlined by the dim, flickering light,

a hesitant pause,

as if the air itself begged her to stay.

I wanted to call her name,

but the lump in my throat swallowed the words.

How does one hold onto a moment

that is already slipping away?

Her eyes, pools of sorrow,

reflected the weight of a thousand unshed tears.

Her lips trembled,

caught between the need to explain

and the futility of words.

"Goodbye," she whispered,

a fragile sound that shattered my world.

It wasn’t just a word—it was a severance,

a tearing of the thread that had bound us together.

I reached out instinctively,

but my hand met only the cold emptiness of air.

She was already gone,

leaving behind a void that filled the room

with the ache of absence.

The walls seemed to close in,

pressing the echo of her goodbye into my skin.

I could still smell her perfume,

a haunting reminder of what was,

and what would never be again.

Memories cascaded like a torrent—

her laughter, a melody that once colored my days,

her touch, a gentle reassurance in my darkest hours.

Now, they were phantoms,

dancing cruelly on the edges of my mind.

I stumbled to the window,

watching her figure dissolve into the shadows.

The streetlight flickered,

as if it too struggled to hold onto her presence.

Questions swirled in my mind—

Was it something I said?

Was it something I didn’t say?

But answers eluded me,

lost in the labyrinth of misunderstandings

and the unspoken words

we had let fester between us.

The house seemed to exhale a heavy sigh,

its warmth seeping away with her departure.

Even the ticking of the clock felt accusatory,

each second a reminder

of the time I had wasted.

Days turned into weeks,

but the echo of her goodbye remained,

a ghostly refrain that haunted my solitude.

I replayed that moment endlessly,

searching for a way to rewrite it,

to turn the goodbye into a stay.

But life offers no rewinds,

no second takes.

Her absence became a constant companion,

filling the spaces where her laughter once resided.

And yet, amidst the sorrow,

there was a strange kind of beauty

in the way she had loved me enough to leave.

She deserved more than I could give,

more than the half-hearted promises

and the fragile hopes we had built our love upon.

So, I began to write—

letters to her I’d never send,

poems that tried to capture her essence,

stories where we never had to say goodbye.

The ink became my solace,

a way to keep her close

even as she drifted further away.

One day, I stumbled upon a photo of us,

tucked away in a forgotten corner.

Her smile was radiant,

her eyes alight with the dreams

we once shared.

I traced her face with trembling fingers,

and for the first time,

I whispered, "Goodbye."

It wasn’t closure—it never is.

But it was acceptance,

a fragile step forward

into a world without her.

The echo of her goodbye

still lingers,

a melody etched into my soul.

And yet, I carry it with me,

a reminder of what we had,

and the courage it took

to let it go.

Fantasy

About the Creator

tutor herry

Freelance writer specializing in engaging content and compelling storytelling, delivering high-quality work tailored to client needs.

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