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The Door That Never Closes

The House with a Secret

By Muhammad RiazPublished 5 months ago 4 min read

The House with a Secret


When I first moved into the house on Hollow Street, I thought I had stumbled upon the perfect deal. A quiet neighborhood, ivy climbing the brick walls, and a rent that didn’t make me feel like I was drowning in bills. The house was old, yes, but charming in that way only forgotten architecture can be.

But on the first night, I noticed it. The door.

It wasn’t the front door or even a bedroom door — it was tucked away in the back hallway, almost hidden as if someone had designed the house to forget it. A narrow wooden door, painted the same color as the wall, with a brass knob that was cold to the touch.

And it never stayed shut.


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First Encounters



The first time I closed it, I didn’t think much of it. A draft, I assumed, or maybe the old wood swelling with humidity. But when I passed the hallway later that night, there it was — cracked open again, as though it were breathing.

I tried again. I shut it firmly, twisting the knob until it clicked. Ten minutes later, I found it ajar.

By the third night, I was beginning to feel unsettled. I pushed a chair against it, even stacked a few boxes in front. Still, every time I walked by, the door stood half-open, mocking me.

I didn’t sleep much those nights.


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What Lies Beyond



The door led to a small, windowless room. Empty. Just bare wooden floors and peeling wallpaper, with the faint smell of dust and something I couldn’t quite place — like smoke, or maybe burnt wood.

There was no reason for it to bother me, and yet it did. The room felt heavier than the rest of the house, as if the air inside resisted me. I could stand there for only a few minutes before my chest grew tight, like I was intruding on something.

One evening, I stood in the doorway longer than usual. And that’s when I noticed it — faint scratches along the inside of the doorframe. As if someone had clawed at it, desperately trying to get out.


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Memories I Didn’t Want

I told myself it was just my imagination, but deep down I knew better. The door was more than wood and brass. It was holding something, or maybe it was holding me.

Strange dreams started to creep in. I’d wake up sweating, convinced that someone had been standing at the foot of my bed. Sometimes, I’d hear faint knocking sounds from the hallway when the house was still.

Worse still, the room behind that door started to remind me of things I wanted to forget.

When I was a child, there had been another door in another house. A place I swore I’d buried in the past. Behind that door had been arguments, violence, and a kind of silence that screamed louder than words. I had promised myself I would never think of it again.

But here it was, following me.


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The Night It Opened Wide



On the seventh night, the door didn’t stop at opening a crack. I woke to a creaking sound that made my blood run cold. When I stumbled into the hallway, I saw it — wide open, waiting.

The air inside that little room was freezing, and the smell of smoke was stronger. My instinct screamed at me to shut it and run, but instead, I stepped inside.

The moment I crossed the threshold, the floor groaned beneath me. And then I heard it — not in my ears, but in my head. A whisper. Soft, broken, but familiar.

“Why did you leave?”

I froze. My hands trembled. That voice belonged to someone I had tried to erase — my father.


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Facing the Past

I stumbled backward, heart pounding. The room darkened, shadows twisting along the walls like smoke. The whispers grew louder, voices overlapping — anger, sorrow, begging.

And then I understood. The door wasn’t haunted by strangers. It was haunted by me. By every memory I tried to lock away.

The scratches on the frame weren’t random. They were my own, from years ago, when I was just a child, trying to escape a house filled with rage.

This door didn’t belong to Hollow Street. It belonged to my past, dragged into my present, demanding to be seen.


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Closing the Door

I don’t remember how long I stood there, shivering, staring into a room that was suddenly no longer empty. I saw fragments of myself at different ages — a scared boy hiding in shadows, a teenager running away, a man trying to pretend none of it had happened.

And then, for the first time in years, I didn’t run. I whispered into the cold air:

“I remember. But I won’t let it own me anymore.”

The shadows seemed to still. The whispers faded. And when I stepped back into the hallway, the door gently clicked shut behind me.


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The Door Today



It’s been months now. The door still sits there in the hallway, but it no longer opens on its own. I walk past it daily, and sometimes I place my hand on the knob. Cold, but silent.

I don’t plan to open it again.

But I know now that some doors never truly close. They live inside us, waiting. The only choice we have is whether to face what’s behind them — or keep pretending they don’t exist.

And for the first time in a long while, I’ve decided not to pretend anymore.


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💬 Author’s Note to Readers
If this story gave you chills or made you think about the “doors” in your own life, I’d love to hear your thoughts. Drop a comment below, share this with someone who loves a good mystery, and don’t forget to leave a ❤️ to support. Your feedback means the world and helps me keep writing more stories like this!

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About the Creator

Muhammad Riaz

  1. Writer. Thinker. Storyteller. I’m Muhammad Riaz, sharing honest stories that inspire, reflect, and connect. Writing about life, society, and ideas that matter. Let’s grow through words.

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  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli 5 months ago

    I can relate. We all have doors to open and remember . 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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