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“The Girl Who Returned from the Fire”

They buried her a year ago. So why did she knock on my door last night?

By Muhammad RiazPublished 6 months ago 3 min read


The first time I saw her, she was walking through the flames.

The news said the fire had taken everything. Our town’s oldest mansion, the Albury Estate, burned to ash one summer night with a single soul inside—Clara Wren, the orphan girl who had inherited it. I was the last person to see her alive.

Or so I thought.

Now, exactly one year later, I opened my door to find Clara standing there, barefoot, wrapped in the same white nightgown she wore the night of the fire. Her skin was untouched. Her hair was soaked from the storm outside. And her eyes—they held something dark and ancient, like they’d stared too long into the abyss and the abyss had blinked first.

“Clara?” I whispered, throat dry. “You’re… alive?”

She smiled faintly. “Not quite,” she said. “I need your help.”


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Clara and I had been friends once, back in school. She was brilliant, quiet, and a little strange. We used to talk about stars, ghosts, and how silence sometimes said more than words. But life pulled us apart. She inherited the mansion after her grandmother passed. I became a journalist, writing clickbait stories and chasing local scandals for rent money.

The night of the fire, I went to her house to interview her for a piece on the Albury legacy. She never opened the door. Smoke rose around midnight. The flames consumed the estate faster than the firefighters could arrive. Her body was never recovered.

We mourned. Lit candles. Whispered rumors.

But we never expected her to come back.


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She sat across from me now, clutching a scorched leather journal.

“I never died,” she said quietly, flipping open the book. “I crossed over.”

The pages were filled with symbols—stars within circles, sketches of doors, and words written in Latin. One phrase repeated: Per ignem transire—Through the fire, pass.

“It was a ritual,” she explained. “Old magic, hidden in the estate’s foundation. My grandmother knew about it. She warned me never to open the basement door.”

“You did, didn’t you?” I said.

Clara nodded. “I was curious. And foolish. Something was calling to me from the other side. I thought I could reach it.”

“What was it?”

Her lips trembled. “I don’t know. But it followed me back.”


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The room grew colder.

Clara’s hand trembled as she pointed to one sketch: a black shape slipping through a doorframe drawn in fire.

“When I crossed back last night,” she said, “I felt it latch onto me. It’s still inside the ruins of the house. But it’s growing stronger. And soon, it’ll want more than me.”

I didn’t know whether to believe her. Logic screamed this is madness. But I remembered the fire. The way her body was never found. The nightmares I had for weeks—screams in smoke, shadows in the glass.

“What do you need from me?” I asked.

She looked at me with a strange mix of fear and trust. “Help me seal the door. You have to come with me—tonight. Before the veil closes.”


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We returned to the ruins just before midnight.

The charred skeleton of the Albury Estate stood like a haunted memory, ash crunching beneath our feet. Rain poured, but the air felt thick and dry—like the fire had never truly gone out.

Clara led me to the basement. The door was still there—half-melted, warped, but standing. And behind it, a wind howled without sound.

“This is where it lives now,” she whispered.

We stepped inside.

The walls were lined with mirrors, all cracked. In each, I saw not my reflection, but twisted images of myself—burned, screaming, crumbling to ash.

“Don’t look too long,” Clara warned. “It feeds on fear.”

She opened her journal and began to chant. Latin words filled the air, vibrating through the floor. The shadows writhed, pulling inward like smoke into a vacuum.

Then—I saw it.

A figure, tall and formless, emerged from the darkness. Its face was an empty void, its arms like dripping wax. It hissed my name without lips.

“Don’t stop!” I yelled.

But Clara had frozen.

“It’s in my mind,” she cried. “It knows my fear.”

I grabbed her hand. “Then let it know mine too.”

I looked the thing in the face—if it had a face—and whispered: You don’t belong here.

For a moment, I felt it inside me. Like cold fingers in my skull. Memories twisted. My mother’s voice. My own death. Clara screaming.

But then—light.

Clara’s journal burst into flames, and a shockwave threw us backward. The door slammed shut.

The creature was gone.


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We crawled out of the ruins just before sunrise.

Clara looked older. Lighter. Like she’d shed years of sorrow in one night.

“Is it over?” I asked.

She nodded slowly. “For now. But some doors never stay closed forever.”


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I published the story a week later. Left out the demons and rituals. Called it an unsolved mystery, an eerie return. Readers ate it up.

But I kept the real truth between us.

Sometimes, when I walk past the ashes of the Albury Estate, I hear a whisper. Not loud. Not angry.

Just waiting.


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Muhammad Riaz

  1. Writer. Thinker. Storyteller. I’m Muhammad Riaz, sharing honest stories that inspire, reflect, and connect. Writing about life, society, and ideas that matter. Let’s grow through words.

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