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The Coffee Shop Where Time Stands Still

A tale of warmth, wonder, and the little pauses that change everything

By Ian MunenePublished 4 months ago 5 min read

I don’t know if you’ve ever stumbled upon a place that feels like it was waiting for you, but that’s exactly how I felt the first time I walked into “Evelyn’s Corner Café.” It was tucked between a laundromat and an antique bookstore, a place so ordinary I’d passed by a hundred times without noticing it. But on that gray Thursday afternoon, when the rain chased me off the street, I ducked inside, and something quietly extraordinary began.

The first thing I noticed was the smell: rich coffee beans mixed with a hint of cinnamon and old wood. The second thing I noticed was the clock. It hung above the counter, old-fashioned with brass hands, stuck at exactly 3:17 p.m. No matter how long I sat there that first afternoon, it didn’t move. I assumed it was broken.

Behind the counter stood Evelyn herself, a woman in her sixties with silver-streaked hair pulled into a loose bun. She greeted me as though she already knew my name. “Cold out there,” she said, sliding a steaming mug across the counter without asking what I wanted. “This will help.”

The coffee was perfect—smooth, bold, almost velvety. But more than that, it made me feel… safe. Like every worry I had—emails piling up, deadlines, the nagging ache of loneliness—could wait until after I finished that cup.

Over the next few weeks, I found myself returning. Always around 3:17. Always the same clock, the same warm greeting, the same cup of coffee waiting for me before I even spoke. And though the world outside rushed on—buses hissing, people rushing, phones buzzing—inside Evelyn’s, it felt like time stood still. Conversations lingered longer, laughter rang louder, and I swear the colors of the world were sharper there.

It wasn’t just me who noticed. There was Daniel, a middle-aged man who carried a notebook filled with half-finished poems. There was Layla, a college student who came in to escape the noise of her crowded dorm. And Mr. Harper, a retired teacher, who claimed the coffee was the only thing that kept his arthritis at bay. We were strangers, yet somehow familiar to one another, drawn together like pieces of a puzzle that didn’t fit anywhere else but here.

One evening, curiosity got the better of me. After the others had left and the rain had started again, I asked Evelyn about the clock.

She looked up at it, then back at me with a smile that was both knowing and evasive. “Oh, that old thing? It stopped years ago. But sometimes… sometimes a broken clock tells more truth than a working one.”

I laughed nervously. “What do you mean?”

She wiped down the counter slowly. “Time doesn’t matter here. You’ll see.”

The words lingered with me long after I left.

And then something happened that made me believe her.

It was a Tuesday. I had come in feeling heavier than usual—work stress, family arguments, the weight of choices I couldn’t seem to get right. I must have looked as tired as I felt because Evelyn simply placed her hand over mine when she handed me my cup. “You’re safe here,” she said softly.

I sat down in the corner by the window and stared at the raindrops racing each other down the glass. Somewhere between sips of coffee and the sound of jazz humming softly from the old radio, I realized I couldn’t remember how long I’d been there. Minutes? Hours? Outside, the street looked exactly as it had when I arrived. The rain hadn’t changed. The people hadn’t moved. Everything was frozen—except for us inside the café.

Panic flared in me for a moment, but then Daniel laughed from his table, and Layla set her book down with a sigh of contentment, and Mr. Harper adjusted his scarf with his usual gruff charm. None of them looked alarmed. They looked… at peace.

Evelyn caught my eye from behind the counter. “Now you understand,” she said simply.

I wanted to ask more, but the words stuck in my throat. Because deep down, I did understand. The café wasn’t a place to escape time. It was a place where time paused long enough for us to breathe, to connect, to remember that life wasn’t meant to be rushed through like a checklist.

Weeks turned into months, and I kept going back. Not every day—just when the noise of the world got too loud. Every visit was the same: the stuck clock, the perfect coffee, the feeling that nothing outside those walls could touch me. And each time, I left lighter, as though I’d been given just enough strength to face the rushing world again.

I never told anyone outside the café about it. Not because I wanted to keep it secret, but because I didn’t know how to explain it. How do you tell someone that you found a place where time stands still, and they’ll believe you? It sounded like a fairytale.

One afternoon, I arrived to find Evelyn sitting at my usual table. She handed me the coffee herself and said, “Places like this don’t last forever, you know. They exist when people need them most. And one day, when you no longer need it, you’ll walk by and it will be gone.”

Her words startled me, and I wanted to argue, to insist I would always need this place. But when I looked into her calm, steady eyes, I realized she was right.

The thought made me ache. Yet it also made me cherish each visit more. I leaned into the laughter, the quiet conversations, the simple joy of a warm cup in my hands.

And then, one day, it happened.

I walked down the street where the café had always been, and there was only a blank brick wall between the laundromat and the antique bookstore. No windows, no door, no faint scent of cinnamon and coffee in the air.

For a long time, I just stood there, staring at the empty space, wondering if I had imagined it all. But when I reached into my bag, I found an old coffee receipt, stained with cinnamon. The time stamp read 3:17 p.m.

I smiled then, through the tears. Because even though Evelyn’s Corner Café was gone, I realized it had given me something I would carry forever: the reminder that sometimes you need to pause, breathe, and savor the present moment.

And that was enough.

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About the Creator

Ian Munene

I share stories that inspire, entertain, and sometimes make you laugh—or cringe. From confessions to motivation to fiction, my words are here to connect and spark emotion.

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  • syed4 months ago

    So nice story dear. Do you agree with me to support each other.support will grow us faster ok .

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