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"The Clockmaker's Secret"

Dramatic and more emotional

By Israr khanPublished 6 months ago 3 min read


In the heart of a forgotten town where time seemed to stand still, there lived an old clockmaker named Elias Grey. His shop, tucked between two crooked brick buildings, had no sign — only the soft ticking of countless clocks behind foggy windows betrayed its purpose.

Elias was a quiet man with silver-threaded hair and eyes the color of tarnished brass. He spoke little, smiled rarely, and worked always. The townsfolk said he could fix any clock — but he never let anyone watch him work. Rumors circled like dust in sunlight: that he could stop time, that he had once turned it back.

No one believed these tales. Not really.

Until one rainy evening, a girl named Lila stepped inside his shop.

She was no more than seventeen, with wild curls and storm-gray eyes. Her voice cracked slightly as she held out a small, broken pocket watch.

“It was my father’s,” she said. “Stopped the night he died.”

Elias took the watch in his thin hands, studied its silent face, and said only, “Come back in three days.”

She nodded. But something in the way he said it — the way the air seemed to hush around him — made her heart stir. She left without another word.

The next morning, Lila couldn’t resist returning early. She peeked through the dusty window.

Inside, the clockmaker wasn’t repairing the watch.

He was speaking to it.

His voice was low, almost melodic, and the air shimmered faintly around him. As she watched, the gears of the broken watch trembled… then turned.

Lila gasped — too loudly.

Elias looked up sharply. Their eyes met through the glass.

He said nothing when she stepped inside again, soaked and breathless.

“I saw,” she whispered. “What… what are you doing?”

Elias studied her carefully. Then, to her shock, he smiled.

“There is a rhythm,” he said softly, “beneath time. Most people live above it, like walking on ice. But some… some of us hear the cracks.”

Lila’s mouth went dry. “Are you saying you can change time?”

“I can listen to it,” he replied. “And… sometimes, ask it for favors.”

She hesitated. “Could you go back? Could you save someone?”

Elias’s smile faded. “Once. A long time ago. I turned the hands backward.”

He turned to a mantle where a single cracked clock sat in silence.

“My wife,” he said. “A carriage accident. I reversed everything. One hour. One precious hour. I warned her. She stayed home. She lived.”

Lila stared. “Then… what happened?”

The air in the room grew colder.

“She forgot me,” he said quietly. “When I changed time… I changed our story. In the new thread of time, we never met. She married someone else. Had children. Lived a good life.”

“But not with you,” Lila whispered.

“No,” Elias said. “Not with me.”

There was a long silence. The only sound was the ticking — hundreds of clocks, beating like hearts on every wall.

Lila looked down at her father’s watch.

“Could you do it again?” she asked. “Could you give me one more hour with him?”

Elias hesitated. Then, slowly, he handed her the watch.

“It is not without cost,” he said. “Time does not like to be bent. It may take something in return.”

Lila nodded. “I understand.”

He placed his hands on the watch. Whispered. The air thickened, warped. The clocks in the shop stopped ticking — all at once.

Then, just as suddenly, the pocket watch ticked once.

Twice.

Then began to turn.

Lila blinked. The shop was gone. The rain was gone.

And there, in the golden light of morning, stood her father.

Alive.

Laughing.

They had one hour.

They talked, they cried, they said all the things they never had time to say. And when the hour ended, he kissed her forehead.

And faded.

Lila returned to the shop, trembling.

Elias was waiting.

“Did it work?” he asked.

She nodded.

Then frowned.

“What’s your name again?” she asked.

Elias blinked. But he only smiled.

“It’s not important,” he said. “Just… remember the time.”

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About the Creator

Israr khan

I write to bring attention to the voices and faces of the missing, the unheard, and the forgotten. , — raising awareness, sparking hope, and keeping the search alive. Every person has a story. Every story deserves to be told.

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