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The Clockmaker’s Debt

An Enchanted Tale of Time, Secrets, and a Price Too High

By Waqar AhmadPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
The Clock Maker's Debt

In the quiet town of Windale, where the rooftops gleamed with dew and cobblestone paths echoed with the sound of morning footsteps, all the clocks had stopped ticking. No matter how much people wound them, no matter how new the batteries were—time stood still. It had been this way for twelve years.

But one clock still worked.

It was deep inside the crooked old shop at the end of Elm Street, where the blind clockmaker, Master Thoren, lived. His shop was dim, crowded with clocks of every shape and size. Some were tall and grand like castle towers. Others were tiny and delicate, no larger than a matchbox. All were silent. Except for one.

A girl named Elia, curious and clever, had heard stories from the town's baker that Master Thoren was once the greatest clockmaker in the kingdom. People used to travel from faraway lands to buy his timepieces. But one day, he closed his doors. A week later, all clocks in Windale stopped.

No one dared question him. He was blind, quiet, and always wore black gloves. Some whispered he had made a deal with time itself.

Elia decided to find out the truth.

One misty morning, she tiptoed through the ivy-covered gate of his shop and knocked on the creaky wooden door.

“Come in,” said a voice that sounded like rustling leaves and ticking gears.

The shop smelled of dust, oil, and old wood. Clocks lined the walls, their faces frozen at different hours. In the middle stood Master Thoren, tall and thin, his silver beard reaching down to his chest. Though blind, he turned toward her as if he could see.

I... I’m Elia. I wanted to ask about the clocks. Why do they no longer work?

Thoren tilted his head. “You’re young. Young people still ask questions. That’s good.”

He walked slowly to a small, golden clock on his desk. It was the only one ticking.

This one runs because it is fed,” he said.

Fed?” Elia asked.

“Yes,” he replied. “Not with oil or springs. With something far more valuable.”

Thoren removed one glove. His hand was thin, pale, and wrinkled—far more than someone his age should have. “Every tick of this clock takes one second from my life.”

Elia’s eyes widened. “That’s horrible!”

“It was a fair trade once. I made a deal long ago,” he said, voice heavy. “I wanted to create the perfect clock. One that would never stop. The Timekeeper agreed. But time, you see, is greedy. It must be paid.”

He gestured toward the other clocks. “When I refused to make more clocks for others, time punished the town. It froze everything. You all suffer because of my debt.”

Elia's voice trembled. “Can’t you undo the deal?”

“I tried. But the contract is sealed in the gears of this clock. If it breaks, time collapses. If it keeps ticking, I slowly vanish.”

Elia felt anger rise in her chest. “It’s not right that everyone pays for one mistake.”

Thoren smiled sadly. “Then perhaps you can fix it.”

The next day, Elia came back with a bag full of gears, springs, and tools her father once used as a mechanic. Thoren guided her hands, teaching her how to build a clock from scratch. Days turned into weeks.

Finally, she made a small clock shaped like a bird. When it ticked, a soft light filled the room.

“This one doesn’t feed off life,” Thoren said in awe. “You’ve created something new. Something time cannot control.”

With her invention, Elia visited each house in Windale, teaching others to make their own. Slowly, clocks began ticking again—but these were different. They didn’t steal life. They hummed with harmony.

The Timekeeper, angered by the loss of its hold, appeared in a gust of wind inside Thoren’s shop.

“You have broken the balance,” it roared. “Time must be fed!”

Thoren stepped forward. “Take what remains of my years. Spare the town.”

But Elia stood before him. “No. Take me instead.”

The Timekeeper stared. “You offer yourself, child?”

“I do. I offer my creativity, my invention. Let that be your new food—progress, not pain.”

The spirit paused. Then, with a sigh like a thousand clocks winding down, it nodded. “So be it. But you will grow old faster, child. For invention burns life quickly.”

Elia agreed.

Years passed. Windale became famous for its new kind of clocks. Time flowed peacefully, no longer controlled by strange deals.

Master Thoren lived his final years in peace, his clocks now silent but smiling. And Elia—though she aged quickly—became known as the Time Bringer, a symbol of hope, courage, and change.

AdventureFan FictionFantasyMystery

About the Creator

Waqar Ahmad

I have been a professional freelancer and computer science degree holder since 2007. I have been working as a content and article writer for more than 10 years. Providing the best content with better research is my aim.

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