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The Clockmaker’s Daughter

A girl raised in a quiet workshop discovers a hidden room filled with clocks that turn back time — each one tied to a painful family memory.

By M Mehran Published 7 months ago 3 min read
M Mehran

In a quiet town where fog clung to cobblestone streets and church bells tolled like old whispers, there lived a girl named Elara. She grew up in her father’s clock shop, a place soaked in the scent of cedarwood, oil, and time itself. The tick-tick-tick of a hundred clocks was her lullaby, and the hum of her father’s voice as he repaired delicate gears was the only music she knew.

Her father was a quiet man, tender but distant. He never spoke of Elara’s mother, nor of the days before her birth. “Some clocks,” he would say, “are better left unwound.” When Elara asked about the locked door at the back of the shop, his eyes would cloud, and he’d simply say, “That room doesn’t tick anymore.”

But on the eve of her seventeenth birthday, something changed.

Her father left before sunrise for a delivery, forgetting to take his key ring — an oversight he had never once made in her memory. Elara stared at the keys, her heart thudding like the heavy pendulum clock above the fireplace. The forbidden door called to her.

She unlocked it.

The air inside was colder, heavier, almost reluctant to be disturbed. Dust shimmered in golden beams that sliced through cracked blinds. Along the walls stood clocks of every kind — ornate grandfathers, pocket watches, cuckoos — but none ticked.

Curious, she wound the nearest clock.

Tick.

The room trembled. Shadows danced. The air thickened, like syrup.

Then—she was no longer in the room.

She was five years old, hiding behind the velvet curtain of the shop, peeking as her parents argued. Her mother’s voice was raw, her father’s shaking. The words were muffled, but the pain etched itself deep into her young chest. The memory ended with the sound of shattering glass, and the image of her mother walking out the door, never to return.

With a gasp, Elara staggered back into the present. Her fingers trembled. She stepped away, but her eyes couldn’t leave the clocks.

She wound another.

Tick.

A new memory engulfed her — ten years old, sitting on the kitchen floor, cradling her bleeding knee, tears streaming down her face. Her father knelt, eyes wild with frustration and fear. “Why can’t you be more careful?” he shouted, voice cracking.

Elara flinched, even though the moment had passed.

Each clock held a memory. Painful ones. Forgotten ones. Hidden beneath time like cracks behind painted walls.

But they weren’t only hers.

One clock revealed her father alone, face in his hands, crying into a baby blanket. Another showed her mother, years later, placing flowers on a grave — Elara’s grave. Or what she thought was her grave.

Confused and overwhelmed, Elara turned to flee — but a small, wooden pocket watch stopped her. It was unlike the others. Simple. Familiar.

She wound it.

This time, the memory didn’t sting. It was warm.

She saw herself at six, curled on her father’s lap, watching the snow fall outside. He was humming, absentmindedly stroking her hair. They weren’t speaking, but there was peace in the silence.

She clutched the watch to her chest, tears slipping down her cheeks. Time didn’t just carry sorrow. It carried love, too. And regret. And the chance to remember with kindness.

When her father returned that evening, he found her waiting in the workshop.

“You opened the room,” he said quietly.

“I needed to,” she whispered. “You kept your pain there, like broken gears in a box.”

He nodded, eyes glassy. “I was trying to protect you from the past.”

Elara took his hand and placed the pocket watch in his palm. “Maybe the past doesn’t need to hurt if we face it together.”

And for the first time in years, the clocks in the hidden room began to tick — not backwards, but forward — one heartbeat at a time.

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