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The Cinder’s Weight

When the wood is spent and the roar subsides, what remains is the heavy silence of the ash.

By Awa NyassiPublished 22 days ago 1 min read
The Cinder’s Weight
Photo by Gagan Deep Singh on Unsplash

The hearth has stopped its singing.white-ribbed and glowing with a soft, pulsing ache.
I am watching the last flame—
a tiny, blue-tongued ghost
licking the underside of a charred knot.
It is fragile, a translucent ribbon
fraying against the weight of the coming dark.
There is a specific silence that lives here
For hours, it was a roar of gold and defiance,
consuming the dry cedar of our history,
the splinters of every word we ever threw
into the heat to keep the room alive.
But the wood is spent now.
The logs have collapsed into a skeletal geography,

white-ribbed and glowing with a soft, pulsing ache.

​I am watching the last flame—

a tiny, blue-tongued ghost

licking the underside of a charred knot.

It is fragile, a translucent ribbon

fraying against the weight of the coming dark.

There is a specific silence that lives here at the border where the fire ends and the cold begins.
It isn't the silence of absence,
but the silence of a finished task.
The flame gives one final, frantic leap,
stretching toward the chimney as if to catch
the hem of a passing star,
then sinks back into the velvet grey.

The blue wink vanishes.
What remains is a scent like ancient autumn,
and the soft, settling sound of ash
finding its final place on the stone.
The ending doesn't arrive with a crash.
It arrives as a slow cooling,
a gradual receding of the light
until the walls of the room pull closer, and the only heat left
is the memory of the glow
still burning on the backs of my eyelids.
I reach out to stir the remains,
but I stop.
Some things are best left
to go cold in their own time.

Thanks for reading

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Awa Nyassi

Content creator | Storyteller | Poet

I create powerful, meaningful content that transforms real-life experiences into words that inspire growth and self-belief.

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  • Awa Nyassi (Author)22 days ago

    I’d love for you to give it a read and leave a heart if it resonates with you!

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