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The Café That Waited for Love

Some places never forget the people who loved inside them.

By Atif khurshaidPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

The rain had been falling since morning, soft and unhurried, like the city itself had decided to move in slow motion. Inside Café Loraine, the windows fogged from the warmth of espresso and conversation, turning the world outside into a watercolor blur.

Elena sat at her usual corner table by the window, tracing the rim of her cup with one finger. She wasn’t waiting for anyone. Not really. She hadn’t been waiting for ten years—though the waiter, who’d worked there since his teens, knew better than to believe that.

Every Sunday at two, Elena came in. One cappuccino, one croissant, a book she never quite read. Always at the same table. Always near the rain.

Once upon a time, another chair across from her had been filled. His name was Julien.

They had met in that very café on a Tuesday afternoon when the city was too loud and the rain too soft to notice. She’d been sketching faces in a notebook, and he’d spilled coffee on one. He’d apologized so many times that she finally laughed—and he looked at her as though the sound was a song he’d been waiting years to hear.

That was how it began: one laugh, one mistake, one afternoon that decided to change everything.

Julien was a pianist—one of those dreamers who lived more in melodies than in rent receipts. He talked about music like it was a person, something that could love you back if you only listened closely enough. Elena loved that about him, even if she knew that people who lived for beauty often forgot how to live with reality.

They spent three years writing their names in the margins of the café’s days. Sunday mornings became symphonies of coffee, rain, and laughter. The staff joked that their table was reserved for “the couple who made time blush.”

But time, jealous as always, took him away.

Julien left for Paris with a piano scholarship and a promise that he’d return. For a while, he wrote her every week. Then every month. Then silence.

Years went by. The letters stopped, the phone changed, and the world grew louder. But the café didn’t. It remained what it had always been—a quiet corner of the city that remembered what the people forgot.

And so, Elena kept coming. At first out of habit. Then out of hope. Then simply because some places hold our stories even when we can’t.

This Sunday, though, the rain seemed different—brighter, lighter somehow. When she looked up from her cup, she saw a man standing near the door, soaked through and hesitant.

He looked older, gentler, as though the years had sanded away everything sharp. But the eyes—those eyes—were still Julien’s.

For a moment, the café seemed to hold its breath. The sound of spoons against porcelain stilled. Even the rain paused on the window.

He smiled—awkward, almost shy.

“Still two sugars?” he asked.

Elena’s throat tightened. “Still late,” she said.

The waiter, hiding a grin, brought another cup without being asked. The two sat in silence for a while, the kind that didn’t need to be filled, only felt.

Outside, the city continued rushing past—umbrellas, headlights, footsteps—but inside Café Loraine, time had stopped again.

No one in the café that afternoon knew the story. No one but the walls, which had heard it before, and the rain, which had never really stopped falling since he left.

When they finally rose to go, the waiter noticed something he’d never seen in ten years: both chairs pushed neatly in, side by side.

The next Sunday, the corner table stayed empty—but somehow, it didn’t feel lonely anymore.

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  • khan3 months ago

    hmm good and interesting one

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