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The Briefcase

Fan Fiction for the 500 Word Shockwave Challenge

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 9 months ago β€’ 2 min read
The Briefcase
Photo by Alexandr Sadkov on Unsplash

Our baggage holds surprises. - Michelle Liew.

πŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’Ό

Mr Goh moved into the old boarding house in Kong Aik road without much fanfare, quiet man that he was. The impeccably dressed accountant always had his trusty briefcase with him; though a little worn, its leather sheen never dulled, and it was always at his side, as if it contained something indispensable. He was just a stranger, a face in the crowd.

Then, strange disappearances. Mysterious coincidences---until they weren't anymore.

πŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’Ό

Coincidences they were, but they didn't get past Detective Mira Chong. Her trained instincts spotted them the minute she got Mr. Goh for a quiet sit-down.

He was polite. Too polished. As if he had rehearsed every word.

"Detective," he cautioned with a practiced look of smugness. "Some people aren't meant to be found."

"What do you mean?" She sat back in her chair, tilted her head, and caught his eye. He simply placed his briefcase on the table . When it snapped open, it was absolutely--

Different.

She expected documents. But instead saw--movement.

She staggered back, breath hitching.

πŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’Ό

Inside the briefcase were....faces. Eyes blinking, mouths frozen mid-scream. Features distorted, as if pressed against glass.

"You see, Miss," Mr. Goh murmured, smug and assured, "I don't kill them. I collect them."

Seasoned detective though she was, bile burned her throat. She swallowed hard, keeping the nausea down. These were the people who had vanished. Their souls---stored.

She reached for her gun. Old Man Goh sighed, eyeing her too calmly.

"Careful, Miss Chong." His smile was too knowing. "You don't want to be with them--too."

πŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’Ό

Mira pulled the trigger. The briefcase moved, though Mr. Goh remained stoic. He merely chuckled, seeing the bullet hole in it seal itself.

"It doesn't work like that, " he fixed her with a condescending gaze. "Didn't you know?" You can't kill the dead."

He opened the case with a flick of his fingers and tilted it towards her. The faces shrieked. Mira felt a tug. Pain razed her skull. Something was pulling her very essence, dragging her towards the case.

The briefcase wasn't Mr. Goh's storage box. It was a doorway. And it was STARVING.

Her fingers slackened, and her gun drifted to the floor. Her vision doubled. Her body gave way. She stepped back, but it no longer listened to her.

πŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’Ό

She gritted her teeth and banged the table with all the energy she could muster. The sharp sting in her head kept her grounded, keeping her soul anchored in her body, where it was meant to be.

"You're stronger than most women," Mr. Goh's eyes glimmered with faint surprise. He quickly masked it with a sinister grin, his voice dripping with both admiration and something----dark. "But you're too late."

Mira returned his grin---with a diabolical snicker. "You're not the only one who collects, you know."

She stood tall, eyes locked on his. She reached for the torn rucksack slung across her shoulder. Inside, pairs of eyes. They flicked about constantly, searching for an exit.

Mr. Goh's grin faltered.

πŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’ΌπŸ§³πŸ’ΌπŸ‘œπŸ’Ό

This story is entirely original. Any AI tags are coincidental. It 500 words between the quote and disclaimer.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Simon Aylward9 months ago

    Great story Michelle! Really imaginative and very dark! Right up my street this one. I love the description of Mr Goh and the briefcase in the first paragraph. It definitely made me want to read on!

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    πŸ’™ too funny

  • Sandy Gillman9 months ago

    I couldn't wait to find out what was in the briefcase!

  • Antoni De'Leon9 months ago

    Tit for tat. I thought she was a goner for sure. Two mad crazy people.

  • Omgggg, they're both crazyyyyyy! Hahahahha. Loved this story!

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