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The Boy Who Borrowed Time

What if you could borrow hours from tomorrow to fix today? And what happens when time wants them back?

By Lucien Hollow Published 7 months ago 3 min read
The Boy Who Borrowed Time
Photo by mohammad mosayyebnezhad on Unsplash

The Worst Morning Ever
Leo Winters was having the worst morning of his entire life.

He missed the school bus. He spilled chocolate milk on his math homework. His big science project—the volcano—fell apart. And when he got to school (late), his best friend Olivia was mad at him because he forgot to save her a seat at lunch yesterday.

“Can this day just end already?” he groaned, flopping down under the jungle gym at recess.

But then he heard a voice say:

“Would you like to borrow an hour?”

Man
The voice came from an old man sitting on a nearby bench. He wore a gray suit, shiny black shoes, and had a small silver pocket watch in one hand.

Leo stared. “Borrow… what?”

The man smiled like he’d been waiting for Leo.

“Time, of course. You can borrow an hour from tomorrow. Use it to fix today. Or redo something. Or even skip a part you don’t like.”

Leo blinked. “You mean, like… I get extra time today?”

The man nodded. “One hour. But you must return it by sundown tomorrow. Time doesn’t like being short.”

Leo laughed. “Is this a prank?”

The man flipped the watch open and held it out.

Tick. Tick. Tick.

Leo took it.

And everything changed.

As soon as Leo took the watch, the world froze.

Everyone stopped moving. Even the birds in the sky looked like stickers glued to the air.

Leo could move freely.

He ran back home, fixed his volcano project, rewrote his homework, and even put Olivia’s favorite cookie in her lunchbox as a surprise.

When he clicked the watch again, the world resumed.

And everything started going perfectly.

He wasn’t late. His project got an A. Olivia smiled and said, “You’re the best!” And for the first time ever… Leo felt ahead of the day.

Borrowed Time
The next day, Leo found the watch still in his pocket.

He couldn’t help it—he used it again.

And again the next day.

And the next.

He borrowed hours to:

Study for tests he forgot about

Sneak in extra sleep

Fix arguments before they started

Even redo video game levels he messed up

Every time, life got easier. And cooler.

But one night, he forgot to return the hour.

It was cloudy. The sunset was hidden. He figured, “I’ll just give it back tomorrow.”

He shouldn’t have done that.

The First Crack
That morning, Leo woke up to find his reflection smiling at him… before he smiled.

He rubbed his eyes.

Weird.

At school, Olivia said, “You already told me that,” even though he hadn’t.

He tried to use the watch—but it was ticking backwards.

Fast.

And the next hour he borrowed?

Felt shorter.

Like it lasted only 40 minutes.

The Time Collector
That night, the old man appeared again—this time, in Leo’s bedroom.

He wasn’t smiling.

“You’re in time-debt, Leo,” he said. “You owe seven hours. Time is… not pleased.”

“I’ll return them!” Leo said quickly. “Just tell me how.”

“It’s not that simple anymore. You’ve used what wasn’t yours. Now the time you borrowed… will try to collect you.”

“What does that mean?”

But the man vanished.

And Leo’s clock hands started spinning on their own.

Skipped
The next day, things got stranger.

His breakfast vanished from the plate before he touched it.

At school, he blinked—and suddenly it was math class, with no memory of lunch.

Olivia said he ignored her at recess, but he wasn’t even there.

Time was skipping him—taking back chunks of his life.

He tried to stay awake that night, but it was no use.

The watch ticked loudly.

He closed his eyes for one second…

…and woke up two days later.

The Hourglass Room
Desperate, Leo opened the watch’s back and found a tiny map etched inside.

Following it led him to the town’s oldest clock tower.

Inside, behind a dusty curtain, was a door.

He stepped through—and found himself in a huge, glowing room filled with floating hourglasses.

Some big. Some small. Some nearly empty.

In the center was a massive one with his name etched in the glass.

Sand poured from the top faster than it should.

Suddenly, shadows in the shape of clocks crept forward.

Time was alive.

And it wanted him.

The Deal
Just as the shadows reached for him, the Watch Man appeared again.

“You must give something back,” he said. “An hour is worth more than you know.”

Leo thought hard.

“Take my lunch breaks!” he begged. “Take my Saturdays!”

“No,” said the man. “Not trades. Sacrifice. Choose a memory. Something you love.”

Leo’s eyes filled with tears.

“My birthday party,” he whispered. “The one when I turned 10. You can have it.”

The Watch Man nodded.

One hourglass vanished.

The sand slowed.

And the shadows backed away.

Returned
Leo woke up at home.

Everything felt… normal.

The watch was gone.

He rushed to Olivia.

“Do you remember my 10th birthday? The cake that looked like a dragon?”

She blinked. “You never had a dragon cake.”

His heart sank.

It had worked.

The hour was gone forever.

But so was the memory.

He had paid back time.

Epilogue: The Lesson
Leo never saw the Watch Man again.

But sometimes, when a day feels too long, he remembers what it cost to make time stretch.

Now, he just lives it.

Even the bad days.

Because time is a gift—not something to borrow.

And he’s never late for sunset.

Ever again.






AdventureClassicalfamilyFan FictionHistoricalHorrorMysterySeriesPsychological

About the Creator

Lucien Hollow

Professional horror writer crafting chilling stories and bestselling books that haunt your thoughts. I blend fear, emotion, and suspense to create unforgettable nightmares you’ll never forget.

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