Wild flames danced with the unexpected frigid night sky in an alluring dance. Teenage rhythmic cheers of anticipated victory reverberated around the encircled bonfire. April, my redheaded crush, backed into me, close. In adolescent innocence, I rested my chin on her peach-scented hair.
Our molded body heat pulsed, sensually unified, as one. Tempestuous hormones and pheromones toyed at the edges of our animated insanity, swaying, wanting, pressing tighter.
Her glacial hands pulled my hips snugly and snaked the weapons deep into my ripped-out blue jeans pockets.
Jolted, instantly breathless, my fantasies dissipated into the smoky sky, gone.
I was commando.
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J. S. Wade
Since reading Tolkien in Middle school, I have been fascinated with creating, reading, and hearing art through story’s and music. I am a perpetual student of writing and life.
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Comments (20)
Randy is so bad. I thought it was real for a sec. Hope it worked out in the end. Naughty, naughty.
I have no words!!! But what a fantasy terror. Well written.
Ah, Scott, where do you get off...? (Sorry, I just had to go there. At least I didn't ask when. The obvious answer being, not in April. Ugh. That's bad.)
I guess he can skip the cold shower, because 'Glacial hands' will do it every time...😅 Unless you're into that kind of thing 🤨. Great story, Scott.
My my, Mr. Wade. Sensual and teasing! Love it.
Oh my, this was gloriously tantalizing! I loved the beautiful and vivid descriptions here! This was a joy to read! 😍
Commando! Oops! Hahaha loved this!
Oh, April! Love this one.
You really capture that honey suckle feeling Scott! And then... Great stuff!
That April knew what she was doing! Great read.
I love the way you capture these feelings: the carefree recklessness and awkward embarrassment of adolescence. Each word feels deliberate and measured. This was so wonderful to read!
Great story. Ah, to be young and insane. Well done
Tres Amusant and wonderfully described
significant shrinkage. Fantastic job bringing those moments back to life. Oh, to be young again
Brilliant!!!💖💖💕
Oooo, this was delightful. Those heated first time moments captured so well. Loved it :)
Wonderfully written!
SW - 'Peach Scent' ~ Pheromones my Weakness ~ my 'Type' Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -
You captured that moment of youth beautifully…..even the commando scenario.
That was awesome! "toyed at the edges of our animated insanity" - so good!