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The Bee and the Flower

A Drabble about a friendship beyond species

By Susan Fourtané Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read
Top Story - November 2024
The Bee and the Flower
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The bee came to the garden to talk to the flowers. “Hello, Miss Flower, how are you today?”

“Mr. Bee, I’m a little worried, you see. There’s a girl in the house who picks several of us each day. My cousins are already gone, so are my sisters. I’m the only one left and now she’s certainly going to pick me later today.”

“Worry not, my dear friend. I’ll teach her a lesson.”

When the girl tried to cut the innocent flower, the bee sting on her hand made the girl run away. Surely she will kill flowers no more.

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What is a Drabble?

A Drabble is a self-contained work of micro-fiction crafted in precisely 100 words. The aim of a Drabble is to master brevity, challenging the writer to choose words carefully. A Drabble must be a complete tale, with a beginning, middle, and a clear ending.

Origins of the Drabble

The concept of the Drabble is said to have been conceived by Rob Meades, David B. Wake, and the U.K. science fiction fandom back in the 1980s. The 100-word format was established by the Birmingham University Science Fiction Society, taking a term from Monty Python’s 1971 Big Red Book, which describes a word game.

During the game, the participants gathered around a fire, sipping brandy and partaking in pleasant conversation with friends whilst challenging each other to write a novel. The first to finish wins, obviously.

However, the first game of Drabble occurred much earlier at the beginning of the 19th century. The winner was Mary Shelley with Frankenstein, and John William Polidori, who didn’t actually finish during that stormy weekend, came second with The Vampyre.

In order to make the game possible in the real world, the members of the U.K. SF Society agreed that 100-words would be enough.

Those first games run by the society became so popular that on April Fool’s Day 1988, Rob Meades and David B. Wake, with Roger Robinson of Beccon Publications, published a book of Drabbles, entitled The Drabble Project, containing one hundred stories, each of exactly one hundred words, and costing one hundred shillings. The book was largely Science Fiction based and won the British National Science Fiction Convention award in the category of Best Short Text.

They went on to publish two more Drabble books, each with a limited run of just 1000 copies each:

The Drabble Project (1988)

Drabble II: Double Century (1990)

Drabble Who? (1993)

The three books contain science fiction stories written by such notable authors as: Terry Pratchett, Neil Gaiman, Arthur C. Clarke, Brian W. Aldiss, Harry Harrison, Stephen Baxter, Bruce Sterling, and Isaac Asimov.

Decades after the invention of the Drabble, the art of writing 100-word micro-fiction is still going strong.

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About the Creator

Susan Fourtané

Susan Fourtané is a Science and Technology Journalist, a professional writer with over 18 years experience writing for global media and industry publications. She's a member of the ABSW, WFSJ, Society of Authors, and London Press Club.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶8 months ago

    An amusing tale. I’ve long wanted to write a Drabble but either get too wound up or peter out… maybe one day.

  • Jessica Phoenix9 months ago

    Wow, this was such a fun read! I bet that girl learned a lesson... lol! I've never heard of a Drabble before, so thanks for teaching me something new 😊🎉💖

  • Marilyn Glover10 months ago

    Not only was this a wonderful drabble, but I appreciate the history you provided. I learned something new today. Congratulations on your top story, Susan! I am delighted our paths have crossed. You found a new subscriber with me.

  • Seema Patel10 months ago

    Hi Susan. Seema here.

  • Anwar Hossain10 months ago

    Good writing

  • Raymond G. Taylor11 months ago

    Ha ha poor flowers. I love a bit of anthropomorphism. Another great Drabble and nice ref to Mary and her mates. Belated congratulations on the TS

  • Testabout a year ago

    very well writing

  • Amina Janabout a year ago

    So nice💕

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Beautiful drabble and thanks for sharing the history behind it. Might give it a try, I make sure to tag you. And congratulations on top story.

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Great job! I love it❣️

  • This is lovely

  • MM8787about a year ago

    I was attracted by the scene, which I have made a few similar ones recently, in the image. The drabble at the beginning is attractive and led me to finish reading the article and learnt what a drabble is. Thanks for sharing.

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Congrats on Top Story! this is wonderful!

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story!

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    Drabbles are fun!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Drabbles are always a tease! Lol great job

  • Samuel Phillipsabout a year ago

    wow! i'm really thrilled by your story

  • Raihana H.about a year ago

    It was interesting and good to know about the origin of drabble. Learned something new. I must try writing one! Also, love the drabble! It was sweet! I love the bee! I can't say I feel bad for the girl though 😂 I mean she killed all of Miss Flower's family 🥺

  • Dawuda Hardi about a year ago

    Nice work Very well written. Keep up the good work!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This is such a lovely drabble. Congratulations on a much deserved Top Story!

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on top story. Well done!!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Wow, this is excellent work!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Esan oyeyemi Janet about a year ago

    Very interesting, I love it Flower are so beautiful

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