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THE ASHMOOR LEGACY (Part 2)

The House Doesn't Want Your Money... It Wants Your Fear

By Wellova Published 2 months ago 4 min read

Start writing...​Dawn didn't break; it leaked. A pale, sickly grey light infiltrated the floor-to-ceiling windows, feeling greasy and cold. It did little to dispel the shadows that clung like dark mould to the sharp, brutalist corners of Ashmoor Hall. The house, by day, felt even more oppressive—a silent, concrete tomb waiting for night to fall again.

​They gathered in the cavernous, minimalist kitchen for a breakfast of bitter, scalding coffee and a silence so heavy it felt like a physical weight. Liam, his nerves frayed to screaming wires, had to break it.

​"I saw something," he said, his voice sounding too loud. "Last night. In the mist, by the trees. A figure."

​Elara didn't look up from her cup. She scoffed, a short, brittle sound that was her first line of defense. "It was the fog, Liam. A shadow on the mist. God, this place is getting to you already, isn't it? Pathetic."

​But as Liam’s eyes met hers, he saw it: the cynicism was a paper-thin mask over a tremor of genuine fear. She was terrified.

​Professor Valerius, however, fell unusually, unnervingly quiet. His hand, which had been reaching for the sugar, froze mid-air. His eyes, sharp and analytical, darted to the window, scanning the treeline. He wasn't dismissing Liam. He was searching for something he both feared and expected to see.

​The second day was a masterclass in psychological warfare. The house wasn't just haunted; it was toying with them, learning them, calibrating its torments with intimate precision.

​It started with Elara. Her vintage gold locket, a heavy, intricate piece given to her by a past lover—the one object Liam knew she held sacred—vanished from her granite-topped dressing table. She became a storm of cold, quiet fury, tearing her sterile room apart.

​Hours later, Liam found it. A faint drip... drip... drip... had drawn him to a disused bathroom in the service wing, a part of the house he hadn't even known existed. The air in the room was arctic. There, hanging from a corroded, verdigris-stained tap, was the locket. It was swinging almost imperceptibly, dripping with ice-cold, viscous water, as if it had been plucked from the bottom of a frozen bog. When Elara snatched it from the tap, her hand shaking, she let out a small, strangled sound. The locket was not just cold; it was freezing, burning her skin.

​While Elara was being violated by memory, Professor Valerius, attempting to use logic as his shield, had barricaded himself in the family library. It was the only room that felt human, choked with the smell of decaying paper and old leather. He emerged late in the afternoon, his face the color of ash, his academic composure shattered. He was clutching a single, ancient, leather-bound journal.

​"This... this isn't a will," Valerius whispered, his voice a dry rasp. He held it out for Liam to see. The pages were filled with Alistair Blackwood's frantic, spidery handwriting, the script of a man documenting his own descent into madness. It detailed a "hereditary taint," a "primordial debt" tied to the land Ashmoor Hall was built on. It spoke of repeated, terrified references to something he called "The Observer."

​One passage, near the end, was chillingly circled in weeping red ink, the pen having pressed so hard it tore the page:

​"It feeds on the fear. The stronger the heir, the sweeter the meal. It is a crucible. It will break you before it takes you. It must be fed."

​That night, the game escalated. The mechanical ticking from the walls returned, but it was no longer out of sync. It was louder, more insistent, a thousand clocks syncing into a single, maddening, industrial rhythm that seemed to pulse through the very foundations of the hall, through the concrete, and into his bones.

​Liam, lying rigid in the dark, was driven to the ragged edge of sleep when a new sound ripped through the ticking.

​A soft, wet sound.

​The sound of dragging.

​It was coming from the corridor, right outside his room. Shhhh... drag... shhhh... drag... Like something heavy, boneless, and soaked, being pulled inch by inch across the polished concrete floor.

​He stared at his door, his heart a frantic drum against his ribs.

​Then, his door handle—which he had locked, he knew he had locked it—began to turn.

​It wasn't a violent rattle. It was an agonizingly slow, deliberate, and silent turn, the heavy metal mechanism grinding with unbearable tension.

​He held his breath, unable to move, his blood turning to static. The handle turned until it could go no further. It stayed there for one... two... three heartbeats.

​Then, with a soft click, it released.

​Silence returned. A new silence, heavier, more profound than before. A waiting, listening silence.

​Swallowing the acidic bile of his own terror, Liam forced himself to move. He slid from the bed, his feet hitting the frigid floor. He crept to the door, his entire body shaking, and pressed his eye against the brass peephole.

​The corridor was empty. Just the long, sterile concrete hallway, lit by the same sickly grey light as the dawn.

​He almost sagged with relief. And then he saw it.

​The wall opposite his door, a sheer plane of cold, polished concrete, was fogged with condensation, as if a large animal had just exhaled against it. Etched into that mist, glistening wetly in the gloom, was a single, hurried, desperate word.

​RUN

​It was then, his blood freezing solid in his veins, that the truth crashed down on him. The will, the fortune, the seven-night game—it was all a sham. A sophisticated, cruel, and ancient trap.

​They weren't competing for an inheritance. They were livestock in a pen.

​Alistair Blackwood hadn't left them a fortune. He had left them as a feast. And Ashmoor Hall, the living, breathing entity of malice, had just begun the hunt.

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About the Creator

Wellova

I am [Wellova], a horror writer who finds fear in silence and shadows. My stories reveal unseen presences, whispers in the dark, and secrets buried deep—reminding readers that fear is never far, sometimes just behind a door left unopened.

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