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The argument for Good and Evil

The shape of the thing.

By Antoni De'LeonPublished 4 months ago 8 min read

I observed and listened, as if watching a movie in 4D, the argument between Good and Evil enfolding in a philosophical debate...opposing sides not inclined to agree on anything.

They are separated by imaginary rooms, within which words are used as bantering weapons, swords clashing in a joust for supremacy.

Room 1

The opening take In The Words Between Worlds, finds two figures sitting across from each other at a wooden table carved from the metaphorical wood of time itself. One wears a golden halo, the other bears crimson horns. Between them lies not just a surface, but a threshold...where ethics, desire, and consequence converge.

The Opening Argument leans towards, Good, represented by (Aurelius):

"Evil is the absence of empathy. It thrives where love is forgotten. I believe in the sanctity of choice, but only when it uplifts others. To harm for gain is to taint the soul."

Evil is named (Malrik):

"Empathy is a luxury of the powerful. What you call evil, I call survival. Morality is a cage built by those who fear their own instincts. I do not bend or break...I evolve."

Aurelius gestures to a mirror behind Malrik. In it, flickers of past deeds shimmer - wars waged, lives saved, betrayals justified.

Aurelius:

"You speak of evolution, but at what cost? Every step forward leaves a shadow. Do you not see the trail of suffering behind you?"

Malrik:

"And yet, in that suffering, people find strength. Heroes are born in chaos. You offer comfort, I offer challenge. Which truly awakens the soul"?

There is a sudden Collapse of Absolutes . The table begins to crack into an allegory- not from violence, but from paradox. The signs “GOOD” and “EVIL” crumble into dust, revealing a single word beneath:

“CHOICE”.

Aurelius (softly):

"Perhaps we are not opposites, but reflections. You test the boundaries, I guard them. Without you, I am stagnant. Without me, you are lost."

Malrik (smirking):

"Then let us keep debating. The world needs both fire and light".

Room 2.

The debate has somehow echoed through a haunted house, we step inside to see where philosophy lingers and every creaking floorboard carries the weight of moral ambiguity.

Here the characters are familiar, but reimagined in vivid contrast. The haloed figure now has dark skin and a radiant presence, while the devilish counterpart bears red skin and fierce intensity.

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It is a sprawling Victorian mansion, long abandoned. The windows are veiled in dust, its halls lined with portraits whose eyes seem to follow. The air is thick, and the walls emanate voices not quite human.

Here walks Aurelius...His halo flickers, a candle in the wind. He walks with reverence, sensing the pain infused into the house’s bones.

Malrik sides with Evil: His horns glow faintly red in the gloom. He strides boldly, unafraid of the shadows...he’s made peace with them.

Mirrors line the walls, each reflecting not the present, but moments of moral choice. A child stealing bread. A soldier hesitating before pulling the trigger. A lover lying to protect.

Aurelius speaks:

"These are crossroads. Each choice a ripple. Even the smallest kindness can redeem a soul."

Malrik counters:

"Or corrupt it. Mercy breeds weakness. Lies told in love are still lies. The house remembers everything."

A mirror cracks as they speak...a hidden passage leads to The Library of Regret. Books line the shelves, none have titles. When opened, each book reveals a person’s greatest regret. The air smells of ink and sorrow.

Aurelius (reading):

"‘I should have stayed.’ ‘I should have spoken.’ ‘I should have forgiven.’ These regrets are seeds of growth."

Malrik (reading):

"I should have taken more.’ ‘I should have destroyed them first.’ ‘I should have lied better.’ These regrets are fuel. Regret is power when wielded without shame."

A book bursts into flame. The room darkens.

🕰️ Room 3: The Clock Room

A massive grandfather clock ticks backward. Time, fluid, shows Past sins and future virtues colliding.

Aurelius:

"If time could be rewound, would you choose differently?"

Malrik:

"No. I would choose faster. Regret is for those who believe in redemption. I believe in momentum."

The clock stops. Silence falls. A door opens to the attic.

🪦 Final Room: The Attic of Judgment

Portraits of the house’s former inhabitants hang crooked. A spectral jury watches. The table from their original debate reappears...aged, cracked, but still standing.

Aurelius:

"This house is haunted not by ghosts, but by choices. Every soul here echoes with the consequences of belief."

Malrik:

"Then let it echo louder. Let the walls tremble with defiance. Good and Evil are masks - we are the actors beneath."

The house groans. A storm begins outside. The attic window shatters, and the wind carries their debate into the interior of the sparsely lit mansion - as night takes on an eerie ambience.

👻 A new Character emerges: Elvira, the Ghost of the House

A translucent woman in a faded gown, heavy with time and grief appears. Her eyes glow faintly blue, and her voice sounds like wind through broken glass.

Elvira once lived in the house when it was full of life. She died with a secret - one that blurred the line between good and evil. The two characters do not flinch or become deterred by her presence.

She listens - drifting between dark and shadow...and does not take sides. She remembers, and occasionally speaks in riddles that unravel the truth.

The Library of Regret (Revisited)

As Aurelius and Malrik argue, a book floats off the shelf and opens mid-air. Elvira materializes beside it.

Elvira:

"Regret is not a wound - it is a doorway. I walked through mine and never returned."

Aurelius (softly):

"What did you regret?"

Elvira:

"I forgave too late. I loved too quietly. And I buried the truth beneath kindness."

Malrik (curious):

"Did your truth hurt others?"

Elira:

"Yes. But hiding it hurt more. I was good, I was evil. I was human."

🕰️ The Clock Room (Revisited)

Elvira touches the clock. It begins to tick forward again.

"Time does not judge - it remembers. You debate in absolutes, but the house knows nuance. It remembers the child who stole to feed her brother. The soldier who spared an enemy. The liar who saved a life."

Aurelius:

"Then truth is layered."

Malrik:

"And morality is a maze."

Elvira:

"Exactly. I am the echo of every choice made here. I do not haunt - I remind."

🪦 The Attic of Judgment (Finale)

As the storm rages, Elvira stands between Aurelius and Malrik. Her form flickers with lightning.

"You are not enemies. You are ingredients. The world needs both fire and balm. But beware...when one drowns the other, the house collapses."

The attic trembles. The table splits in two. Elvira vanishes, leaving behind a single phrase engraved into the wood:

“Balance is the ghost of truth.”

A harsh wind suddenly blows the windows open. The house shudders. The portrait in the east wing, where the wallpaper curls like dried leaves and the air tastes of dust, began to speak.

"I am the last witness. A portrait of the house’s original owners...they were stern-faced, noble, and blind to the storm they built. I hang crooked on the east wall, watching centuries pass like candle smoke.

I remember the night the house and home became broken, the night lives changed forever".

There was a sudden horrid howl, like a trapped animal...and something awful appeared. A man, or what was once a man, bound in chains that rattled so...it was enough to awaken the dead.

👻 There is the malevolent ghost of Varnak, once a towering figure of the butler, betrayed and buried beneath the cellar. His voice is now but a guttural growl, his presence warps the air. He haunts out of vengeance, not out of belief: “All kindness is a lie waiting to rot.”

Next comes the Child Ghost – Lila

A small girl in a faded blue dress, her eyes wide with sorrow. She died of fever, clutching a doll held together by sticks, paste and straw, long ago made by Varnak.

She believes Varnak was good once. She believes he still can be. Her voice is soft, childlike in the empty room.

Time travels back...back to the moment that the Memory Unfolds -

The Grand Parlor, 1872

The owners hosted a masquerade. Varnak served wine with silent grace. Lila danced between guests, her laughter a strange sound amidst the glitz and glamour.. But beneath the floorboards, secrets festered.

The master accused Varnak of theft. No trial. No mercy. He was trapped, no one answered his dying pleas...framed - buried alive beneath the cellar stones.

Lila cried for days. Then she too, vanished.

The Haunting

Years later, Varnak returned - not as man, but as shadow. He painted evil red in the walls, twisted the mirrors, made the clocks bleed backward.

Lila appeared too, glowing faintly, trying to calm him.

Lila (pleading):

"You made me the doll. You sang to me when Mother forgot. You were good. You still are."

Varnak (snarling):

"I was loyal. And they buried me. Goodness is a trick played on the obedient."

Lila (crying):

"But I remember your kindness. Doesn’t that mean it mattered?"

Varnak (softening for a moment):

"If memory is all that remains, then perhaps… I was real."

But the moment passed. He vanished into the walls. Lila remained, her light dimming.

🖼️ The Painting’s Final Words

I watched it all. I remember the warmth of Varnak’s hands. The joy in Lila’s eyes. The cruelty of the masters. The silence after.

Now, I speak only when the wind is right. When someone listens.

"Good and Evil are not absolutes. They are stories told by those who survive. I am the canvas of their truth."

🧠 Aurelius the Good tells his Final Thought

"I once believed goodness was a flame - pure, unwavering, untouched by shadow. But this house has taught me that even light casts silhouettes.

Perhaps goodness is not purity, but persistence.

To choose compassion in a world that rewards cruelty…

To forgive when vengeance is easier…

To remember when forgetting would numb the pain…

That is the philosophy I carry now.

Not as a sword, but as a lantern."

🔥 Malrik's Final Thought

"I once believed evil was strength...unapologetic, unyielding, the raw truth beneath society’s masks.

But this house has shown me that even shadows have origins.

Perhaps evil is not destruction, but defiance.

To challenge the rules written by the powerful…

To embrace desire when others demand restraint…

To speak the unspeakable when silence is expected…

That is the philosophy I carry now.

Not as a weapon, but as a mirror."

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They do not shake hands. They do not reconcile. But they do not leave either.

They remain in the attic, guardians of the debate, as the house breathes around them...haunted not by ghosts, but by the eternal question:

“What is the cost of choosing?”

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About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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  • C. Rommial Butler4 months ago

    Well-wrought, Antoni! "Balance is the ghost of truth." That makes an excellent centerpiece--or I might say, a fulcrum!--to the whole meditation.

  • "Regret is for those who believe in redemption. I believe in momentum." "Regret is not a wound - it is a doorway. I walked through mine and never returned." There were many lines that I felt were so deep and these two are my favourites. Loved your story so much!

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