Summer on the Farm
A 'Summer That Wasn't' story
It was a rite of passage for the Hurley kids to spend a summer working on Uncle Curtis’ farm. Dad would have a Memorial Day BBQ with the whole family. Just hot dogs and beers for the grown-ups. Curtis would come up all laughing and joking around, then he’d squeeze your bicep to decide if you were ready.
My older brothers and sisters who spent summers on the farm didn’t talk about it much. Sometimes Heather would complain about her calluses, but dad hated complainers. “Hard work builds character,” he’d say. Nobody argued with dad.
Whoever Curtis took with him would be gone until Labor Day. They’d come back real tan and different looking. Something in their eyes. They looked more like grown-ups. I was jealous because I was tired of staying home with the little kids. None of them could talk yet and their hands are always sticky.
The summer when I was chosen started off different then I imagined. Curtis was working the grill when my cousin, Christian came up for his third hot dog. Curtis asked him to make a muscle. He grabbed Chris’ bicep and said, “Wow, big man.” Then he told him to pack a bag.
“What about me?” I asked.
“Yeah, okay. You can come too.”
That was it?
I held up my arm hoping to get the same kind of attention, but Curtis just ruffled my hair and handed me his empty beer can.
That night I couldn’t sleep. Mom told me to pack light. Just my clothes and a toothbrush. I guessed they’d have everything else when I got there.
Early the next morning when it was still dark, Curtis picked us up in a delivery truck. He made us get in the back. There were no windows, and it was really hot in there. We couldn’t make any noise. He wouldn’t even let us out to take a piss. We had to do it in soda bottles.
Chris looked scared. I thought maybe I was tougher than him after all. We didn’t know how long the trip was, but I was sure I’d missed a couple of meals. The truck eventually stopped. We heard Curtis talking to some people outside. We couldn’t understand what they were saying, but we could hear the scratch of their shoes on the gravel.
When the doors swung open, the burst of light made it impossible to see. Curtis helped us out of the truck while my eyes began to adjust. I saw three armed men, their automatic weapons pointed at the ground.
Curtis got a real kick out of the frightened looks on our faces because he nearly choked laughing so hard. Christian was already crying.
“Aw, you boys don’t have to worry. This here’s our security. They ain’t gonna hurt you unless you run.” He laughed again and the other men joined in.
The plants on this farm were not in neat rows but scattered around what felt like a jungle with tons of mosquitoes. There were other kids working there too. Some younger, some older, but nobody over twelve. We took the harvested plants back to the shed to dry and process them. We did everything. It smelled weird, but we got used to the smell.
At night we slept on cots in the shed. It was dirty and disgusting. They fed us nothing but beans and baloney sandwiches. We didn’t have bathrooms, just a hose at the back of the shed. It was stupid to complain because whatever you’d get as punishment was worse than whatever you were complaining about. None of us dared to run either. We just had to hold out until school started again.
When it was time to go home, they loaded us back into the delivery truck. I’d never been so relieved. I missed my mom. I even missed my dad and my siblings. The truck stopped. I heard scuffling outside. When the doors opened to the blinding light, the first faces I saw belonged to the police. My dad and Uncle Curtis were lying on the ground in handcuffs. They were arrested for drug trafficking.
I didn’t know what that meant, so I asked the policewoman if I was in trouble.
“No, honey, but you’d better get some rest. You’ve got school tomorrow.”
About the Creator
Leslie Writes
Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.
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Comments (21)
Love the mystery and suspense of this one, which pays off in the end. Congrats on great story and win!
This is an excellent story. Congratulations on Top Story 👏🎉
I love the POV from a child, trying to make sense of things. Well done and Congratulations!!!
There is both a sense of mystery and inevitability about this story. Congratulations on a greatly deserved victory in the challenge! ⚡️💙Bill⚡️
Absolutely loved it. I wasn't sure where it was going until the end. Congrats on the challenge win!
Spectacular storytelling!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕 Congratulations on the challenge win!!!
Crazy twist great story, congrats on your win!
Congratulations on the win so well deserved. Nostalgia and loss of innocence all tolled in one. Fantastic story
I love how you flipped this story on its head and gave readers a little bit of a wake-up call. The introduction made it seem like we were going to enjoy some kind of idyllic childhood nostalgia piece, yet it became a sad commentary on something that is all too real. Very well written. Congrats on the win.
Congratulations, Leslie. Well-deserved win! Character building, a great story, drug trafficking, and a whole lot of growing up (a nice way of saying 'losing your childhood innocence'). What a summer!
Fabulous story, well told. Congrats on your win!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Wow! Can't believe they were using kids for this kind of work. Amazing story, Leslie and Super Congrats on your win!!! 🤩
This is wonderful! Congratulations!!! 👏🏾
It really is that simple how they trap children in to do the work. This felt so real. Congratulations on the Win. well deserverd
That was terrifyingly good! Congratulations on the win!
What an unforgettable and powerful read. The way you captured the narrator’s voice pulled me in completely, and that ending hit like a punch. Congratulations on your win, it’s an honor to be featured alongside such a gripping and skillfully told story
Horrifying, I’ve worked with teenagers that have gone through horrors. Heart goes out to these boys when reading this
Uncle Curtis sounds like an awful person. Letting them piss in a soda bottle, not allowed out. Smh. Awe poor Christian. I would have the same expression if I were to see those. Especially first thing, when exiting a vehicle. Having to go to school tomorrow after all that. I don't think I would be able to concentrate. Adults aren't always safe to be around. This was well written Leslie, the story was easy to follow and I got quite invested in their lives. 🤗❤️
This excellently captures the feelings of children around crime. Well done Leslie!
Ah man, give the boy a break. Why does he still need to go to school? Lol. But why we're only Curtis and MC's dad arrested? Wasn't his mom in on this too? Loved your story!