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Summer flavored escape 👒👰🏻

Plans gone all wrong. Summer askew. 👰🏻💨

By Antoni De'LeonPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

The view from the elegant room was perfect. A delightful dream to the young woman peering smilingly at the landscape. A mild summer day unfolds gently, like a page turned by a breeze.

The sun isn't blazing, but rather dispersing in hints of warmth, its golden light dapples through leafy branches, inviting skin to bask without scorching. Temperatures linger around 22°C (72°F), just enough to coax open a few lazy blossoms in the garden, while shade-dwelling herbs quietly stretch toward the light.

🕊️ In the air, there's a softness...no heavy humidity, just the subtle scent of cut grass and lavender. A few cotton clouds drift slowly overhead, giving the sky a storybook quality. Birds sing not frantically, but with a leisurely rhythm, as if they too are savoring the calm.

👒 It’s the kind of day where windows are left ajar and time feels suspended. Some walk slowly along riversides, straw hats tipped back, eyes half-closed in quiet gratitude. Others lounge with a book they’ve reread too many times, comforted by its worn pages and the sound of bees humming nearby.

It's not dramatic, but it’s perfect in its quietness...like nature itself is taking a deep breath.

🕊️

For no apparent reason which she could immediately fathom...Ruby suddenly felt trapped. She turned to look at the the large chocolate cake, standing like a sentinel to a life where she would be tethered. Her future flashed before her eyes in cinematic views of long ago reels. She saw the beautiful sculptured creation as a gigantic heartache instead of her wedding masterpiece.

What am I doing? Thought the young bride-to-be.

"I should be feeling happy, elated...like I can't wait to become one with another human being".

Ruby felt a volcanic panic which started as a slight tingling in her toes, then radiated to her ankles, she actually stumbled a bit. The feeling quickly climbed like vines up to her feet, her knees felt weak. Thighs, hips, pelvic - thousands of butterflies converged on her stomach...they roared like lions to her throat...it burned like hellfire.

Ruby opened her mouth as they hurtled through her throat...and she screamed. Loudly and terrifyingly. The butterflies made their escape as a rumbling noise into the wind. They flew...like caged animals escaping to freedom.

Ruby gathered up the cumbersome, suddenly burdensome elegant wedding dress...

And she ran...🌿 🕊️

Down the hall, past the portrait of her imagined bridesmaids, dressed as the seven Pleiades sisters, adorned in celestial gowns against a starry sky.

She sped past the many presents, her mother...mouth open mid-enquiry, past the guests in perfectly arranged chairs and her dog, Perseus, who barked in question marks...perhaps thinking her gone mad.

👰🏻💨 The lace of her gown trails behind like tendrils of a life she almost lived.

She doesn’t hesitate. The doors have just flung open, and she’s already halfway down the stone steps...heels abandoned, veil tangled in the breeze. Gasps echo behind her: relatives stunned, bouquets dropped, a groom frozen in disbelief. But she isn’t looking back.

👰🏻💨

Each step is powered by a pulse that’s finally her own...fast, alive, free. The path is a blur of summer petals crushed underfoot and shocked faces fading in the periphery. Her hair comes undone as the wind claims its dark strands flying like abandoned promises set free.

🚘 And there it is. Parked just outside the door...a driver waits, one hand poised casually on the wheel, the other reaching out just slightly as if he already knew she’d come.

"Get out, now". She orders. He does not hesitate, not his first escaping bride.

Ruby slides into the leather seat with one breathless glance toward the sky, and the door shuts with the soft finality of a chapter closed.

🚘🚘🚘

Ruby...

I was supposed to be made of lace and promises.

A fragile thread sewn into someone else’s dream.

But the altar felt like a tether,

and the vows...like velvet cuffs.

I ran.

Not from him.

But from the hush of settling.

From the polite surrender in everyone’s smile.

From the mirror that said: “This is enough.”

Now...

the sky cracks open like the myself I forgot I believed in,

and the wind peels off the past, strand by strand.

My lungs remember how to stretch.

My feet remember how to fly

I see you.

In this car that waited like a story I almost missed.

You don’t ask why.

You already know.

You’ve seen the look before:

that final breath before freedom...

wide-eyed, laughing with salty tears

and trembling just enough to prove I’m still real.

The young woman exhales in uncertainty, not knowing what awaits...but she is free to explore what lies beyond the road.

Stream of ConsciousnessMystery

About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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  • Tiffany Gordon6 months ago

    So stunning! Such vivid, gorgeous writing! I felt as if I were running beside her every step of the way! by the end of this piece I felt elated and excited 4 Ruby. It is no fun being a caged bird! Brilliant work Miss Antoni! Brava! 🎉

  • Caitlin Charlton6 months ago

    How beautiful is that imagery, a page turned by a breeze. Sadly the contents may not be a happy one... I like how you played with the weather, natures creation, the description slows the pace of this story and the effects of that leaves a lasting impression. Wooow Anthoni. What were you sipping when you wrote this bit: 'volcanic panic' the entire bit following those two words. Blew me away. It was as if I was her, and her fear, the depth of it was understood faster than it took me to reach that full stop. Wise and accurate you were. A story written around a single feeling we all know too well. The drawing accompanies every bit of it, too. There are so many things unsaid in-between a vow. So many skeletons and demons under the weight of that wedding dress and within the fibres of the grooms attire. Expertly done, Antoni. You held my attention all the way through ❤️🤗👌🏾

  • She made the right decision. Marriage is often unwanted stress and responsibility and most times end in heartbreak. Loved your story!

  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    What great sketches you used to go along with words. Runaway bride stories are stores in search of answers that decisions right or wrong like why do they wait at the ceremony to run or why did they say "Yes" when they really did not mean to say it. Good job.

  • Novel Allen6 months ago

    Oh, wowsa! This one really breathes freedom...excellent descriptions. Wonder if she will try that again. great work.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji6 months ago

    Runaway bride. Often we may love someone but the idea of lifelong commitment is at the wrong time. Does give me a nice feeling of freedom reading it

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    Wow! Your imagery was so vivid, I could feel the summer warmth on this cold winter's night. I love the drawing too.

  • Carol Ann Townend6 months ago

    This is one powerful and excellent work. Sometimes we love someone, but we realise that a lifetime of commitment isn't what we need. At other times it feels right, until the final moment.

  • Abdur-rahman6 months ago

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  • Wow. That was vivid. I'm glad that she took the step of escaping before a lifetime of unhappiness...yet sorry for the groom! And I like the way you left the man in the car a bit of a mystery!!

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