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Snake

Sold it all

By Sid Aaron HirjiPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Snake
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He was tired of never getting picked for hockey. He thought maybe if he sold his soul to the man he would get picked. It was worth a shot. He wrote a letter to the man and signed it stating he was giving his soul to be the best at hockey. The next day it worked. He snaked through the line and deked all opponents. He was always chosen first for hockey. Until the day the man collected his soul. He turned into a snake.

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Sid Aaron Hirji

Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.

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  • Snakes Worldabout a year ago

    What an intense twist! Sometimes, you think getting what you want will solve everything, but it comes at a cost. The idea of selling one's soul for success is both intriguing and eerie. A snake transformation? Now that's a bold way to remind us that deals with the "man" don't always work out as expected. 🐍 If you’re into tales of twists, turns, and snake lore, head over to https://snakesworld.info/ for more cool stories and facts about snakes! 🐍💀

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    Might be quite cool to be a snake!

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    Hey Cid, I like all devil stories. But if you don't mind you, your 'be' missed the b, and thanks, I never knew 'deke' was a word until now.

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