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Sins Of Subaru Natsuki

SINS OF NATSUKI SUBARU - (chp1) Back to Zero

By R3N R3NPublished 4 years ago 10 min read
Sins Of Subaru Natsuki
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Subaru had died 20 times yet made very little progress. Devastated he died yet again at the hands of Reid. However it was different this time. He looped back to the beginning! To the first loop at the apple stand! From where he could change the unavoidable future.

Subaru:- "What is going on? Why am I here? I was at the Pleaides tower then I was killed, but.... "

Suddenly a man shouting at him could be heard. It was old man who ran the apple store.

Kadomon:- "Boy if you aren't buying anything then leave! "

Subaru:- " Man aren't you being kind of rude to me? Say Old man do you remember me? I am Natsuki Subaru."

Kadomon:- "That's a weird name. But I haven't met you before. Now leave and don't block my customers!"

Subaru left. This confirmed the fact that he had returned to first loop, the beginning! He sat yet again at the same alley way as the first loop with the plastic bag in his hands. Now he thought to himself,

Subaru:- "How did this happen? Why did Satilla send me to the beginning? I thought it was supposed to be impossible! But.... It us to my advantage. I can prevent everything now! Yes, there won't be a need to go to the Pleaides tower!"

Just as he rejoiced the three thugs came. It was tonchinkwn! The useless trio

Chin:- "Hand over all of your valuable goods! "

Subaru:- "Tonchinken! It is you three ha? "

Ken:- "How do you know our names? Boss we need to do something about him!"

Ton:- "I also agree!"

Subaru thought to himself that Emilia and Felt will pass through this area if he waits long enough, but he was not a fan if getting beaten up however he noticed something.

Subaru:- "My body! It is the same as after I spent the one whole year in Lugnica and the fight against sin archbishop of lust! "

Subaru was now confident! He decided to fight against them and by some time until Emilia came! He rushed at the three and first hit Chin blew him away. Then kicked Ken aside and then grabbed the hand of attacking Ton and threw him. By then Chin stood up and pulled out his daggers!

Chin:- "You are a knight, aren't you! You fooled us by wearing those weird clothes! Die!"

Subaru shocked and pleased at the same time on being mistaken as a knight. Though technically he is a knight but not yet. Chin attacked Subaru but he kept on dodging. Suddenly felt passed through and saw SUBARU fighting.

Felt :- "Stay strong brother!"

Saying that she ran away. The other two also stood up and ganged up on Subaru. Just then she came.RE ZERO:- SINS OF NATSUKI SUBARU - (chp1) Back to Zero

Emilia:- "That's as far as you go! Stop you villains! Hand over what you had stolen quietly."

Chin:- "We haven't stolen anything of yours miss!"

Subaru:- "Yes they haven't, you see they were busy trying to rob me the whole time! "

Emilia:- "I see... Then I have to leave, but I can't ignore what you are doing either! Yet two against three isn't fair.... "

???:- "Why don't we make it a three against three then?"

???:- "What about four against three!

The handsome red haired Reinhard and the fluffy and cute Puck appeared out of nowhere. The thugs who recognized Reinhard ran away and Subaru was saved.

Subaru:- "Thank you guys for saving me back there sir sword saint Reinhard and sir great spirit. "

Reinhard:- "Rather it seems the one who was saved was them. You seemed to be very confident while facing three people at once."

Emilia:- "You do you have any information on who the thief was? It ran through this place I am sure."

Subaru:- "Yes I know who she is and as a Thanks for saving me let me help you! You see my mission is to help at least one person a day! "

Emilia laughs in her usual cute manner and Reinhard looked impressed. Puck then touched Subaru's fore head and spoke....

Puck:- "Lia he seems like a good person. Let him help us!"

Reinhard:- "If you allow me, I will like to help you too.."

Emilia:- "No the one who was careless was me I can"t possibly trouble a busy person like you Reinhard! "

Reinhard:- "No worries I have a holiday today you see. Plus I have taken a liking to this man's goal! Your name is..... "

Subaru:- "I am Natsuki Subaru!"

Emilia:- "I am Emilia, simple Emilia! This is Puck my contracted spirit."

Reinhard:- "I am Reinhard a knight of Lugnica."

Subaru:- "OK, Emilia-tan if it is OK with you then kindly allow Reinhard to accompany us we will need him. "

Emilia:- "Huh? Need him? Emilia-tan?"

Subaru:- "Was it rude of me? You see from where I come from we usually give friends nicknames. I thought we were friends now so.... "

Emilia:- "No no it is OK. I didn't know that is all. Friends.... Ha? "

Emilia suddenly blushed in embarrassment, while Subaru screamed cute in his mind. However he did not notice Reinhard keeping a close eye on him. Reinhard felt something evil around Subaru thus wanting to accompany them.

Subaru:- "You see, the girl who stole you property was Felt. She lives in the slums near hear. I had seen a deadly assassin Elsa Granhiert going in that direction."

Reinhard:- "You mean the deadly assassin called Bowl hunter! "

Subaru:- "Yes! "

All four came to an agreement and started moving towards the slums on the way they found a lost child and Subaru showed the kid a trick and calmed her down then lead her to her mother. She gave a pin to Emilia. Reinhard had just started to let his guard down around Subaru. They reached the loot house.

There they heard a discussion going on. Subaru looked at the other three and asked them to remain silent. He knocked on the door. To everyone"s surprise Subaru knew the password to the loot house.

Rom:- "Come in dear customer! Wait what...."

Felt:- "What happened old ma...…. "

Both of them were speechless after seeing the "customers" enter. They were on their guard. Emilia, Puck and Reinhard ready for battle but Subaru stops them.

Subaru:- "Everyone stop and let's talk."

Rom arranged some chairs and negotiation began.

Emilia:- "We will like if you could return my insignia! If you do I will be ready to forgive you."

Reinhard:- "Insignia? I see, no need to worry it is unfortunate but I am on a holiday today. "

Felt :- "No can do, our client will kill us if we fail, and we do this for money."

Emilia, Subaru and Reinhard didn't have a single penny on them but Subaru spoke.

Subaru:- "There is no more need to fear, Reinhard here will take care of your employee and whereas the topic about money...."

Subaru suddenly kneeled in front of Felt. Everyone including felt was surprised.

Subaru:- "I greet the fifth and last candidate for the royal selection, Felt-sama! "

Everyone's eyes widened. Shocked, speechless and bewildered! Fifth candidate? Reinhard was surprised by the fact that Subaru knew about the fifth candidate prophecy.

Reinhard:- "I see, the insignia is reacting to you, I can"t overlook this. I will have you accompany me Miss Felt. "

Rom:- "I won't let you kidnap my granddaughter!"

???:- "Mind if I joined the conversation?"

There she stood, the bowl hunter, Elsa Granhiert.RE ZERO:- SINS OF NATSUKI SUBARU - (chp1) Back to Zero

Subaru:- "Ahhhhhh.. Shit Elsa! "

Elsa jumped towards Emilia but Subaru stepped in.

Subaru:- "And she goes for the gut! Table wall! "

Subaru used the table and blocked Elsa's attack however using her second blade she slashed Subaru. Though he knew she would do that as he has already faces her plenty of times before. However he still received a heavy blow.

Emilia:- "Subaru! You! "

Emilia and puck fired ice shards at her. Dodging all of their attacks Elsa pushed forward and was again stopped but this time by Reinhard.

He caught Elsa's blade and broke it with his bare hands.

Rom:- "Take this!"

Old man Rom swung his huge club, but missed Elsa and destroyed the wooden floor. Elsa threw a knife and wounded Rom's gut. Emilia who was busy healing Subaru couldn't help Rom at the same time. Felt who couldn't do anything but stand was now trying to stop the blood flowing out of Rom's gut. Reinhard couldn't use his full power due to this. Puck's time ran out and he had to leave. The situation was going from worse to worst.

Subaru losing consciousness at that time thought,

Subaru:- "Why is this happening, nothing has changed at all! I am still weak able to do nothing but rely on others! Why am I so weak?"

???:- "Do you want power, we will lend you our. "

A voice of six people talking together was coming from inside Subaru"s head.

Subaru:- "Yes lend me power, I don't want to be s burden anymore! "

Suddenly Subaru's body got engulfed by black shadows. Emilia and everyone else even Elsa was surprised. Subaru's clothes changed, his whole aura changed and his eyes were lifeless. Looking into them you could see hatred, sorrow and insanity.

???:- "...…"

Emilia:- "Subaru?"

???:- "Don't worry Emilia I will protect you...."

His voice was scary, everyone broke in cold sweat including Reinhard.

???:- "Elsa Granhiert, I shall be your opponent. I am "Sin of Natsuki Subaru:- PRIDE!" "

He picked up the daggers thrown by Elsa and walked forward.

Reinhard:- "Let's take down together Subaru, your wounds might have closed but don't push yourself."

Pride:- "I don't need your help SWORD SAINT! I will deal with her alone."

Then everyone suddenly noticed, Subaru's wounds were completely healed. Emilia started to heal Rom now. Elsa was shocked, Subaru took a stance just like her and rushed forward way faster than before!

Elsa:- "I wonder how your bowels will look like, Mr. Pride! "

This battle was even more shocking than before. Subaru and Elsa were using the same techniques to fight. It was as if two Elsa(s) we're fighting each other! Just that Subaru was stronger.

Subaru:- "Ha... Ha... Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! "

Elsa:- "Fu... Fu.. Fu Fu ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! "

Subaru laughed like a mad man while Elsa also couldn't stop her laughter!

They were enjoying themselves. It was as if they knew each other for years and we're now enjoying a friendly spare.

Subaru:- "This is getting boring... Al Goa!"

Subaru suddenly started to fire spells at Elsa. They were strong enough to challenge Roswaal, the strongest magical of Lugnica!

Elsa was now greatly wounded but her wounds were healing.

Pride:- "As expected of a vampire! "

Reinhard:- "She is a vampire! I never knew that. So that explains her absurd strength."

Pride:" "Yes you are right, Sword saint Reinhard!"

They had come to a conclusion that this man wasn't Subaru. His voice was filled with care for Emilia, hatred for Reinhard and indifference for the rest.

Pride:- "Take this Elsa! "

Pride fired now an barrage of spells in all six elements. It was as if Roswaal had come to fight Elsa.

Elsa:- "It seems I will have to retreat for now, I was never told there would be a monster gathered here. "

Pride:- "Not so fast, Buzzzz!"

Pride made a weird voice and suddenly thousands of insects caught Elsa and brought her to Subaru.

Pride:- "Work for me Elsa, I want to hire you! Permanently "

Everyone was shocked, hire an assassin who was trying to kill you?

Pride:- "I will give you time, think over it. "

He then let Elsa leave and walked towards Emilia Andre rest. Emilia had healed Oldman Rom completely and now stood up.

Pride:" "I leave the rest to you Reinhard."

Subaru returned to normal, completely exhausted and feel on Emilia who caught him.

Reinhard:- "Felt sama please accompany me, it isn't save here and I would like to talk to you about the insignia. Your grandpa can accompany us. "

Felt:- "I don't want to go with you but I can't deny it right now, as grandpa is wounded."

Emilia:- "I will be talking Subaru with me, he is my life saver after all. "

Reinhard:- "I will later drop by to pay him a visit. "

With this everyone parted their ways while Subaru saw something in his dreams a story being narrated.

Sci Fi

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