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She Said 'We're Not Right,' But Her Eyes Told a Different Story

A poignant tale of love, miscommunication, and the heartbreak of letting go.

By Adam CollinsPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

She left without shedding a single tear.

Just placed the key gently on my desk and gave me a faint smile.

That smile wasn't bitter or resentful.

It was calm—so calm it felt as if we had never been together.

She said, "We're not right for each other."

After saying that, she didn't wait for my response and walked out the door.

As the door closed, I noticed her hands trembling.

We had been together for nearly two years.

There was no earth-shattering love, but I believed we would continue on.

I never imagined it would end this way—she still loved me, yet chose to leave.

Honestly, she was more of a "long-termist" than I was.

I was slow to warm up; she was patient. I rarely expressed emotions; she would repeatedly ask how my day was.

She was the kind who remembered I liked extra sugar in my tomato and egg stir-fry,

the kind who would bring in the laundry before it rained and quietly warm up food when I worked late into the night.

We never had major fights; our days were as steady as a ledger.

But it was this steadiness that suddenly broke one day.

That evening, she sat across from me at dinner, silent.

After dinner, I washed the dishes while she sat on the couch, lost in thought.

When I came out of the kitchen, she looked at me and asked, "Adam, have you ever thought about our future together?"

I was taken aback.

She lowered her head and smiled, saying, "Never mind, I know the answer."

She knew I loved her.

She just realized: In this relationship, she was always the one running, while I stood still with open arms.

She had tried to pull me into her rhythm—planning trips together, decorating a new home, discussing whether to buy an air fryer.

I always said, "Let's see," "You decide," "I have no opinion."

She once said something that I always remembered:

"I'm not trying to control you. I just hope you're alive in our future."

In the days leading up to her departure, I sensed she had changed.

She stopped asking what I wanted for dinner and no longer reminded me to rest.

She became very quiet, much like the unfamiliar her when we first met.

That final night, she packed slowly.

I thought she was waiting for me to say something. But I said nothing.

I feared that if I said "Don't go," she would stay,

but then what? I still wouldn't know how to love her the way she wanted.

She didn't force me to choose. She just saw the answer clearly.

She said, "It's not that I don't love you. I'm just too afraid we'll keep dragging this on, and nothing will come of it."

After she left, I looked at the room she had left behind.

On the desk was a half-read novel, with a sticky note on the cover, written in blue ink:

"Don't live solely by reason; it's exhausting."

The handwriting was slightly slanted; she had written it in a hurry.

I sat on the couch she used to sit on, hugging the pillow she left behind, eyes closed in a daze.

It's not that I didn't love her. I was just too accustomed to restraint,

too used to proving I wasn't wrong through silence,

too used to being "in" the relationship without truly "participating" in it.

She said, "You never argue with me or fight for anything, but I've never felt you do anything 'for me.'"

She didn't want perfection; she wanted someone willing to be messy, to argue, to break down, and to grow together.

But I always thought that as long as I didn't leave, that was love.

Three months after we parted, I saw her at an intersection.

She stood among the crowd, wearing the trench coat we bought together.

She didn't see me. I didn't approach her.

I just looked down and smiled.

Not because I had let go. Not because I wished her well.

Just because I finally understood:

We didn't stop loving each other. We just weren't right for each other.

And "loving but not right" is more heartbreaking than "no longer loving."

This story maintains the emotional depth and introspective tone of the original, aiming to resonate with readers on the Vocal platform.

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Adam Collins

freelance writer

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