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Sanctuary

Sometimes, the safest place is the one you build from your fears.

By Malaika PioletPublished 3 months ago 4 min read

The rain had been falling for three days straight.

Not the kind that dances on rooftops and sings lullabies, but the kind that soaks through bones — heavy, endless, punishing. The town below was drowning in mud and silence. Yet high on the hill, where the forest thickened into darkness, the old church stood untouched.

They called it The Sanctuary.

No one remembered when it was built, or by whom. It didn’t appear on maps. Travelers claimed it appeared only to those who truly needed it — those who had nowhere else to go.

That’s how I found it.

I’d been driving for hours, running from a life that no longer felt like mine. My hands shook on the steering wheel, knuckles white, tears blurring the road. I don’t even remember why I turned into that dirt path. Something in me — or something beyond me — pulled me there.

When the tires finally gave up in the mud, I saw it: a faint light through the trees. A window glowing gold in the storm.

I left the car and ran.

By the time I reached the doors, my clothes clung to me like wet paper. I knocked once. No answer. Twice. The wood felt warm beneath my palm — strange for a place so cold. And then, the door creaked open on its own.

Inside, the air was dry. Still.

Candles burned along the aisles, though there was no one to tend them. Rows of wooden pews stretched into shadow, and at the far end stood an altar carved from dark stone. Behind it hung a painting — a faceless angel with wings spread wide.

I should have turned back. I should have left. But exhaustion rooted me there.

I sat on one of the benches, trying to calm the tremor in my chest. “Just for the night,” I whispered to myself. “I’ll leave when the rain stops.”

That’s when I heard it — a voice, soft but close.

“You can stay as long as you need.”

I turned. A woman stood near the candles. She was dressed in a gray cloak that brushed the floor, her face half-lit by the flicker. Her eyes — pale, almost colorless — studied me gently.

“I didn’t mean to intrude,” I said.

“You didn’t,” she replied. “No one finds this place by accident.”

Her tone was calm, but her words sent a chill through me. “What is this place?”

She smiled faintly. “A sanctuary. For those who are lost.”

Over the next few hours, I told her everything — the breakup, the guilt, the feeling that I’d been disappearing piece by piece. She listened without interrupting, hands folded, eyes never leaving mine.

When I finished, she said only, “You came here because you wanted to be forgiven.”

“Forgiven?” I laughed bitterly. “For what? For walking away from someone who broke me?”

“For forgetting that pain is a teacher, not a curse,” she said.

Her words unsettled me. But before I could respond, a soft hum filled the church — low and melodic, like a choir I couldn’t see. The candles flickered.

“What is that sound?” I asked.

“The Sanctuary is welcoming you,” she said. “It does that for everyone who arrives.”

I wanted to believe her, but the hum grew louder, vibrating through the floorboards, through my ribs. The painting behind the altar seemed to shift — the angel’s wings stretching wider, the shadows deepening.

Fear crawled up my throat. “I think I should go.”

She nodded. “You can. But remember — once you leave, you can’t return.”

I turned toward the door, but stopped. Rain was still crashing outside, the world beyond the church swallowed in darkness. Inside, though, the air felt safe.

Too safe.

“Who are you?” I asked.

She tilted her head, as if considering whether I deserved the truth. “I am the keeper,” she said finally. “I stay here until someone takes my place.”

The hum grew softer again, like the room exhaling.

“What happens when someone does?”

“They become the keeper.”

I frowned. “And what happens to you?”

She smiled — not sadly, but peacefully. “I go home.”

That night, I slept in one of the pews. When I woke, the rain had stopped. Sunlight streamed through the high windows, turning the dust into gold.

The woman was gone.

I called out, searched the entire church, even stepped outside — but she had vanished. Only the candles remained, burning steadily, untouched by time.

Then I noticed something new on the altar — a small wooden box. Inside it lay a single key and a note:

“Every soul must guard what saved it.”

I don’t know why, but I pocketed the key. Maybe I thought it was meant for me. Maybe part of me already knew.

When I returned to my car, it started immediately — though the engine had died the night before. As I drove away, I glanced in the rearview mirror. The road behind me was empty.

The church was gone.

Months passed. I moved to a new city, started a quieter life. Yet sometimes, late at night, I still heard that soft hum — faint but familiar. And whenever I closed my eyes, I saw the faceless angel with wings spread wide, waiting in the dark.

I told myself it was memory. Grief. Guilt. But then, last week, a stranger knocked on my door.

A young woman, drenched from rain, trembling. “I’m sorry,” she said breathlessly. “My car broke down on the hill. I saw a light in your window.”

I froze. Behind her, the storm raged just like it had that night.

And from somewhere deep inside my house, faint but certain, I heard it again — the hum.

I looked at her and felt my heart sink.

I finally understood what the note meant.

Every soul must guard what saved it.

The door creaked open wider, inviting her in.

“Come inside,” I said softly. “You can stay as long as you need.”

The hum deepened, warm and welcoming.

And outside, the rain began again.

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