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Run!

A Story Every Day in 2024 July 17th 199/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Run!
Photo by Andrey Metelev on Unsplash

"Run!"

That was the last word I heard before the blast, when things were normal. Buildings stood, complete. People were moving leisurely, meandering and weaving, talking and laughing. I could hear.

Now, there is ringing and ringing and RINGING! It pierces me, penetrating into my very thoughts, skewering them with its shrill cry. I hear the muffled shrieks of terror and see the dust and the open mouths and the wide, wide eyes. People look like albino zombies or agitated atoms as they're either dazed or frantic.

Or dead.

Hellish visions swim past.

I'm scared!

Then, I realise: I'm alive!!

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100 words

Another mini micro.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Capturing dramatic events and emotional range in 100 words! IMPRESSIVE!

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    Great drabble, Rachel!

  • Caroline Craven2 years ago

    You’re crushing these 100 word stories!

  • Oooo, albino zombies! That's really cool!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    Terror in miniature. Loved this, Rachel!

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