Road Trip
Four friends drive through the desert on the way to their final Spring Break.

Isaac spun the wheel, turning the car onto a new patch of road. “And that is the last turn for the next 257 miles,” he said.
“And I can’t see anything but dirt for miles and miles in every direction,” Florence said, sitting to the right of him.
From the back seat Faye piped up, “Yeah, but it is some pretty dirt!”
In the back next to her Keenan replied, “Faye, you’ve gotta be the only person who thinks dirt is pretty.”
“Yeah, well…” Faye began, though she struggled to find a good comeback. Finally, she caved. “SPRING BREAK!” she yelled.
“SPRING BREAK!” they all yelled in unison. Yelling “SPRING BREAK” was how most conversations had ended the past few hours.
The four friends drove down the highway — if you could even call it that — slowly making their way towards their Spring Break destination. Above them, the two kayaks gently rattled against the roof of Isaac’s beat up Subaru.
“I still can’t believe we’re going to the Grand Canyon,” Keenan said.
“I still can’t believe you haven’t been, being that we’ve lived so close to it for all these years,” Isaac replied. He looked at Keenan’s face in the rear view mirror before returning his focus to the road. Though, there wasn’t much to focus on. He could probably have closed his eyes for the next 50 miles and still have been in the lane when he opened them.
“You know, Computer Science is not a degree that pairs well with weekend excursions to the Grand Canyon,” Keenan said. “These past four years, the grandest canyon I’ve seen is the ditch outside the COMP building.”
“I’m telling you, you have to get a life!” Faye said, nudging him with her shoulder. “Who moves all the way from Atlanta to Colorado and doesn’t go outside once?”
“Someone who actually hopes to get a job,” Keenan replied. Faye frowned and stuck her tongue out at him.
From the front, Florence jumped in to defend Keenan. “He did go outside with us once. Remember when we spent the weekend in Colorado Springs? Climbed Pikes Peak?”
“Pikes Peak! Now that was a great trip,” Isaac said.
“God Flo, I think that was when we were freshmen,” Faye replied. “Keenan, tell me you’ve been outside at least once since then.”
“I go outside!” Keenan said. “Everyday when I walk from the dorm to class!” Faye rolled her eyes dramatically while Isaac and Florence chuckled.
“Well,” Isaac began, “the Grand Canyon is definitely a step up from the ditch outside COMP. It’s massive. Remember when we went there on that field trip?”
“Which one, the fifth grade one or the eighth grade one?” Florence asked.
“Eighth.”
“Oh I remember that one,” Faye said. “You mean the one where you spent the entire trip trying to get Cindy to make out with you?”
“Fuck off!” Isaac said while the three others laughed. Eventually, Isaac began to chuckle as well. “I can’t help it,” he said. “She was cute okay…”
“You’ve always had a thing for girls with glasses,” Faye said cheekily, poking him through the seat. Isaac’s hands tensed around the steering wheel as Florence adjusted her glasses next to him.
“You guys are pretty lucky to have known each other since birth,” Keenan replied.
“Only Isaac and Flo have known each other since birth,” Faye said, returning her hands to her lap. “I only moved to Boulder in the third grade.”
“Close enough,” Keenan said. “It’s nice to have friends like that. Neighbors to grow up with.”
“We might have been neighbors, but Isaac wouldn’t even talk to me until we were 8,” Florence said. “No matter how many dinner parties our parents had.”
Isaac relaxed his grip on the wheel. “I couldn’t!” he exclaimed.
“Why’s that?” Florence said.
“It’s simple really,” Isaac said before taking a brief pause. “COOTIES!”
The four laughed. “Still must have been nice,” Keenan mused, looking out the window. “A nice way to grow up.” A gentle silence filled the car, almost threatening to lengthen into an awkward one. Around them was still nothing but dirt.
“Isaac, how could you possibly have talked us into using your car,” Faye said. “No bluetooth, AUX, or radio? You ought to be ashamed of yourself.”
“Ashamed?” Isaac said in a faux-mocking manner. “You know it was the only one that would fit the kayaks.” He reached behind to lightly flick her on the knee. “Besides, we’ve already made it more than halfway.”
“Yeah, but I was practically asleep the whole time!” Faye said.
“Faye does love her beauty sleep,” Florence said. Once again Faye stuck out her tongue, though from the front Florence couldn’t see.
“There is one thing I know though,” Isaac said. “One very important thing.”
“What’s that?” Keenan asked.
Isaac grinned — eyes still on the road — and whispered, “Spring Break.”
“SPRING BREAK!” the four of them yelled before collapsing into laughter. Seven hours in and the joke still hadn’t grown old.
“What about you Florence,” Keenan said. “Have you heard back from any med schools yet?”
“A few. My MCAT scores were high enough that I ought to be able to go anywhere.”
“But aren’t you going to stay in Colorado?” Keenan asked.
Florence briefly glanced at Isaac before responding. “Honestly, I’m not sure anymore. At first I wanted to… But it’s a wide world out there you know.” Isaac tensed his grip on the steering wheel again, though no one else seemed to notice.
“What about you Isaac?” Keenan said. “Still want to stay in CO?”
“Keenan Keenan Keenan,” Isaac began, wagging his finger in the air. “There are only so many things a Physics degree can get you. I’ll be lucky if I can find a job as a high school PE teacher.”
“There’s always custodian,” Faye said.
Isaac reached back and gently flicked her on the knee again. “Oh fuck off. Me, a custodian? You’re the one in Environmental Studies. You know, custodian might actually suit you. What’s more environmental than cleaning up other people’s shit?”
Faye crossed her arms and kicked the back of his seat, causing Isaac to curse again. Florence decided to chime in. “Have you thought about it though, Faye?” she said. “What you’re going to do in two months?”
Faye sat back in her seat, her arms still crossed. “Ugh. Don’t make me think about that right now Flo. We don’t all have the next 10 years of our lives mapped out in a color-coded planner.”
Florence briefly looked over her shoulder to give Faye a side-eye glare. “I’ll have you know, highlighters are quite useful.” Only Isaac gave a brief chuckle.
Silence returned to the car for a few moments, and the four turned their attention back to the outside world. Most of it was just dirt, with patches of low shrubs. Far off into the distance, you could just barely make out a few rock formations. It had been a while since any of them had seen another vehicle, coming or going.
Faye fidgeted in her seat. “Um… guys, you’re going to hate me, but I kind of need to pee again.” The three others let out a collective groan. Faye always needed to pee.
“Why didn’t you go when we were at the last gas station?” Florence demanded.
“I didn’t have to go then!”
“Well Faye,” Isaac said, “I hate to break it to you but we’re about 150 miles away from the next one.”
“Well…” Faye began, but was unsure how to continue. “Well, shit.”
Silence returned to the car again, though only briefly. “Okay, I actually need to go pretty bad,” Faye said, squirming in her seat.
Isaac lifted a hand up from the steering wheel. “What do you want me to do Faye? Just pull over so you can piss on the side of the road?”
“Well…” Faye began. The three others groaned again. Keenan covered his eyes. “What?” Faye continued, “We haven’t seen a car for miles. It would take like 30 seconds tops.”
“You really want me to stop right now so you can pee on the side of the road?”
“Would you rather I pee on your backseat?” Faye snapped back.
“Alright, we’re pulling over!” Isaac said, beginning to slow the car down to a stop.
“Spring Break!” Faye said.
“Spring Break…” the three others returned halfheartedly.
Isaac guided the car to a stop right off the side of the road and cut the engine. Faye unbuckled, opened the back left door, and raced around to the back right side, positioning herself so that the car would cover her in case another vehicle passed by.
“JUST GIVE ME A SEC!” Faye yelled from outside. “I’M GOING TO GIVE IT A SQUAT. KEENAN, I SWEAR TO GOD YOU BETTER NOT LOOK!”
Keenan now fully covered his entire face with his hands. “What the fuck are you doing Faye,” he mumbled. In the front, Isaac sat back in his seat, taking the moment to stretch his hands. Next to him, Florence rested her head on her arm.
“OKAY, PANTS ARE DOWN. KEENAN, EYES CLOSED!”
“FAYE, YOU DON’T HAVE TO FUCKING NARRATE IT!” Keenan yelled. Isaac and Florence chuckled.
“I can’t believe you dated her,” Florence said.
“Yeah well, I can’t believe I did either,” Keenan said, head still in his hands. “What was I thinking…”
“I CAN HEAR YOU!” Faye yelled from outside. Keenan groaned and lowered his head all the way into his lap. “ALRIGHT, ALMOST DONE! PANTS ARE ABOUT TO COME BACK UP!”
“THANK YOU FOR LETTING US KNOW!” Isaac yelled, before lowering his voice. “I’m just glad you two could stay friends.”
Keenan lifted himself back up. “It was important to Faye that we did,” he said softly. “She didn’t want to ruin the group.” Isaac tensed up again.
“PANTS ARE BACK UP!” Faye yelled, before running back around and opening the door. “See, I told you it wouldn’t take long.”
“Faye, you’re gross,” Keenan said.
“What, just because I can’t pee on whatever tree I find doesn’t mean I can’t go outside!” Faye retorted.
“Alright alright, settle down,” Isaac said. He gave his hands one last flex before reaching for the keys. “Time to hit the road again. I want to make it there before sunset.”
Isaac twisted the keys and the car revved, then stopped. He mumbled under his breath and tried it again, twisting the keys. Again the car revved, then stopped. “Fuck,” Isaac said. He tried a third time, but with the same results. Four times. Five times. Six times.
“Um, Isaac, what’s going on?” Florence said.
“Nothing! Nothing. Don’t worry about it,” Isaac said. He tried again. Seven times. Eight times. Nine times. But the car wouldn’t catch.
“Why isn’t the car starting?” Keenan said from the back.
Isaac continued trying to start the car, but nothing was working. In frustration, he hit the steering wheel, causing it to honk.
“Isaac!” Florence yelled.
Isaac crashed back into his seat. “Fucking hell. Well… fuck.”
“What’s wrong with it?” Faye said.
“Nothing. Well, probably not nothing, but… It does this sometimes. Just have to give it a few minutes before trying again.”
“Like how many minutes?” Florence said.
“Like, ten?” Isaac said, though his voice did little to inspire confidence.
Florence took a moment to look around. There wasn’t anything, anywhere, for miles, and miles, and miles. “Well… shit.”
“So we’re just going to sit here for ten minutes?” Faye asked.
“I guess so,” Keenan said.
Florence reached into her bag and pulled out her phone, looking at it for a few moments before tossing it back in. “I don’t suppose any of you have any signal either,” she said. The other three reached for their phones. None of them did.
“Great,” Florence mumbled.
Silence once again returned to the car. After a few moments, Isaac tried starting the car again, but failed.
“Stop doing that. You’re going to wear out the battery,” Keenan said. “Best to leave it alone for a bit.”
“Fine,” Isaac grumbled.
Silence stretched, and stretched, and stretched.
“It’s getting kind of stuffy in here,” Faye said.
“Well what do you want me to do about that Faye?” Isaac snapped back.
Faye frowned. After a moment, she unbuckled. “Might as well wait outside of the car then.” Faye got out of the car, stretched, and took a few steps into the endless dirt field. There was a small boulder nearby, the only thing breaking up the flat landscape. Faye headed towards it.
“Might as well get a stretch in as well,” Keenan said, unbuckling as well. He opened the door, stepped out, and gave a giant stretch. After that, he started following Faye towards the boulder.
Only Isaac and Florence remained in the car. Florence opened her car door to let some air in, but didn’t get out. Isaac followed suit. Neither of them said a word to the other.
Finally, Isaac spoke. “I’m sure it will be fine.”
“Yea,” Florence replied. She watched as Faye began to climb the boulder, Keenan standing below it with his arms on his waist. She imagined Keenan telling Faye to cut it out, but still standing close enough to catch her if she fell. Florence smiled. That pretty much summed up their relationship.
“Hey Florence, uh… about last night.”
“What about it?” Florence said, continuing to watch Faye climb, refusing to turn around to face Isaac.
“It’s just…” Isaac began. “I feel like I said all the wrong things. Or I mean, what I did say wasn’t how I meant it.”
“Oh really?” Florence said. “And what did you mean, telling me I was better off staying in Boulder?” She still refused to look at him. Faye reached the top of the boulder, and raised both her hands high. Keenan clapped.
“It came out wrong,” Isaac said, panicking. “I didn’t mean you weren’t good enough to leave Boulder, just…”
“You and I both know that I’ve gotten into every single med school I’ve applied to,” Florence snapped. “I am good enough.” Florence continued to watch the boulder. Now Keenan was beginning to climb up it. Faye sat on top, no doubt encouraging him.
“Florence, that’s not what I meant!”
“Then what did you mean?” Florence said, finally turning around to face Isaac. She was thrown off by the somber look on his face.
Isaac struggled to get each word out. “What I was trying to say,” Isaac said, before reverting to a whisper, “is that I’m afraid to lose you.” He held her gaze for a few moments before looking down at his lap.
Florence looked at him for a few moments, adjusted her glasses, then turned back to the boulder. Keenan was now on the top, sitting next to Faye. It seemed like they were talking to each other.
After a moment Isaac continued speaking, though it was barely a whisper. “I don’t want to lose you. I’m afraid you’ll leave and forget all about me. About us. I know you’re good enough to leave Boulder. You’re good enough to do anything. I’m just afraid… I’m not.”
Florence continued to watch the boulder, Faye and Keenan sitting on the top, talking. What were they talking about? What were they afraid of? Was it the same thing?
Florence watched as Faye leaned in and rested her head on Keenan’s shoulder. Maybe they were talking about the same thing.
“I love you Florence,” Isaac whispered. “You know I do. You’ve always known that, haven’t you?”
A single tear fell down Florence’s cheek as she continued to watch the boulder. Without looking, she reached out and grabbed Isaac’s hand. “I know you do,” she said. Isaac returned the squeeze.
Faye stood up on the boulder, Keenan holding her legs for support. Faye waved her hands in the direction of the car, then cupped her hands to her mouth and yelled something.
Florence let go of Isaac’s hand. “I think Faye is calling for us.”
Isaac looked up, noticing Faye and Keenan on the boulder for the first time. “How the hell did they get up there?” he said, laughing as he sniffled.
“I guess we should go find out what she wants,” Florence said.
“I guess so,” Isaac replied.
They both stepped out of the car and looked at the boulder. Faye sat back down next to Keenan, but continued to wave for them to come over. Isaac and Florence made their way towards the boulder. As they got closer they were finally able to make out what Faye was yelling.
“HEY!” Faye yelled from above. “YOU GOT TO SEE WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE UP HERE!”
“We can hear you just fine!” Isaac said as the two of them reached the base. “How the hell did you guys get up there?”
“IT’S EASY!” Faye yelled. “THERE’S A PART TO YOUR LEFT TO CLIMB UP. LIKE STEPS. VERY EASY.”
“Christ,” Isaac said, holding back a laugh. “What are we going to do with her?” He looked up at the top of the boulder, then turned around and looked at Florence. “Well, should we join them?”
Florence sighed, though there was a slight smile on her face. “Might as well.”
The two began to climb, Faye calling out instructions as they went. Of course she didn’t need to, it was practically steps. But that was Faye.
“ALMOST THERE!” Faye yelled. “ONE MORE BIG STEP TO YOUR LEFT, THEN LOOK RIGHT.”
Finally, Isaac and Florence reached the top, and Keenan and Faye raised their hands to congratulate them. The boulder was just big enough to fit all four of them. Keenan and Faye slid over so that Isaac and Florence could sit as well.
“Look out there!” Faye said, pointing far out into the distance. “Look! Are you looking?”
Isaac put his hand over his eyes, creating a makeshift visor. “I’m looking,” he said, reorienting himself to look in the direction Faye was pointing.
Florence turned as well to look. With her left hand, she clung onto the back of Isaac next to her. She had never been one for heights.
“Um, Faye,” Isaac said after a moment. “I’m looking, but I don’t really see anything but dirt.”
Faye and Keenan both laughed. Florence and Isaac looked at them, confused.
Finally, Faye spoke. “Yeah, but it’s kind of beautiful isn’t it?”
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