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Queen of the Hollow Crown

The underworld has a new ruler—and she's bringing chaos to the land of the dead.

By The Lost Books - "Libri Perditi"Published 8 months ago 5 min read
  1. Read the first story here: The Thief of Shadows

I: The First Rebellion

The dead moved differently now.

Lirael saw it in the way the shades paused mid-wail when she passed, their hollow eyes tracking her with something sharper than fear. The obsidian floors, once cold enough to burn bare flesh, now warmed beneath her footsteps like stones left in afternoon sun. Even the air had changed—thick with the scent of overripe figs and the metallic tang of freshly unearthed grave soil.

She knelt at the Styx's edge, letting the black water lap at her fingertips. The river recoiled.

Wrong.

The thought slithered up from the depths, vibrating through the liquid like a plucked harp string.

Not yours.

Lirael clenched her fist. The water boiled where her blood dripped from yesterday's thorn wounds. Across the river, a cluster of shades pressed against the invisible barrier that kept them from the palace grounds. Their mouths moved in perfect unison.

"She comes."

Behind her, Thanatos's shadow stretched long across the shore. He wore his indifference like armor, but the tendons in his neck stood taut as bridge cables. "They haven't spoken in millennia."

The water trembled against Lirael's palm. Not with fear—with recognition.

"Tell me," she said softly. "Did Persephone make the river bleed too?"

II: The Forgotten Goddess

The hidden door bled when Lirael touched it.

Not blood—something thicker, darker, that oozed between her fingers like congealed wine. The stone gave way with a sound like a dying man's sigh, revealing a stairwell choked with spiderwebs that glistened with unnatural moisture. Each step groaned beneath her weight, the carved reliefs of weeping women along the walls turning their faces to follow her descent.

The air grew denser with every step, pressing against her skin with the weight of forgotten centuries. By the time she reached the chamber floor, her breath came in shallow gasps, her lungs fighting against air that hadn't been breathed in lifetimes.

Persephone's statue dominated the circular room, its marble features eerily preserved beneath a shroud of dust. The crown in its hands wasn't stone but living briar, the thorns still glistening with some ancient venom. What struck Lirael first wasn't the resemblance—the same sharp cheekbones, the same defiant tilt to the chin—but the statue's stance. Not regal. Not resigned.

Ready for war.

"You shouldn't be here."

Thanatos stood in the doorway, his usual languid grace replaced by a tension that made the shadows writhe around him. For the first time since she'd known him, he looked... uncertain.

Lirael reached for the briar crown. The moment her fingers brushed the thorns, the statue's eyes snapped open—not carved marble, but flesh, the irises blooming crimson like blood in water.

The voice came from everywhere at once, vibrating through Lirael's bones:

"Little usurper. You took my crown. Now take my curse."

III: The War of Shadows

The briar crown fused to Lirael's skull with a sound like cracking bone.

She expected pain. What came was worse—memory.

Visions tore through her mind: Persephone laughing as she strung stars through the underworld's caverns, Persephone weeping as her own crown turned against her, Persephone screaming as they carved the knowledge from her flesh. The thorns burrowed deeper, tendrils of living vine threading through her dark hair like a lover's fingers. Blood trickled down her temples in delicate rivulets, each drop hitting the floor with a chime like distant temple bells.

Thanatos moved too slowly. His hand closed around empty air as Lirael shifted—not stepping aside, but momentarily existing somewhere between shadow and substance. The crown's power thrummed through her veins, whispering secrets in a language older than gods.

Outside, the underworld trembled.

Cerberus's howl split the silence, three voices raised in dissonant harmony. The right head—the one that remembered being human—screamed curses. The left wailed like a grieving widow. The center head... laughed.

Lirael touched her dripping temples. The blood on her fingers burned black. "You never told me they murdered her."

Thanatos's jaw tightened. "Some truths are knives that cut both ways."

The palace shook again. Somewhere above, shades were tearing at the gates with spectral fingers. The River Styx had reversed its flow, its waters crashing against the barriers that had once kept the dead contained.

And the statue—

The statue was gone.

In its place stood a single asphodel, its petals the color of fresh bruises. Lirael plucked it, the stem snapping with a sound like a breaking neck.

"Call your judges," she said, crushing the flower in her fist. Pulp dripped between her fingers like congealed shadows. "Let's see whose side the dead choose."

IV: The New Covenant

The first mortal died at dawn.

Not quietly in bed, not screaming on a battlefield—but kneeling in a freshly plowed field, her calloused hands buried in upturned earth as she whispered Lirael’s name like a prayer. When they found her, the woman’s corpse was smiling, black asphodels blooming from her eye sockets.

The news reached the underworld through cracks in the world—through the sighs of newly arrived shades, through the way living blood now steamed when it hit the Styx’s waters. Lirael felt it in her crown first, the thorns pulsing like a second heartbeat as another mortal voice joined the chorus.

Thanatos intercepted the message from Olympus himself. The scroll burned with divine fire in his hands, its seal broken to reveal not words, but a single golden pomegranate seed—the old summons for a wayward queen.

He crushed it to dust.

“They’ll come for you now,” he said, watching the ashes drift onto the obsidian floor. “Not with thunderbolts. With whispers. With bribes. With the slow poison of mortal doubt.”

Lirael ran a finger along the edge of her throne—newly carved from the remains of Persephone’s statue. The stone still wept thin trails of amber. “Let them.”

Outside, the underworld was changing.

The Fields of Punishment had gone quiet, their tortures abandoned as shades wandered freely for the first time in eternity. The judges’ platforms had sprouted thick vines that choked their eternal flames. And Cerberus…

Cerberus lay at the foot of the throne room steps, all three heads dozing peacefully, the right one still murmuring in human speech.

“She’s dreaming of us,” it had told her last night. “The living girl who died smiling. She walks the borderlands, gathering others.”

Lirael pressed her palm to the cold floor. Somewhere above, in the world of light and breath, she could feel them—small knots of belief forming like pearls around grains of sand.

Thanatos’s shadow fell across her. “You’ll unravel the natural order.”

She caught his wrist, pulling him down to her level. His skin smelled of storm clouds and the copper tang of old coins placed on dead eyes. “No,” she murmured against his mouth. “I’m weaving a new one.”

Final Notes from The Lost Books - Libri Perditi:

This account was etched onto tablets of basalt found buried beneath a crossroads where three suicides were interred. The writing glows faintly at moonrise. Should these shadows stir something in your blood, consider supporting our excavations. Tips purchase lantern oil, subscriptions ward off the things that whisper between the lines, and shares... well. Some stories refuse to stay dead.

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The Lost Books - "Libri Perditi"

Run your fingers along the frayed edges of history—here lie suppressed sonnets, banished ballads, love letters sealed by time. Feel the weight of prose too exquisite to survive. These words outlived their authors. Unfold them.

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