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Planet 9

The planet of the angels

By Yashaya WardPublished 5 years ago 6 min read

”The gates of Hell have had been busted open, and all the demons had Taken over Planet Earth So then, The Four Horsemen had no choice but to destroy Earth completely!. “All The humans had died, so the souls that had faith and believed went to heaven while the ones who didn’t stayed, and then the ones confused went to the planet of lost souls.!” Castile Exclaims Loudly. “shh, we’re trying to sleep Here!” Asmadine The daughter of the angel Uriel Shouted Angrily From her Top Cloud bed From across the golden room. I looked over at her Fiery Red eyes and knew she was about to explode. “You’ve literally been talking for three hours straight without tire!” She added. Castile looked completely offended, and said in a sassy voice “Well EXCUSE me for trying Educate the youngsters” He Replied back. BONG! the sudden Bang against Door startled everyone at once. “It’s the Time of rest now, sleep.” The angel Guard said in a stern voice. Every since The Nephilim Kind tried to overthrow Our kingdom by firstly killing off future Warrior angels , we’ve been giving Guards at our door.

The lights went out, and whilst everyone did the motion of sleeping I’ve prolonged doing so, seeing as I was quite restless. I couldn’t stop thinking about my angel trials seeing as it was the most important day for an angel warrior. The trials consist of A series of tests of my angel power, if I past I can start my journey with hand to hand combat, but if I fail it would be back to square one and that will be embarrassing. Since I was the daughter of one of the greatest warrior angels everyone expected much of me. I Rolled over; sat up ever so quietly then threw my feet over the cloud of bed; pressing my feet against the cold floor of the Large room, and made a quick short beeline toward my station. There it was, sitting on my dresser shining through the glass case was my heart shaped necklace locket. The Glowing bright color of gold right in the center of the heart, gets brighter as my angel power calls to it. I quickly unlock the case by blowing on it lightly Then reaching out grabbing it quickly, I quietly run past The other 19 sleeping angels. While clutching my locket That My father had given me, ‘Raphael.’ Before going on his own mission, He Said To Keep It Safe Because It Will Help Me Complete my Mission, then I will ascend to heaven, Also It Helps Me Fall Asleep Faster. So I put it around my neck, And went back to my cloud and went into sleepmode.

“YOU WILL DIE ,DIE !” The Hideous creature hissed. The smell of Burnt flesh filled My Nostrils, as I struggle to Free myself from the his claws. “LET GO OF ME!” WHOOSH I shot out my angel power but it had no effect on the Beast, It’s claws dig deeper and deeper into my skin. I felt the world dift away, as my body gets heavier and heavier then....... “JESSIEL , Get up ! Have you forgotten The trials?” I quickly bolted upright, drenched in sweat.“Hail Mary how long have I’ve been out?” I Asked. “About 20 celestials Now” she Answered. That’s all I needed Before I quickly got Ready. I walked through the holy castle hall As quick as possible to The golden staircase , leading Outside too The Garden. as I descend I feel about An hundred eyes on me, Judging Me But the one I feel the most heat from is Him; Azeikiel.

About Azeikiel

(The only angel to be a offspring of an human and And An Powerful archangel “Azarel.” His Father was deceive By Jezebel, Who wanted do nothing more but Rule the planet that was once call earth and cost pain and suffering. The Rest of his kind, Nephilims were casted out of Plant Nine and onto Earth that is now Hell where his Mother jezebel Now Resides. In the end, Azarel Tried to Right his wrongs and Turn Azeikiel over to the Thrones (Higher Hierarchy Angels). They accept the baby, seeing as azeikiel was still half angel. But For his father the damage has all ready been down so they casted him out. every since then azeikiel have been living Here on planet Nine: The planet of the angels.)

I’ve Finally reached the bottom of the Stairs And walked outside in The Yard, Toward the Large crowd of Nervous Angels awaiting their Turn. I Spotted Miguel, The warrior chief Flying about in our ever blue skies looking down and watching the angel trials from a great distance. ‘Hm, will I ever be as great as him one day?’ I Questioned myself.“You Angels got a lot of nerve.” I was suddenly pulled away from my thoughts as I turned around and came face to face with a pair of Dark eyes full of hatred. My once happy, and nervous mood was completely ruined With his Negative energy. Every since I was an Young angel, Azeikiel had always had This dark aura around him. “ what are you doing here?, This is angel trials.” I replied truly confused. He Replied “ I have an better idea, you just worry passing, and strengthening your powers” He take a couple of steps Forward and whisper closely to my ear “cause your gonna need it” and with that he turns around and disappear into the crowd. “What was that all about?” Castile asked while him and Asmadine approaches me from behind. I turn to Face Them, “Honestly I don’t know.” Asmadine gets closer toward my face; her Red eyes examining my face , then she asks “well what did he say exactly?” Now really concerned. “He says I need to worry about strengthening my angelic powers, cause I’m going to need it.” I replied unamused. This really sets Asmadine off, Her white hair immediately turns Red. “ oh boy he done did it now” Castile added. His Ocean like eyes gleamed with excitement. “ Where is he? I would love to give that half breed a piece of my mind, I mean we are The daughters and sons of the strongest warrior archangels for crying out loud.” She finishes. I stand there and brainstorm for a bit. “Hey!, You guys let’s go! Jessiel your up come on” Chief shouted impatiently.

Jessiel

I passed the angel trials with passing colors and so did the rest of my Acquaintances. “ Yes we did it!” Castile said happily in a child-like manner. “Yes we did” Asmadine added proudly. There was an great heavenly feast in The left wing that evening after the Trials were over to celebrate. All of the angels had worked together to set up and decorate the Left wing. Me, Asmadine, and Castile all stayed behind in the Resting chambers while the rest of the Angels headed down. I Stared at my Human form for a bit in my holy mirror, pressed An Golden silk dress against myself “ How does this one look?” I asked. Both Castile and Asmadine let out a deep sigh, “I’ve told you an hundred times you look stunning in any dress” Castile said in a irritated voice. “Darling I’m hungry and missing out on the holy feast, just throw that one on and come on. Besides that one really bring out your eyes and dull Hair, plus it looks good with that hideous locket” Asmadine said in a teasing voice. “ HEY, It was my father’s “ I replied. She opens the door and then turn back to me with a smirk on her face, “just Teasing “ and with that walks out. I hurriedly throw on my dress; curled my hair with the heat from my hand and then put on my locket, me and Castile started making our way down the steps. Little did we know, that would all be the last time we would feast together.

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